2022年中考作文指导ppt课件（含音频+素材）.zip

学科网（北京）股份有限公司中考英语作文指导中考英语作文指导谭婉灵谭婉灵一、导入：What is the most painful part while you are taking an English exam?一、导入：What is the most painful part while you are taking an English exam?二、学习目标：二、学习目标：1、通过考情分析，能说出中考作文的写作技巧。1、通过考情分析，能说出中考作文的写作技巧。2、通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练习。2、通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练习。3、通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树立写作信心。3、通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树立写作信心。三、学习过程：三、学习过程：1、考情分析1、考情分析分析近几年我们河池市中考真题可知，书面表达常见的类型为：命题作文。文体以记叙文为主，话题为写人叙事类、发表观点类。词数均为 80 词左右。思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？分析近几年我们河池市中考真题可知，书面表达常见的类型为：命题作文。文体以记叙文为主，话题为写人叙事类、发表观点类。词数均为 80 词左右。思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？2、学法指导2、学法指导（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；（2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；（2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；（3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；（3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；（4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。（4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。各类作文常用框架:各类作文常用框架:1)、话题作文，演讲1)、话题作文，演讲 总-分-总 总-分-总 开头 Its adj for us to.开头 Its adj for us to.正文 On the one hand,On the other hand,Whats more,正文 On the one hand,On the other hand,Whats more,结尾 In a word,/In short,.结尾 In a word,/In short,.2)、讨论报告，列举不同观点2)、讨论报告，列举不同观点 总-A 方-B 方-我方-总 总-A 方-B 方-我方-总 开头 Recently,we have a discussion/survey about.开头 Recently,we have a discussion/survey about.学科网（北京）股份有限公司 正文 Different people have different opinions.正文 Different people have different opinions.A thinks.A thinks.B thinks differently.B thinks differently.As for me,/In my opinion,.As for me,/In my opinion,.结尾 All roads lead to Rome,we can choose the way we like to.结尾 All roads lead to Rome,we can choose the way we like to.3)、写信，建议3)、写信，建议 总-分-总 总-分-总 开头 Im adj to hear that you Here is some advice for you.开头 Im adj to hear that you Here is some advice for you.正文 Firstly,.正文 Firstly,.Secondly,.Secondly,.Finally,.Finally,.结尾 In a word,If you,you will 结尾 In a word,If you,you will3、备战演练3、备战演练作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请以 How to keep healthy 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何保持身体健康。要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请以 How to keep healthy 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何保持身体健康。要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.80 词左右。2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.80 词左右。写作分析:写作分析:写作五步骤（Steps of writing）：写作五步骤（Steps of writing）：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _（1）审：体裁_ 人称_ 时态_（1）审：体裁_ 人称_ 时态_（2）构：文章分 3 段（2）构：文章分 3 段开头：概括性强，最多 2 句话引入主题 开头：概括性强，最多 2 句话引入主题 正文：主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开 3 个方面，每个方面最多 2句话 正文：主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开 3 个方面，每个方面最多 2句话 结尾：紧扣主题，2 句话内结束，尽量升华 结尾：紧扣主题，2 句话内结束，尽量升华（3）列（3）列 Beginning:Beginning:学科网（北京）股份有限公司Body:(3 parts)1.Do sports 2.Good eating habits 3.Keep happyBody:(3 parts)1.Do sports 2.Good eating habits 3.Keep happyEnding：Ending：（4）写：（4）写：1）4-8 分作文：要点全，简单句1）4-8 分作文：要点全，简单句2）9-12 分：并列句，连接词2）9-12 分：并列句，连接词As middle school students,keeping heathy is very important for us.To keep healthy,I have some good advice.As middle school students,keeping heathy is very important for us.To keep healthy,I have some good advice.First of all,We should do exercise every day,such as running,walking.Whats more,We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food.We can eat more fruits and vegetables.Finally,we should keep us happy,it is the most important part.First of all,We should do exercise every day,such as running,walking.Whats more,We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food.We can eat more fruits and vegetables.Finally,we should keep us happy,it is the most important part.I hope my advice is useful.Lets take action now!I hope my advice is useful.Lets take action now!3）13-15 分：各种从句，高级词汇3）13-15 分：各种从句，高级词汇As a middle school students,It is very important for us to keep healthy.In order to keep healthy,I have some good advice.As a middle school students,It is very important for us to keep healthy.In order to keep healthy,I have some good advice.To begin with,I think we are supposed to do exercise every day,such as running,walking.Whats more,We are expected to have some eating habits which are good for us.Finally,keeping us happy all the time is also important.If we are happier,we will be healthier.To begin with,I think we are supposed to do exercise every day,such as running,walking.Whats more,We are expected to have some eating habits which are good for us.Finally,keeping us happy all the time is also important.If we are happier,we will be healthier.I hope my advice is useful.If we take action now,we must be healthy.I hope my advice is useful.If we take action now,we must be healthy.(5)、检：要点、拼写、语法是否连贯。看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。(5)、检：要点、拼写、语法是否连贯。看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。4、作文点评4、作文点评5、总结5、总结学科网（北京）股份有限公司中考英语作文指导中考英语作文指导 2022年年4月月17日日What is the most painful part while you are taking an English exam?作文是会呼吸的痛它活在试卷最后的角落看别人写会痛看自己写会痛反正都会痛.How to write a good artile?