读后续写微技能训练-修辞手法(Simile明喻)课件.ppt

1、读后续写微技能训练读后续写微技能训练修辞手法修辞手法明喻明喻(Simile)Figure of speech(修辞手法)修辞手法(figure of speech)是根据表达需要，运用有效的语言手段来提高语言的表达效果，使语言表达具有准确性、鲜明性和生动性的语言运用方式。恰当地使用修辞手段，可以使文章更加生动，更具有表现力，蕴意丰富，引人入胜。常用的修辞手法有：夸张(Exaggeration)、明喻(Simile)、暗喻(Metaphor)、拟人(Personification)、平行法(Parallelism)、头韵(Alliteration)、对比(Contrast)、矛盾修辞法(Oxym

2、oron)、双关(Pun)、移情(Empathy)等。Simile a figure of speech comparing two unlike things,oftenintroduced with the words“like”or“as”.Her smile is as bright as the sun.Her smile is bright like the sun.Simile(明喻)Forrest Gump 阿甘正传My mommaalways said,“Lifeis like a box ofchocolaes.Youneverknowwhatyoure gonnaget.

3、”A room without books is a body without a soul.like没有书的房间，如同没有灵魂的躯体。Were like two peas in a pod.我们就像豆荚里的两颗豌豆。Examples of simile from the textbooks1.It seemed as if the world was at an end.(M1U4）2.Our legs were so heavy and cold that they felt like blocksof ice.(M1U3)3.The lakes shone like glass in t

4、he setting sun and lookedwonderful.(M1U3)4.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves.(M1U4)5.The country,covered with cherry tree flowers,looks asthough it is covered with pink snow.(M3U1)6.Why,look at him.He eats like a wolf.(M3U3)7.Long ago Dr Yuan had a dream about rice plants as tall asso

5、rghum.Each ear of rice was as big as an ear of corn andeach grain of rice was as huge as a peanut.(M4U2)Comparison微风吹来，树叶摇动，灯光闪烁。The wind blew,the leaves shook and the lights flashed.A light breeze blew,swaying the tree branches and making the rays of light glimmer and dance as if there was a fairta

6、le world hidden deep within.清清的泉水潺潺地流着。The clear spring is flowing.Ripping crystals streams stretched away into the distance from the towering bluffs(悬崖)like the beautiful streamers(飘带)of a fairy maid.The appilication of simile常见的比喻词：like,基本构成：本体+比喻词+喻体as,as if(though),A is 1.My love is like a red r

7、ose.simileto B what C is to D2.My love is as beautiful as his love.3.The baby is like his father.4.The pen is to a writer what the gun is to a fighter.simile5.The man is as tall as a giraffe.simile6.He appears as if he had known the truth.7.He ran as fast as possible.8.Every time you feel like smoki

8、ng,dont reach for a cigarret.9.I couldnt move my legs.It was as if they were stuck to the floor.simileSome patterns of simile“as”pattern?She is as timid as a mouse.她胆小如鼠。?He treats his kid as the apple of the eye.他把他的孩子当掌上明珠。?The snow was as thick as a blanket.雪厚得像毯子。?A father rushed to his sons sch

9、ool,only to discover the building was as flat as a pancake.一位父亲冲进他儿子的学校，却发现那幢楼像一个薄饼一样平。Some patterns of simile“what”pattern?Reading is to the mind what food is to the body.读书与思想的关系就好比食物与健康的关系。?Honesty is to businessman what water is to fish.诚实对商人就像水对鱼一样重要。?Dreams are to people what wings are to bird

10、s.梦之于人，犹如翅膀之于鸟。?Railway is to transportation what blood is to mans body.铁路对交通的重要性就如血液对人的重要性。Some patterns of simile“as if”pattern?He picks out the lace of the shoe and eats it as if it were spaghetti.他挑出鞋带，像吃意大利面一样吃。?He tries cutting and chewing the bottom of the shoe as if it were teh finest steak.

11、他试着割咬鞋底，好像这是最好的牛排。?The woman made him fetch and carry just as if he was a great Newfoundland dog.这个女人叫他做这做那，简直把他当作一条纽芬兰的大狗。Some patterns of simile“like”pattern?My mind goes round and round like the earth.我的心像地球一样转来转去?He was like a cat on hot bricks before his driving test.他在驾照考试前就像热锅上的蚂蚁。?Jenny and

12、I were like peas and carrots.我和珍妮形影不离。?Love is like the wind,which you cant see but can feel.爱就像风，你看不见却能感觉到。?She hung her head like a dying flower.“like”pattern?Living without an aim is like _.sailing without a compassThe stars in the night sky sparkled like _.diamondsThe wind howled like _.an angry

13、 liona beanHe lay under the quilt in a long shape like _,turning on his side to face the door.?Searching for one man in this big city is like looking for a needle in a haystack_.请用明喻改写下列句子1.月亮一会钻进云里，一会儿又从云里钻出来。The moon got into the clouds for a while,and then got out of the clouds.The moon was like

14、a naughty child,now into the clouds,and then out of the clouds.2.比赛马上就要开始了，小力的心情非常紧张。The game was about to start.Xiaoli was very nervous.As the game was about to start,Xiao lis heart was like a bow on a string.3.微风吹过阳光照耀的湖面，又反射出点点金光。The breeze was blowing on the sunny lake and reflecting a little golden light.When the breeze was blowing over the lake,it reflected a little golden light,just like the stars shining all over the sky.