邵逸夫基础写作应对技巧1.ppt

1、基础写作应对技巧基础写作应对技巧五句话作文：五句话作文：1.审题审题(找准时态找准时态、要求）、要求）2.布局结构布局结构 3.翻译要点翻译要点4.整合信息（句型、连词）整合信息（句型、连词）5.全文检查（信息点、语法表达）全文检查（信息点、语法表达）五句话作文：五句话作文：1.审题审题(找准时态找准时态、要求）、要求）2.布局结构布局结构3.翻译要点（句型）翻译要点（句型）4.整合信息（连词）整合信息（连词）5.全文检查（信息点、语法表达）全文检查（信息点、语法表达）根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平。姓名姓名 邵逸夫（Run Run Shaw）生卒年生卒年 190

2、7-2014出生地出生地 浙江宁波事业事业1.19岁进入电影行业，并对其逐渐产生了极大的兴趣。2.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当 时亚洲最大的电影制造商。3.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000 部电影。4.颠峰时，仅1974年一年就有50部电影面世。慈善慈善 1.热衷慈善，热心教育事业；2.很多大学建筑都以他的名字命名。Tense:Past 根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平。姓名姓名 邵逸夫（Run Run Shaw）生卒年生卒年 1907-2014出生地出生地 浙江宁波事业事业1.19岁进入电影行业，并对其逐渐产生了极大的

3、兴趣。2.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当 时亚洲最大的电影制造商。3.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000 部电影。4.颠峰时，仅1974年一年就有50部电影面世。慈善慈善 1.热衷慈善，热心教育事业；2.很多大学建筑都以他的名字命名。出生日期，出生日期，出生地，身份出生地，身份Tense:Past 卒卒合成合成3句话句话合成合成1句话句话合成合成1句话句话1 1句句1 1句句1 1句句根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平根据以下信息，介绍邵逸夫的生平。姓名姓名 邵逸夫（Run Run Shaw）生卒年生卒年 1907-2014出生地出生地 浙江宁波事业事业1

4、.19岁进入电影行业，并对其逐渐产生了极大的兴趣。2.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当 时亚洲最大的电影制造商。3.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000 部电影。4.颠峰时，仅1974年一年就有50部电影面世。慈善慈善 1.热衷慈善，热心教育事业；2.很多大学建筑都以他的名字命名。be born in/on卒卒 die/pass away 出生日期，出生日期，出生地，身份出生地，身份作文中出现的“高频”错误 Lets correct mistakes!1.表达时间和地点at 1907,at 2014at Ningbo City,Zhejiang Provi

5、nce2.19岁时When he 19 years At 19 yearsinininZhejiang Province,Ningbo CityWhen he was 19 years oldAt the age of 19,he3.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当时亚洲最大的电影制造商。He co-founded Shaw Brothers Ltd.with his elder brother and became the biggest producer of movies at that time.4.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000部电影。Co

6、mpany around Singapore,Shanghai and HK and produced more than 1000 movies.成为and it became谁成为？是人还是公司？produced（）inCompany in Singapore,Shanghai and HK producedmore than 1000 movies.1.19岁进入电影行业，并对其逐渐产生了极大的兴趣。进入产生兴趣 enter,go intobecome interested indevelop an interest inAt the age of 19,he went into the

7、 film industry.He gradually became interested in the movie business.When he was 19,he went into the filmindustry and gradually became interestedin the movie business.2.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当时亚洲最大的电影制造商。n共同创立共同创立n电影制造商电影制造商In 1958,he established Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother

8、.It was the biggest producer of movies at that time.establish with/co-foundwithfilm maker/producer of movies In 1958,he established Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother，_was the biggest producer of movies at that time.which2.1958年与哥哥共同创立了“邵氏兄弟有限公司”，成为当时亚洲最大的电影制造商。n共同创立共同创立n电影制造商电影制造商In

9、 1958,he established Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother.It was the biggest producer of movies at that time.establish with/co-foundwithfilm maker/producer of movies In 1958,he established Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother，_was the biggest producer of movies at that ti

10、me.which3.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000部电影。Show s companies in.made more than 1000 movies since their establishment.It produced 50 films in 1974 at its peak time.4.颠峰时，仅1974年一年就有50部电影面世。信息整合信息整合超过1,000部电影more than 1,000 movies颠峰时at peak timeShaw Show s companies in Shanghai,Singapore and Hong Kong made

