读后续写作具细精析讲义-2023届高三英语写作专项.docx
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1、读后续写作具细精析讲义:妈妈的育儿奇招读后续写题目My mother was a supporter of physical punishment, but for all her talking she has never spanked (打屁股) my siblings and me only once. Instead she found ways of punishment that left a morelastingmemory than giving us a spanking. One of the most memorable of these occasions occu
2、rred when I was four.In the early 70s my mother attended college during the day and I was in daycare. One day at daycare watched an extremely tired mother attempt to pick up her daughter. The little girl asked, “Momma, are we going to McDonalds for dinner?” The mother replied, “Honey, not tonight.Mo
3、mmahas to run a few errands (差事) and then we have to go home and cook dinner for Daddy.” “But I wanna go.” “Susie, I said not tonight. Maybe, if you are a good girl, we can go tomorrow.” Susie immediately dropped to the floor, kicking andscreaming, “I want to go to McDonalds.”No amount of pleading (
4、恳求)or scolding her mother tried stopped Susies tantrum (发脾气) . Finally her mothergave in, “Okay, Susie, lets go to McDonalds. ”Susie stopped yelling and smiling she grabbed her mothers hand and they left. To say I was amazed would be inaccurate; I was delighted that anything I wanted could be had by
5、 throwing a tantrum.That day my mother picked me up early from daycare because we were going to a store to purchase some Christmas items. I was excited by the lights and decorations, and as we walked through the toy section on the way to the counter, I saw a toy I had to have. It was a white and red
6、 telephone whose bells rang as it was pulled along on a string. Looking lovingly up at my mother I asked, “Mama, can I have that telephone?”She replied, “Baby, not now, but if you are a good girl, maybe Santa will bring it to you.” “But Mama, I want that telephone right now. ”Her eyes narrowed and h
7、er hand tightened on mine. “Becky, you cant have that telephone today, but if you misbehave, you can have a spanking.”Paragraph 1:By now we were standing in the long Holiday line to pay the bill, and I figured it was a good chance.Paragraph 2:“Mama, stop. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded.续写答案Parag
8、raph 1:By now we were standing in the long Holiday line to pay the bill, and I figured it was a good chance.Carefully taking a step back from my mother, I immediately dropped to the floor kicking and screaming just like Susie did, “I Want The Telephone!” The commotion instantly drew all the eyes on
9、us. Despite my mothers efforts to lift me up, I kept rolling on the ground, thinking of the sweet prospect of getting the telephone. Then my bubble was burst. Out of the blue, my mother fell beside me and before I knew it, her sharp cries filled the shop, “I want a new car, a new house and a well-be
10、haved Daughter!” I, panicked.Paragraph 2:“Mama, stop. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded.Crawling toward my mother, I tried to pull her up. But she was immovable, her cries echoing. At that moment, the crowds staring seemed to have burnt a hole on my back. “What should I do?” I questioned myself, us
11、eless tears dripping on the floor. In desperation, I yielded and apologized sincerely, “Mama, I am sorry. Please get up. I dont want the telephone now.” After ensuring I was serious, she stood up, dusted herself off and returned to the queue as if nothing had happened. She didnt utter another word y
12、et the silence felt heavier than the hardest spanking.续写精析-初见惊喜,读时动容,过后难忘书写无暇,逻辑流畅,句式多样,用词准确是满分读后续写的四条基本线。但上述四点全部做到也只能保证拿到20+的分数。如何才能拿满分?用三个词汇概括:wows, moves, echoes.三个词代表三个层面:初见惊喜,读时动容,过后难忘。想做到这三点,需要:1.在写作时刻意凝练自己的语言,时刻寻找有新意的替代表达(基于准确);2.构建让人共鸣的故事情节,人物刻画要活泼生动;3.结尾的方式尤须巧思,力求在升华主题时给读者留下深刻印象。Paragraph 1
13、:By now we were standing in the long Holiday line to pay the bill, and I figured it was a good chance.(首段剧情需根据两段提示语决定首尾。第一段提示语,“此时我们站在长长的队列中等待结账,而我想这是一个好机会。”第二段提示语“妈,别。妈,起。”我哭着请求道。那么首段续写的关键就在于回答好两个问题:1. 这是主人公Becky做什么的好机会?2. 妈妈怎么跑地上去了?第一个问题。原文以主人公在Daycare托儿所时的一段经历铺垫。Becky在托儿所时看到fellow baby, Susie为了去麦
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