2023新人教版八年级下册《英语》Unit5作文ppt课件.pptx

1、人教版8年级下常考作文主题（Unit 5）Part 1 作文主题以及与本单元的联系Part 2 作文结构与写法Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?单元主题：难忘的事件语言功能：1.讲述过去发生的事情2.能讲故事可能的写作主题：讲述自己的一件难忘的事描述过去某一刻的活动首段：首段：Unit 5：写作主题：写作主题人称：第一人称时态：一般过去时；过去进行时题目分析：1.简介一件过去的事2.重点写这件事发生时，你在做什么。中间：中间：结尾：结尾：事件，时间，地点事件，时间，地点我记得这件事的原因我记得这件事的原因蓝色蓝色 红色红色紫紫

2、色色需要替换的词需要替换的词过渡句过渡句好句子好句子自己一件难忘的事自己一件难忘的事事件发生时，我在做什么。事件发生时，我在做什么。Unit 5：写作主题：写作主题自己一件难忘的事自己一件难忘的事首段：首段：中间：中间：结尾：结尾：事件，时间，地点事件，时间，地点我记得这件事的原因我记得这件事的原因事件发生时，我在做什么。事件发生时，我在做什么。注意：本文以课本2b阅读的事件和主人公为例，An important thing I remembered well was that the world Trade Center was taken down by terrorists.It hap

3、pened on September 11,2001 in New York.我记得很清楚的一件重要的事是世贸中心被恐怖分子摧毁。它发生在2001年9月11日在纽约。When I heard the news of this event,I was working in my office near the two towers.My friend was shouting that a plane hit the two towers.I didnt believe him at first,but then I looked out of the window and realized t

4、hat it was true.People were running and crying in the street.当我听到这个消息时，我正在双子塔附近的办公室工作。当时我的朋友正在大喊一架飞机撞了双子塔。我起初还不相信，但是我看了窗外然后意识到这是真的。人们在大街上哭喊逃命。I remember this event well because I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that.这件事我记得很清楚，因为我太害怕了以至于在那之后我都无法冷静的思考。下面把整篇文章合在一起：注意 在恰当的地方加上连接词连接

5、词，使文章连贯An important thing I remembered well was that the world Trade Center was taken down by terrorists.It happened on September 11,2001 in New York.When I heard the news of this event,I was working in my office near the two towers.Suddenly,my friend was shouting that a plane hit the two towers.I d

6、idnt believe him at first,but then I looked out of the window and realized that it was true.People were running and crying in the street.I remember this event well because I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that.这篇文章比较简单，没有过多的加连接词，注意在描述我的活动时，可以按照时间顺序，当时，突然，起初，然后。Unit 5：写作主题：写作主题

7、自己一件难忘的事自己一件难忘的事Unit 5：写作主题：写作主题描述过去某一刻的活动描述过去某一刻的活动举例：根据提示描述你和你的家人昨天晚上8点的活动。提示：1.你在写作业，你的哥哥在玩电脑游戏。2.你妈妈在做饭，你爸爸在看电视。3.你的爷爷奶奶在聊天，而你的妹妹在和狗狗玩。开头：开头：中间：中间：结尾：结尾：时间+地点+引出话题描述每个人在做什么。注意使用过去进行时和when；while总体评价首段：首段：中间：中间：结尾：结尾：Unit 5：写作主题：写作主题描述过去某一刻的活动描述过去某一刻的活动It was Sunday yesterday.All my families were

8、at home at 8:00.We were doing different things at home.While I was doing my homework,my elder brother was playing computer games.My mother was cooking supper for us when my father was watching TV at that time.Where were my grandparents?They were chatting in the living room.My younger sister was play

9、ing with the little dog.What a happy family!昨天是周日。8点时我家人都在家。我们在做着不同的事情。当我在写作业时，我的哥哥在玩电脑游戏。我妈妈在做饭，同时爸爸在看电视。我的的爷爷奶奶在哪呢？他们在客厅聊天。我的妹妹在和狗狗玩。注意：这一部分要根据题目的要求进行变化。多么幸福的一家呀!下面把整篇文章合在一起：注意 在恰当的地方加上连接词连接词，使文章连贯Unit 5：写作主题：写作主题描述过去某一刻的活动描述过去某一刻的活动It was Sunday yesterday.All my families were at home at 8:00.We w

10、ere doing different things at home.While I was doing my homework,my elder brother was playing computer games.My mother was cooking supper for us when my father was watching TV at that time.Where were my grandparents?They were chatting in the living room.And my younger sister was playing with the little dog.What a happy family!注意在描述两个过去的动作同时发生时，巧妙地用连接词 when 和while