5陈波书面凤凰杯课件.ppt

1、How to beautify your writing（美化你的作文）（美化你的作文）Haikou NO.1 Senior High School -By Chen BoLearning goals:（学习目标）（学习目标）1、Students should master:Rules of English writing How to beautify your writing What makes good writing How to assess writing The differences between score“15”and score“20”2、Polish the wri

2、ting Summarize in your own words:Rules of English writing How to beautify your writing What makes good writing How to assess writing The differences between score“15”and score“20”Rules of English writing 1.ppt How to beautify your writing 2.pptWhat makes good writing3.ppt How to assess your writing4

3、.ppt 一、控制性训练：一、控制性训练：学生习作一（上学生习作一（上）（根据习作一的文字要求，全班美化习作一）根据习作一的文字要求，全班美化习作一）Is it formal or informal writing?_.Please score the writing._.Dear Headmaster，The moment I hear that you are looking for host families for the British students,Im writing to recommend myself(用介词用介词+动名动名词短语改写词短语改写).My house li

4、es in a quiet place.Its big and comfortable.It has everything you need（用分词和定语从句改写）（用分词和定语从句改写）.Besides public transportation,our car can take them to some interesting places.一、控制性训练：学生习作一（下）一、控制性训练：学生习作一（下）I speak English so fluently that Im sure I have no difficulty talking with them(用倒装用倒装句改写并改良句改

5、写并改良).Besides,we hosted two British students last year.We gained experience（用定语从句改写）（用定语从句改写）.And my mothers cooking is wonderful.They can have good Chinese food（用动词（用动词equal及状语从句改写）及状语从句改写）.I will be happy if I have the chance to host them again(用感叹句和被动语态来改写用感叹句和被动语态来改写).Looking forward to your rep

6、ly.Yours，Li Hua二、半开放训练二、半开放训练 学生习作二（上）学生习作二（上）（根据习作二的文字要求，第一、二组同学美化（根据习作二的文字要求，第一、二组同学美化第一段）第一段）Is it formal or informal writing?_.Please score the writing._.Dear Tom，Im Li Hua.We planned to go to Beijing together for our travelling（用（用feast ones eyes on sth 或其它高级短语改写）或其它高级短语改写）.I thought I could go

7、 with you(用双重否定改写用双重否定改写).However,one of my old friends from New York will come to my house next weekend(用表示用表示“突然变化突然变化”句型改写句型改写).Im really sorry to tell you that I can not leave next weekend.二、半开放训练二、半开放训练 学生习作二（下）学生习作二（下）（根据习作二的文字要求，第三、四组同学美化（根据习作二的文字要求，第三、四组同学美化第二段）第二段）You know I like travelling

8、 very much(用高用高级短语改写级短语改写).And I want to go to Beijing with you(用表达感情色彩的句型改写用表达感情色彩的句型改写).Can we go to Beijing together on Dec 17,2011?Are you free that day？(用句型用句型what if和状和状语从句来改写语从句来改写)Please tell me your decision as soon as possible.11)Im waiting for your reply.Yours，Li Hua 三、开放性训练三、开放性训练1 学生习作三

9、（上）学生习作三（上）6.ppt短文改错短文改错,然后然后第第1组美化组美化1-3句；第句；第2组美化组美化4-6句。句。Is it formal or informal writing?_.Please score the writing._.Dear Ms.Smith，Im Li Hua.I am the Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School.Our school is near your university.Im writing to invite you to be our judge at our English

10、speech contest.It will take place on June 15.It will start from 2：00 pm to 5:00 pm.三、开放性训练三、开放性训练1 学生习作三（下）学生习作三（下）(短文改错短文改错,然后然后第第3、4组组美化美化7-10句）句）Ten students will give their speeches on the topic“Man and Nature”.We hope that you will accept our invitation if you have time.Please call me at 448766

11、55 if you have any questions.Im looking forward to your reply.With best wishes，Li Hua(老师范文三）（上）老师范文三）（上）Dear Ms.Smith，As Chairman of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School,which is close to your university,we sincerely invite you,an expert in English language,to be a judge at our English speech c

12、ontest to be held in Room 501 in our school on June 15.Planned to start at 2：00 pm,its supposed to last for about three hours.(老师范文三）（下）老师范文三）（下）A platform is provided for ten students who will present their best eloquence(口才口才),delivering their speeches on the given topic“Man and Nature”.We will be