作文作文 想说爱你不容易想说爱你不容易Writing is a kind of breathing painIt lives in the last corner of the paperIt is painful to watch others writeWhile it is more painful to write myselfAnyway,writing is a kind of breathing pain.2018Tong yi min studio Tong yi min studio 一民工作室目录目录上一页上一页下一页下一页末页末页学习目标：学习目标：1.1.通过考情分析，能说出中考作文的写作通过考情分析，能说出中考作文的写作技巧。技巧。2.2.通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练习。写作练习。3.3.通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树立写作信心。绪，树立写作信心。考情分析考情分析方法指导方法指导备战演练备战演练作文点评作文点评目目录录1234目录目录上一页上一页下一页下一页末页末页 分析近几年我们河池市中考真题可知，书分析近几年我们河池市中考真题可知，书面表达常见的类型为：命题作文。文体以记面表达常见的类型为：命题作文。文体以记叙文为主，话题为写人叙事类、发表观点类。叙文为主，话题为写人叙事类、发表观点类。词数均为词数均为80词左右。词左右。考情分析思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？各各类作文常用框架类作文常用框架1、话题作文，演讲 总-分-总 Its adj for us to.On the one hand,On the other hand,Whats more,In a word,/In short,.2、讨论报告，列举不同观点 总-A方-B方-我方-总 Recently,we have a discussion/survey about.Different people have different opinions.A thinks.B thinks differently.As for me,/In my opinion,.All roads lead to Rome,we can choose the way we like to.3、写信，建议 总-分-总 Im adj to hear that you Here is some advice for you.Firstly,.Secondly,.Finally,.In a word,If you,you will（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；（2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；（3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；（4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。方法指导方法指导 作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请以以How to keep healthy 为题，用英语写一篇短文，为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何保持身体健康。谈谈如何保持身体健康。要求：要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.80词左右。词左右。备战演练备战演练1.审：2.构：Steps of writing审清题意列出提纲3.列：写出文章3.列：4.写：段落布局5.检：检：检查细节Style(体裁）：_Person（人称）：_Tense（时态）:_ 记叙文记叙文第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时1.Cross-question(审题)2 2、构：文、构：文章分章分3 3段段1、开头：、开头：概括性强，最多概括性强，最多2句话引入主题句话引入主题 2、正文、正文主要内容主要内容：层次性强，一定要：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个个方面，每个方面最多方面最多2句话句话 3、结尾、结尾：紧扣主题，：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量句话内结束，尽量升华升华 3.列全要点列全要点Beginning:Body:(3 parts)1.Do sports2.Good eating habits3.Keep happyEnding：Bad sample（0-3分）分）Students healthy is important.Even though have a good grade.But havent healthy is not good.Have a good healthy is very important.1.要点全BadGood（4-8分）2.简单句2.简单句翻译：保持健康是很重要的。翻译：保持健康是很重要的。Keep healthy is very important.Keeping healthy is very important.找动词V(2)保留一个谓语动词简单句翻译原则（1个V）Ving Ving+V谓语+to do V原1.并列句 GoodBetter（9-12分）2.连接词 We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food.1.并列句（句与句）We should not only have good eating habits but also keep away from junk food.简单句+连词+简单句1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,although,though,after all,4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解释表示解释:for example,such as,8.表示顺序表示顺序:firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,from then on,finally,in the end;9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,whats more,actually,in fact,10.表示结论表示结论:altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in general连词连词 As middle school students,keeping healthy is very important for us.To keep healthy,I have some good advice.First of all,We should do exercise every day,such as running,walking.Whats more,We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food.We can eat more fruits and vegetables.Finally,we should keep us happy,it is the most important part.I hope my advice is useful.Lets take action now!Better1.各种从句 BetterBest（13-15分）2.高级词汇 主句主句+连接词连接词+从句从句 连接词连接词+从句，主句从句，主句1.各种从句宾语从句 We should do exercise every day.I think we should do exercise every day.使用提示：表达想法建议使用提示：表达想法建议条件状语从句We should keep us happy,it is the most important.If we keep us happy all the time,we will be much healthier.使用提示：表达想法建议使用提示：表达想法建议定语从句We should have good eating habits.We should have some eating habits which are good for us.使用提示：修饰名词使用提示：修饰名词表语从句We should have good eating habits.My advice is that our eating habits should be healthier for us.使用提示：我的使用提示：我的.是是.1.I think/hope+句子.2.If+从句，主句.3.主+谓+N+定从4.My+N is that 句子.常用从句模板goodwonderfullikeenjoybe fond ofhappyjoyfulverysoextremelymanyplenty of want feel like importantplay an important part in shouldbe supposed to/be expected toto(为了）in order to 高级词汇 As a middle school students,As a middle school students,It is very important It is very important for us to keep for us to keep healthyhealthy.In order toIn order to keep keep healthyhealthy,I ,I have some good advice.have some good advice.To begin withTo begin with,I thinkI think we we are supposed toare supposed to do do exercise every day,such as running,walking.exercise every day,such as running,walking.Whats Whats moremore,We,We are expected toare expected to have some eating habits have some eating habits which are good for uswhich are good for us.FinallyFinally,keeping us happy all,keeping us happy all the time is also important.the time is also important.If If we we are happier,are happier,we will we will be healthier.be healthier.I hope I hope my advice is useful.my advice is useful.If we take action now,If we take action now,we must be healthy.we must be healthy.Best总结回顾：1.badgood 要点全，简单句2.goodbetter 并列句，连接词3.betterbest 从句，高级词汇4.书写漂亮 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