2022年中考英语写作ppt课件.pptx

1、How to write a good composition?近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象；为此，国不会劳动的现象；为此，国 家最近印发了关于全面加强新时家最近印发了关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见。请你结合自身的体会，就代大中小学劳动教育的意见。请你结合自身的体会，就 如何如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括：内容包括：上劳动课，学习生活技能；上劳动课，学习生活技能；参加实践活动，如：植树、种菜等；参加实践活动，如：植树、种菜等；学做家务

2、，如：整理房间、洗衣服等；学做家务，如：整理房间、洗衣服等；养成良好的劳动习惯。养成良好的劳动习惯。注意：词数：词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；注意：词数：词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；参考词汇：劳动课参考词汇：劳动课 a hardworking spirit class(2020某地中考题某地中考题)高分作文高分作文高分作文高分作文高分作文高分作文作文怎样才能得高分作文怎样才能得高分?1.要点完整要点完整.2.词汇语法要准确运用词汇语法要准确运用.如只有关键词而无主谓结构，不可视为如只有关键词而无主谓结构，不可视为 要点要点 写出

3、。如果主谓结构有严重的语言错误写出。如果主谓结构有严重的语言错误（如语态、连动（如语态、连动词或只写出情态动词而无主动词），可视为半个要点词或只写出情态动词而无主动词），可视为半个要点3.上下文要连贯上下文要连贯.4.语言要得体语言要得体.5.拼写和标点符号要准确清楚拼写和标点符号要准确清楚.6.围绕要点的发挥，如有语言错误，则扣语言分。围绕要点的发挥，如有语言错误，则扣语言分。7.分段分段.第四节第四节 书面表达（满分书面表达（满分 20 分）分）(2019某地中考题某地中考题)为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，政府出台了陪餐制，要求从 4 月 1 日起，学校 领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以

4、下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。1学生吃得健康、安全；2及时发现就餐问题；3食堂提供食品多样；4父母更加放心。注意：1词数 80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3参考词汇：规定 regulation(n.)；食堂 cafeteria(n.)；营养的 nutritious(adj.)A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools.It asks the school managers

5、 to eat with students in their cafeterias._.Lets write.Step 1:“审审”1.体裁体裁2.关键词关键词3.时态时态4.人称人称Writing steps 5步法步法 Step 2:“列列”1.列要点列要点.2.怎样写要点呢怎样写要点呢?Step 3:“连连”连接词或词组连接词或词组表顺序表顺序1.first,firstly,first of all.2.second,secondly,next,whats more.3.third,thirdly,then,also.4.fourth,fourthly,5.finally,at last

6、,in the end,表并列或递进表并列或递进：and,as well as,both.and,neither.nor表示选择：表示选择：or,either.or.表转折：表转折：but,however,although,though,even though表因果表因果:because,so,表结果表结果:so.that.,such.that.表目的表目的:so that,in order that/to,so as to表条件表条件：if,unless表对比：表对比：instead,on one hand.on the other hand表解释：表解释：for example,such

7、as,in other words表结论表结论:in a word,in short,in general,generally speaking表观点：表观点：in my opinion,as we all know,according to sb.加加(首首)尾尾,使结构完整使结构完整,总分总或分总结构总分总或分总结构.结尾结尾注意简明扼要注意简明扼要.Step 4:“加加”Step 5:“查查”1.要点是否完整要点是否完整.2.词汇语法是否准确运用词汇语法是否准确运用,句子结构是否完整句子结构是否完整.3.拼写和标点符号是否准确清楚拼写和标点符号是否准确清楚.HomeworkComplet

8、e the writing.A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools.It asks the school managers to eat with students in their cafeterias.Thanks to the regulation,something great has taken place in our school.First,we eat healthier and safer than bef

9、ore.Second,if there is any problem about food safety or other,our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly.Also,the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us.In other words,our parents neednt worry about our diet any more.We teenagers are still young and need

10、 to grow healthy,so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary.I hope it will be carried on forever.时间状语从句时间状语从句：when,after,before,as soon as原因状语从句原因状语从句：because条件状语从句条件状语从句：if目的状语从句目的状语从句：so that/in order that结果状语从句结果状语从句：so,sothat让步状语从句让步状语从句：although,though,even though宾语从句宾语从句：that,how,what.定语从句定语从句：that,which,who Step 4:“长长”