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    1、2023年高中大作文读后续写讲解分析介绍一下,过圣诞节的jason,他和朋友一起如何度过这个特殊的假期呢?先看一下原文,然后如何展开来写?Pumpkin(南瓜)carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field,I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our

    2、pumpkins back home,and as the eldest child I have an advantage I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year,it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother,Jason,was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I was determ

    3、ined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table,with my mom filming the annual event.Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table,hole uppermost,I b

    4、ent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then,as I went on with my task,unwilling to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it,like a cork(软木塞)forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge

    5、 pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.“Im going to set it down,now,”I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was go

    6、ing to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle,but it was no use.“I cant get it out!”I shouted,my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed

    7、 space.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer._The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween._情节推进情节:回到家,“我”和Jason忘记给各自的南瓜称重,就把南瓜瓤弄了出来。在好胜心的趋势下,“我”居然鬼使神差地把头塞进了南瓜里,来证明自己的南瓜够大。情感:心情很开心,希

    8、望能够获得成功。故事高潮情节:能够把头塞到南瓜里让“我”很高兴,但短暂的开心之后,“我”发现自己的头怎么都出不来了。情感:心情特别慌张,想要赶紧离开。第一段段首语:It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.分析:1)“自己”的脑袋在南瓜里困了五六分钟了,感觉像是过了一个世纪。此时的我,内心必然非常焦急,后悔怎么会傻到把头塞进去,着急想赶快逃出来。2)紧急情况下,人们自然而然会想到直接把南瓜切开,头就出来了。但结合前文对“我”很想赢得家庭比赛的描述,就可以明白,“我”肯定不舍得毁了自己精心挑选的南瓜。段首语衔接:1)思考:脑袋被卡

    9、在南瓜里出不来,此时此刻,“我”的心情如何?家中兄弟姐妹看到滑稽的“我”是什么反应?2)写作思路:这时候,“我”的心情肯定是很焦急的,而且掺杂着后悔和气愤。兄弟姐妹们肯定感到很可笑。3)衔接第一段段首语的句子,描述“我”和在场兄弟姐妹的状态,例如:While my sisters laughter hit me like an arrow,Jasons suggestion of cutting the pumpkin in half upset me.4)衔接第二段段首语的句子,即第一段的段尾,可以描写,“我”的头终于出来以后,然后发现妈妈一直在摄像,例如:The moment Dad fi

    10、nally took the pumpkin off,I found Moms camera recorded me covered by pumpkin flesh.第二段段首语:The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.分析:妈妈把自己的滑稽丑态放到了网上,“我”必然会感到尴尬气愤,会去找妈妈理论。但考虑到高考的读后续写,需要有一个积极向上的价值观,所以肯定不能写埋怨妈妈,两人吵架。又因为是万圣节,所以第二段,可以结合家庭观念,写一写网上人们对万圣节家庭传统的讨论。段首语衔接:1)思考:看到自己的丑态被妈妈发到网上,“我

    11、”会有什么反应?视频里的自己,是什么样的?2)写作思路:“我”会觉得妈妈很“残忍”,内心很委屈。视频里的自己很滑稽,像小丑。3)衔接第二段段首语的句子,可以描写自己,例如:In the video,I was like a funny clown who messed up the performance.结尾升华在故事的开头,作者就交代了,比赛谁挑选的南瓜大,是我们家的万圣节传统。那么,爸爸妈妈为什么要让家里的孩子比赛呢?万圣节的意义是什么呢?想到这里,我们自然就可以想到,在结尾的时候,升华到家庭观念:相亲相爱一家人。根据上文的提示,学生开展了对接下来的故事描写,主要是家庭和谐团聚为主题。P

    12、aragraph 1It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.While my sisters laughter hit me like an arrow,Jasons suggestion of cutting the pumpkin in half upset me.Seized by anxiety and anger,I felt the air in the pumpkin getting thinner.“Dad!”I shouted for help in a trembling voice.On hearing

    13、my cry,Dad came instantly and helped me support the pumpkin into upright position.After several failed attempts to pull my head out,I opened mouth and desperately bit off a large chunk of pumpkin,to clear my way out.The moment Dad finally took the pumpkin off,I found Moms camera recorded me covered

    14、by pumpkin flesh.Paragraph 2The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.In the video,I was like a funny clown who messed up the performance.So embarrassed did I feel that I rushed home to quarrel with my mom.Before I let out my tears,Mom suggested me to read the comments which were unexpectedly touching and inspiring.It turned out that my clownish show encouraged more strangers to share their lovely Halloween family tradition and to express love to their family members.To love,was it exactly the forever theme of Halloween?

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