2022年中考英语写作课ppt课件 .pptx

1、WritingYour Home Town假设你是李华，你的家乡在温州，你的英国笔友Mike十月份要来温州旅游。请你根据提示内容给他写一封邮件介绍你的家乡。About WenzhouWords and expressions for referenceLocationin the southeast of Zhejiang ProvincePopulation and historyabout 9.21million,more than 2,000 yearsInteresting placesJiangxin Island,Yandang Mountains,Nanxi River.Weat

2、her and othersfine,but sometimes rainy;delicious food;.要求：（1）尽量包含所有要点，可适当发挥；（2）条理清楚，语句通顺，行文连贯；（3）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）假设你是李华，你的家乡在温州，你的英国笔友Mike十月份要来温州旅游。请你根据提示内容给他写一封邮件介绍你的家乡。3W审题法When 时态What 要点Who 人称一般现在时；一般将来时Step1:Check the questionYour home town1.location2.population4.history3.size5.famous plac

3、es6.famous food7.weatherStep2:Brainstorm in the southeast of Zhejiangsouthnorthwesteast1.LocationIt is _ away from Wenzhou to Hangzhou.Step3:Make simple sentences2.PopulationWenzhou has a _ (large/small)population.largeWenzhou has a _ of about 9.21 _ .populationmillion_ Wenzhou is about 9.21_.The po

4、pulation of3.SizeThe _（区域）（区域）of Wenzhou is about 11,784 square(平方)_ .areakilometres4.HistoryWenzhou has a_(long/short)history which is more than 2000 years old.longDragon Lantern Dance5.Interesting placesIt is _ for Jiangxin Island、Yandang Mountains、Nanxi River.famousJiangxin IslandYandang Mountain

5、sNanxi River6.Famous foodIt is _ for seafood.famous7.Weather夏季高温多雨冬季温和少雨The weather here is_but sometimes _ in _ and _ and _ in _.finerainysummermilddrywinterStep4:Write a short passage Wenzhou is in the southeast of Zhejiang Province.It has a history of more than 2,000 years and about 9.21 million

6、people live here.There are many interesting places in Wenzhou,Jiangxin Island,Yandang Mountains and Nanxi River.You can also try lots of famous and delicious food in Wenzhou.The weather is fine in October,but sometimes it rains.So remember to bring an umbrella.StructureBeginningEndingBody2!+?Wenzhou

7、 is in the southeast of Zhejiang Province.It has a history of more than 2,000 years and about 9.21 million people live here.There are many interesting places in Wenzhou,Jiangxin Island,Yandang Mountains and Nanxi River.You can also try lots of famous and delicious food in Wenzhou.The weather is fine

8、 in October,but sometimes it rains.So remember to bring an umbrella.Step5:StructureBeginningLet me tell you something about it.Dear Mike,Im very happy that youre coming to Wenzhou in October.Now,let me tell you something about my hometown.I come from Wenzhou.2EndingDo you like my home town?What a be

9、autiful place!+?The first draft(9-10)Do you like my home town?long Wenzhou is in the southeast of Zhejiang Province.It has a history of more than 2,000 years and about 9.21 million people live here.There are many interesting places in Wenzhou,Jiangxin Island,Yandang Mountains and Nanxi River.You can

10、 also try lots of famous and delicious food in Wenzhou.The weather is fine in October,but sometimes it rains.So remember to bring an umbrella.such asOctober is a good time to visit them.Step6:Make upThe first draft(9-10)Final draft(12-15)wordsSentences Link wordsgood wordsgood sentences proverbsWord

11、sLink words:However;Besides;Whats more;But;So;Thats because;Thats why.Good words:Pretty(good);especially;more than(over)SentencesGood sentences:.be the best time to+do;It is home to many places of interest;Im sure.Proverbs:East or west,home is the best.There is no place like home.As the saying goes,

12、“.”Step7:self-estimate(自评)反思订正：1.检查作文是否包含题目要求的所有要点。2.检查每个句子中动词的使用形式是否正确。3.检查每个句子中名词单复数是否正确。4.检查是否用上优美词句。5.检查篇章结构是否合理。6.默读全文，整体检查。如有错写和漏写的情况，请规范订正，如：在错词上画一横线再补上正确的单词；也可以标上序号，订正在下面的横线上。Step8:peer review(互评)档次分值可给分值和采分点一档文13-152大小写、标点符号、词数达标，书写规范整洁2-3行文连贯，连接词使用适当，指代清晰5用词适切，句型变化多样且有效，完全或基本没有语言错误4-5描述所有信

13、息，内容合理、丰富二档文9-122大小写、标点正确，词数达标，书写规范整洁2-3行文连贯，连接词使用适当的，指代清晰3-4用词基本适切，句型较为单一，有少量语言错误但不影响理解2-3描述了大部分信息，内容比较合理三档文5-81-2大小写、标点正确，词数达标，书写规范整洁或尚可辨认1行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，指代不够清晰1-2有较多语言错误，一定程度上影响理解2-3描述了大部分信息，内容比较合理四档文1-40大小写、标点错误较多，语言应用不规范，词数严重不足0-1行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，指代不够清晰1-2有较多语言错误，一定程度上影响理解0-1描述了小部分信息，内容不合理五档文00白卷或骂人East or west,home is the best.homework：结合自评和互评，修改初稿，进行二稿的书写。