Englishwriting-铜仁.ppt

1、English Writing by Chen Xuemin from Suzhou Who do you admire most in your family?What have you done for your mother?Have you ever cooked for your mother?Free TalkToday,lets cook fried rice for our dearest mothers.假如明天是你妈妈的生日，你想为妈妈做一份炒饭，假如明天是你妈妈的生日，你想为妈妈做一份炒饭，请根据所给内容提示，写一篇你做炒饭的过程。请根据所给内容提示，写一篇你做炒饭的过程

2、。参考词汇：参考词汇：1.fried rice cooked meat oil salt green onions(葱葱)2.cook cut put fry add3.carefully finely(细微地细微地)slowly lightly要要 求：求：1.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；2.书写工整、规范；书写工整、规范；3.根据所给内容及参考词汇，可适当发挥。根据所给内容及参考词汇，可适当发挥。Writing【2014年铜仁中考英语作文年铜仁中考英语作文】What steps do you follow when doing writing?Discuss

3、Writing steps1.Consider it carefully4.Form a passage5.Beautify your writing3.List the main points2.Draw up an outlineStyle(体裁体裁)：_Person(人称人称)：_Tense(时态时态):_说明文说明文第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时据实描写：据实描写：适当发挥：适当发挥：炒饭过程炒饭过程炒饭细节、妈妈感受炒饭细节、妈妈感受 审审Consider it carefully 文章结构文章结构1.beginning点题，概括全文点题，概括全文2.body记述，层次分明记述

4、，层次分明3.ending小结，呼应主题小结，呼应主题 构构Draw up an outline 构构Draw up an outline把握文章框架把握文章框架 结构。开头和结尾的句子要注意简洁、漂亮。结构。开头和结尾的句子要注意简洁、漂亮。Tomorrow is my mothers birthday.I want to make fried rice for her in order to express my love.Now the fried rice is readyBeginningEndingMain BodyThe process of cooking fried rice

5、 列列List the main points 列列Match the picture with its descriptioncut some cooked meat finelyput some oil in the panfry the meat lightlyadd the rice slowly and fry it for a few secondsadd some salt and green onions Fried rice is ready！列列List the main pointscut some cooked meat finelyput some oil in th

6、e panfry the meat lightlyadd the rice slowly and fry it for a few secondsadd some salt and green onions Fried rice is ready！连连Form a passage Tomorrow is my mothers birthday.I want to make fried rice for her.I am sure I can cook it well.Now the fried rice is ready.BeginningEndingMain BodyNow let me s

7、how you how to cook it.First,cut some cooked meat finely.Next,I need to put some oil in the pan.Then fry the meat lightly.After that,I need to add the rice slowly.Fry it for a few minutes.Finally,add some salt and green onions.连连Some conjunctionsl表并列：表并列：and,besides,in addition,whats more,l表转折：表转折：b

8、ut,yet,however,on the contrary,l表因果关系表因果关系：because,so,therefore,as a resultl表先后顺序表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finallyl表时间关系表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,l表列举说明表列举说明：for example,for instance,such asl发表观点发表观点：in my opinion,to my understanding,from my point of view,l表总结陈词表总结陈词：in general,in

9、all,in a word,generally speaking 美美Beautify your writingTomorrow is my mothers birthday.I want to make fried rice for her .I am sure I can cook it very well.First,cut some cooked meat very finely.Next,I need to put some oil in the pan.Then fry the meat lightly.After that,I need to add the rice slowl

10、y.Fry it for a few minutes.Finally,add some salt and green onions.Now the fried rice is ready.Now let me show you how to cook it.in order to express my loveI hope my mother will enjoy it.美美Ways to beautify your writing1.1.善用各种词汇善用各种词汇2.2.活用多种句型活用多种句型3.3.妙用各关联词妙用各关联词4.巧用引文谚语巧用引文谚语l1.审审l2.构构l3.列列l4.连连

11、l5.美美文体、文体、时态、时态、人称人称连字成句、连句成文连字成句、连句成文变换句型，使文增色变换句型，使文增色把握结构、增加细节把握结构、增加细节Summary列出要点、注意重点列出要点、注意重点Rome is not built in a day.Tips:l1.1.卷面工整卷面工整l2.2.条理清晰条理清晰l3.3.多读美文多读美文l4.4.积累素材积累素材Practice makes perfect!假设你校为了配合创建假设你校为了配合创建“文化校园高效课堂文化校园高效课堂”活动，活动，最近以最近以“学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案?”?”为题为题做了

12、一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成,但许多学生反但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示提示，以，以“Think“Think before you search onlinebefore you search online”为题为题用英语写一篇短文用英语写一篇短文。Have a try2014年苏州市中考英语作文年苏州市中考英语作文注意：注意：1 1.词数词数9090左右。短文的开头已为你写好左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数不计入总词数；2 2.短文须包括所有要点，不要遂词翻译短文须包括所

13、有要点，不要遂词翻译,可适当发挥可适当发挥,使使短文连贯、通顺；短文连贯、通顺；3 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Think before you search onlineSome students now have a new use for the Internet helping them with their homework.But different people have different ideas about itHave a try2014年苏州市中考英语作文年苏州市中考英语作文1.Finish off your writing.2.Put it on the wall to share with others.Homework