13、 greatly honored if you will accept our invitation.Dont hesitate to contact me at 44876655 if you have any questions.Im looking forward to your early reply.With best wishes Li Hua三、开放性训练三、开放性训练2 学生习作四（上）学生习作四（上）7.ppt短文改错短文改错,然后然后第第1组美化组美化1-2句，第句，第2组组3-5句；句；Is it formal or informal writing?_.Please s

14、core the writing._.Good morning,ladies and gentlemen，Now it is common that high school students have their blogs on the Internet.Some says it has bad and good point.On the one hand，it can provide room to show themselves and to cut their pressure.But on the other hand，it will take them a lot of time

15、to do their blogs.It is a waste of time and will effect their schoolwork三、三、开放性训练开放性训练2 学生习作四（下）学生习作四（下）8.ppt 改错再美化短文，改错再美化短文，第第3组组6-8句；第句；第4组组9-11句句 For me，it is a good thing.Nowadays Internet is important in our life,so we can see its effect.More important，open a blog needs abilities like writing，

16、drawing，using computer so on.Blog is not harm.Your attitude harms（用强调句改写）（用强调句改写）.We should have the advantages and avoid disadvantages.Thank you!(老师范文四）（上）老师范文四）（上）Good morning,ladies and gentlemen，Nowadays，it is regarded common that many high school students have their own blogs on the Internet.So

17、meone holds the view that its a double-edged sword(双刃剑双刃剑).On the one hand，it can not only provide a colorful platform to show their talents but also a way to release their pressure.But on the other hand，it will take up a lot of time and use up energy to manage their blogs so it is a waste of time a

18、nd will greatly affect their schoolwork.(老师范文四）（下）老师范文四）（下）As far as I am concerned,this is a trend.There is no denying that the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our life.More importantly，opening and running an eye-catching blog inspires their various abilities such as writing，d

19、rawing,designing,being skillful at computer and so on.Blog itself is of little harm.It is your attitude towards it that matters.We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.Thank you!What have we learned in this lesson?Homework:1、Polish Writing 5 with advanced words and expressions.2、App

20、reciate the samples given.Thank you for yourhard work!Dear Sir,(老师作文一）老师作文一）(上）上）Im writing sincerely to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students.Lying in a beautiful and quiet neighbor-hood,our spacious,fully-equipped apartment answers all their needs.Apart

21、from the convenient public transportation,our private car will be available to take them to the nearby places of interest if needed.So fluently do I speak English that definitely I will have no difficulty communicating with them.(老师范文一）（下）老师范文一）（下）Furthermore,we hosted two British students last year

22、,through which weve gained lots of experience.Moreover,no one can equal my mother in cooking,which can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them.Looking forward to your reply.Yo

23、urs，Li Hua(老师范文二）（上）老师范文二）（上）Dear Tom，According to our plan made last week,we are expecting to feast our eyes on(饱览饱览)the well-known tourist attractions in Beijing next weekend!But it happens that one of my old friends from New York will come and stay in my house.Im terribly sorry that I cant make i

24、t next weekend.(老师范文二）（下）老师范文二）（下）As you know,I am keen on travelling and how I wish for a journey to go to Beijing with you!What if I arrange it on December 10,2011 if you are available then？Please keep me aware of your decision as soon as possible.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua 三、开放

25、性训练三、开放性训练3 学生习作五（上）学生习作五（上）Is it formal or informal writing?_.Please score the writing._.Early rising is good in many way.First,it help to keep fit.We all need fresh air.But air is very fresh in the morning.Besides,morning exercise can improve our health.Second,it can help our studies.In the mornin

26、g we can learn quickly.三、开放性训练三、开放性训练3 学生习作五（下）学生习作五（下）Third,it can let us to plan our work for the day.We can work well with a plan(可用可用双重否定来改写双重否定来改写).Early rising can also give us enough time to prepare for work.So we say those who always get up late should make effort to get up early.(老师范文五）（上）老

27、师范文五）（上）Early Rising Early rising benefits us in many ways.Firstly,dont forget to take a deep breath of fresh air,which helps to keep us fit.But air is never so fresh as early in the morning.Besides,there is no denying that taking morning exercises will make a great difference to our health.(老师范文五）（下）老师范文五）（下）As the saying goes,early bird catches worms.Its strongly recommended that those who always get up late should make great efforts to rise early.