上海中考英语作文专题指导.doc

1、上海中考英语作文专题指导一、中考英语作文写作模式“四审四注意”写作法“四审”：一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础；二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you 或第三人称she, he, it或they为主；三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who，when，where，what，how，

2、why等要素展开。“四注意”：一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句，I think / I hope / I believe that 等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；三注意适当运用连接词，如on one hand, on the other hand; whats more; however等，这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语

3、言和内容没问题, 做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”，更不能乱“发明”, 一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得, 以80词左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析1. 时态错误2. 时间状语错误3. 名词单复数错误4. 动词误用5. 语态错误6 词性误用7. 介词误用8 某些搭配和惯用法误用F 中考英语总复习专项训练题写作专项训练A. 中考英语热门写作话题1

4、. 关于学习Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “How to learn English well”. （以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) When did you start learning English? (in . / . years ago)How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read

5、 English every day .) What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar .)_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2. 关于兴趣Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My interest”. （以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) What is your interest? Why do you like it

6、 so much?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 3. 关于写事Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Unforgettable memories”. （以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) What is your unforgettable memory? Why do you think it is unforgettable?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

7、_ _ _ _ 4. 关于计划Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My plan for summer holiday”. （以“我的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday? Give at least two points._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 5. 关

8、于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My good friend”. （以“我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Who is your good friend? What do you often do with him or her? Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 6. 关于写

9、人Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My English teacher”. （以“我的英语老师”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Who is your English teacher? Do you like him or her? Why do you like him or her? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 7. 关于英语Write a passage of at

10、least 60 words about the topic “I changed my ways of learning English”. （以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) How did you learn English in the past? Why do you change your ways of learning English? How do you learn English now?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

11、 _ _ _ 8. 关于旅行Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An unforgettable trip”. (以“一次难忘的旅行”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Where did you go? What did you do during that trip? Why do you think it is unforgettable?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 9. 关

12、于动物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite animal”. （以“我最喜欢的动物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Whats your favourite animal? Why do you like it so much? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 10. 关于网上购物Write a passage of at least 60 words ab

13、out the topic “Online shopping is changing the way of our life”. （以“网上购物正在改变我们的生活方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Whats your view on online shopping? What are its advantages and dis-advantages? Please give one or two suggestions to your friends if they l

14、ove online shopping._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 11. 关于学科Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite subject”. （以“我最喜欢的学科”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Whats your favourite subject? Why do you like it best? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

15、 _ 12. 关于变化Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Changes in myself”. （以“我的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference. （以下问题可供参考） Have you had any changes in yourself since you came to the middle school? Which are the most important changes? (Give at least 2 examples) What do you think of the changes?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 13. 关于节日Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The Lantern Festival”. （以“元宵节”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容供参考） Do you like the Lantern Fe