11、 more than 1000 movies since their establishment,_.with peak production at 50 films in 19743.邵氏公司遍布上海、新加坡和香港，制作了超过1,000部电影。Show s companies in.made more than 1000 movies since their establishment.It produced 50 films in 1974 at its peak time.4.颠峰时，仅1974年一年就有50部电影面世。信息整合信息整合超过1,000部电影more than 1,000

12、movies颠峰时at peak timeShaw Show s companies in Shanghai,Singapore and Hong Kong made more than 1000 movies since their establishment,_.with its peak production at 50 films in 1974慈善慈善 1.热衷慈善，热心教育事业；2.很多大学建筑都以他的名字命名 With a passion for education,Run Run Shaw devoted himself to eharity and many building

13、s are named after him in a lot of universities and colleges.热衷慈善a passion for;charity 以命名be named afternHe devoted all his life to charity with a passion for education.nMany buildings are name after him in many universities.范文 Run Run Shaw was born in Ningbo city,Zhejiang province in 1907 and passed

14、 away in 2014.At the age of 19,he went into the film industry and gradually developed a keen interest in the movie business.In 1958,he co-founded Shaw Brothers(Hong Kong)Ltd.with his elder brother,which was the biggest producer of movies at that time.Shaw Show s companies in Shanghai,Singapore and H

15、ong Kong made more than 1000 movies since their establishment.With peak production at 50 films in 1974.With a passion for education,Run Run Shaw devoted himself to charity and many buildings are named after him in a lot of universities and colleges.Practice makes perfectn首先，了解熟悉五句话作文要求首先，了解熟悉五句话作文要求

16、n其次，提高组织、整理信息的能力其次，提高组织、整理信息的能力n再再次，练习复合句次，练习复合句打造亮点打造亮点n最后，巧用衔接词语、规范表达最后，巧用衔接词语、规范表达复合句复合句状语从句状语从句定语从句定语从句 主语从句主语从句宾语从句宾语从句表语从句表语从句同位语从句同位语从句名词性从句名词性从句打造亮点打造亮点1.1.复合句复合句2.with2.with3.3.衔接词衔接词打造亮点打造亮点1.1.定语从句定语从句2.with2.with3.3.衔接词衔接词1.Steve Jobs was born in San Francisco on Feb.24,1955.2.Steve Jobs

17、 was the CEO of Apple Inc.1)Steve Jobs _was the CEO of Apple Inc.(定语从句定语从句)who was born in San Francisco on Feb.24,19551.Drinking tea is a good habit for us.2.Drinking tea can improve our health.打造亮点打造亮点1.1.定语从句定语从句2.with2.with3.3.衔接词衔接词Drinking tea,which can improve our health,is a good habit for u

18、s.withCommonGood打造亮点打造亮点1.1.定语从句定语从句2.with2.with3.3.衔接词衔接词我无法继续学习，因为这里太吵了。我无法继续学习，因为这里太吵了。I couldnt go on studying because here was so much noise.I couldnt go on studying _ so much noise here.打造亮点打造亮点1.1.定语从句定语从句2.with2.with3.3.衔接词衔接词那个口袋里揣着三部那个口袋里揣着三部Iphone 6的家伙肯定是土的家伙肯定是土豪。豪。That guy _ must be too

19、 rich.with three Iphone 6 in his pocketbesides，however，for one thingfor another,etc.to begin with,later,meanwhile,finally,etc.while,though,but,on the contrary,etc.打造亮点打造亮点1.1.定语从句定语从句2.with2.with3.3.衔接词衔接词whats more，in addition，表示补充的表示补充的:表示时间顺序的表示时间顺序的:表示转折的表示转折的:打造亮点打造亮点1.1.定语从句定语从句2.with2.with3.3

20、.衔接词衔接词表示举例表示举例:such as,for example,etc.表示强调表示强调:above all,indeed,first of all,etc.表示个人观点表示个人观点:In my opinion,As far as I am concerned,etc.根据句意填上适当的衔接词语根据句意填上适当的衔接词语n What should a journalist remember when he goes out to cover a story?First,he needs to be curious,_ only if he asks many questions can he acquire what he wants to know._,he shouldnt miss the deadline.For one thing,he has to listen for the details;_,he has to prepare for the next question.becauseBesidesfor another