Unit 3 Writing Workshop （ppt课件）-2023新北师大版（2019）《高中英语》必修第一册.pptx

1、P62 1You are going to write about a celebration event that you have had before.What details do you want to include?What celebration do you want to write about and why?Lets read an event description and learn how to write it.What did they celebrate?How did they celebrate it?How did they feel?Look at

2、the picture and answer the questions.Read the description.Answer the questions.1.Whose birthday was it?2.What did the family do to prepare for it?3.What gift did the writer make?4.How did Grandpa feel and what did he say?It was Grandpas birthday.Mum cooked special food.They invited Grandpas friends.

3、The writer made a video of Grandpas life story for him.The event made Grandpa very excited.He said it was a“wonderful birthday celebration”and that he was“looking forward to his eightieth,ninetieth and even one hundredth birthdays already!”P62 2Read the description again.Place the phrases in the cor

4、rect order.Preparations before the event Feelings about the eventThe best part of the event Introduction to the eventIntroduction to the eventPreparations before the eventThe best part of the eventFeelings about the eventGrandpas 70th birthdayThen add details.birthday lunch;gift(video)invitation to

5、Grandpas old friends;when Grandpa and his friends appeared in an old photo in their school uniformsexcited P63 31.What tense is used in the description?2.How does the author describe the event?Can you list some examples?The simple past tense.Read the description again and answer the questions.The au

6、thor describes the event in time order.Early in the morning，I woke up excited.After a quick breakfast，I checked the special gift I had made for Grandpa，Just before lunchtime，Dad came in with some guests.Towards the end of the party，Grandpa said excitedly，2.Find the sentences that describe the mood o

7、f the characters from the article.Early in the morning，I woke up excited.Grandpa couldnt believe his eyes and it took quite a long time for them to calm down.There was a lot of laughter in the room，and quite a few tears in their eyes.Towards the end of the party，Grandpa said excitedly.Now I am looki

8、ng forward to my eightieth，ninetieth and even one hundredth birthdays already!P63 4Then,write 2-3 similar sentences for your writing.Use the Sentence Builder to help you.Sentence BuilderAdverbs of Time and Mannerfirst/then/after that/finallyFirst I got dressed.Then I headed downstairs.luckily/amazin

9、gly/surprisingly/excitedlySurprisingly,they were Grandpas best friends from secondary school.Outlining Complete the outline of your event description based on Activity 3.Introduction to the eventPreparations before the eventThe best part of the eventFeelings about the eventP63 5Drafting Use your out

10、line and the Writing Help to write your first draft.P63 6Describing an EventIts important to:mention the reason why you want to describe the event;write the place,time,occasion and people of the event;use action verbs and linking words to put them in the right order;describe your feelings at the end

11、 of the event.Writing helpEditing Edit your description in pairs.Does the writer show the main idea of the passage?Does the writer include the time,place of the event?Does the writer describe details of the event?Does the writer describe his/her feeling(s)?Does the writer use linkers to connect the

12、series of activities?Mark any spelling,punctuation or grammar errors.Mark any unclear expressions.Give suggestions if you can.Underline the expressions you like.Comments:_Share what you have written in class.P63 7SummaryIntroduction to the eventPreparations before the eventThe best part of the eventFeelings about the eventthe reason why you want to describe the eventthe place,time,occasion and people of the event(using adverbs of time and manner)your feelings at the end of the eventFinish your writing.