中考英语作文提高方法-课件.ppt

1、 (一）初中生写作一）初中生写作“现状现状”2 2 初中生写作初中生写作1)1)审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯；审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯；2)2)单词拼写错误；单词拼写错误；frist,belive,ture,buzy,quite&quiet frist,belive,ture,buzy,quite&quiet 3)3)动词缺失；动词缺失；Eg:I happy I can go to Peking.Eg:I happy I can go to Peking.4 4）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）Eg:All people have t

2、heir own dream.Eg:All people have their own dream.He said he wants to have a good rest.He said he wants to have a good rest.5 5）中式英语（）中式英语（ChinglishChinglish）Eg:I very like sports.Eg:I very like sports.6)综合性错误。综合性错误。包括包括单词大小写单词大小写、标点符号标点符号以及以及形容词副词形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。等。中考英语作

3、文评分标准中考英语作文评分标准 满分档（满分档（15分）：长度符合要求（分）：长度符合要求（80-90字），书写规范，字），书写规范，涵盖所有要涵盖所有要 点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。第五档（第五档（12-14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结盖所有要点，结 构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。较丰富有少量语法错误。第四档（第四档（9-11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本分）：文本长度符合

4、要求，书写规范，基本涵盖要点（有涵盖要点（有2 要点得给要点得给9-10分），行文比较连贯，词汇分），行文比较连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。不够丰富，有一些语法错误。第三档第三档(6-8分分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整要点不完整 （只有（只有1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。第二档（第二档（3-5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。猜测出作文意图。第一档（第一档（0-2分）：

5、有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。（白卷（白卷0分）分）中考英语高分作文的特点 1、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。2、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。3、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。4、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。5、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。二、中考英语高分作文的特点二、中考英语高分作文的特点 6、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。7、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和

6、重要句子。8、要点齐全。9、首尾呼应，自然成一体。10、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。Making an invition英语作文英语作文注意交叉使用长短句注意交叉使用长短句吴轶佳说，在吴轶佳说，在5月份长春市模拟考试当中，很多同学都觉得大作文不太容易月份长春市模拟考试当中，很多同学都觉得大作文不太容易写好，不容易得高分。我们容易忽略的一个重要问题是我们面对的是高中老师来写好，不容易得高分。我们容易忽略的一个重要问题是我们面对的是高中老师来批改我们初三学生的作文，高中老师的要求水准，他们指导高考作文的习惯，他批改我们初三学生的作文，高中

7、老师的要求水准，他们指导高考作文的习惯，他们对于作文的品位和要求都可能与我们平时的思维习惯有所不同，所以文章的可们对于作文的品位和要求都可能与我们平时的思维习惯有所不同，所以文章的可读性就更能成就一篇完美的中考作文。读性就更能成就一篇完美的中考作文。吴轶佳建议，英语作文在整个写作过程中，要适当选择恰当的连词来表示文吴轶佳建议，英语作文在整个写作过程中，要适当选择恰当的连词来表示文中的并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，并且注意句子结构的变化，避免重中的并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，并且注意句子结构的变化，避免重复和单调。复和单调。考试中的写作是一种控制性写作，在至多考试中的写作是一种控制

8、性写作，在至多25分钟的时间内要实现审题，列提分钟的时间内要实现审题，列提纲，打草稿，修改草稿，打磨语言，并准确，美观地誊写在答题卡上。纲，打草稿，修改草稿，打磨语言，并准确，美观地誊写在答题卡上。在英语写作中，过多地使用长句和短句都不好，正确的做法是，根据实际情在英语写作中，过多地使用长句和短句都不好，正确的做法是，根据实际情况，在文章当中交叉使用长短句。综合使用各种所谓的况，在文章当中交叉使用长短句。综合使用各种所谓的“高级高级”结构。在适合的结构。在适合的语境当中，在自己十分有把握的情况下，使用一句名言警句来增加文章的色彩。语境当中，在自己十分有把握的情况下，使用一句名言警句来增加文章的

9、色彩。但是在大型考试的考场上，不鼓励现场原创的语言，还是尽量使用平时老师给批但是在大型考试的考场上，不鼓励现场原创的语言，还是尽量使用平时老师给批改过的，教材中有的，你十分熟悉和有把握的语言。这样的作文才会在紧张的情改过的，教材中有的，你十分熟悉和有把握的语言。这样的作文才会在紧张的情绪影响之下少犯错误绪影响之下少犯错误中考英语写作高分“秘笈”要点齐全 过渡自然 首尾相呼 分段提行 连词增色 名句添光 长短得当 高分有望 如何如何逐步培养和提逐步培养和提升升英语写作能力？英语写作能力？二二 写作能力的引导写作能力的引导 词汇短语词汇短语 句子句子 篇章篇章 词汇是学生用英语表达思想词汇是学生用

10、英语表达思想,同时同时 也是写作的基础和源泉。也是写作的基础和源泉。词汇短语词汇短语 1.词汇的词汇的。（child;beve)2.加强中考加强中考的听默写。的听默写。3.鼓励学生（尤其是优等生）坚持课外阅读，并用鼓励学生（尤其是优等生）坚持课外阅读，并用收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆。收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆。词汇短语词汇短语“攻关秘笈攻关秘笈”4.4.鼓励学生使用鼓励学生使用“高端高端”的词汇。的词汇。=endless/oceans of Playing too much computer is bad for our study.=gets in the way of=ha

11、ve a bad influence on Eg:I am very interested in pop music.I have lots of homework to do every day.=show/take great interest in 词不离句，词不离句，的句式表达是一篇好的句式表达是一篇好文章的必备条件。文章的必备条件。句子句子 1.1.帮助学生掌握认清帮助学生掌握认清“五大五大”基本句式。基本句式。2.2.加强中考相关话题加强中考相关话题的的朗读朗读、听写听写、背诵、仿写背诵、仿写、句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累。3.3.让学生在让学生在“多样多样

12、”的句式变换中不断积攒实的句式变换中不断积攒实战经验。战经验。有效的句式教学有效的句式教学3.“3.“多样多样”的句式变换的句式变换 句子句子1）合并为简单句；）合并为简单句；Eg:My brother helped me in maths.I made great progress.I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother.2）学会使用感叹句；）学会使用感叹句；It is necessary to help others.How necessary it is to help others！3)善用复合句；善用复合句

13、；a.We need to help people.The people are in trouble.We need to help the people who are in trouble.b.We know that more and more students like pop songs.As we all know,more and more students like pop songs.4）巧妙使用强调句；）巧妙使用强调句；We can achieve our dreams by working hard.Only by working hard,can we achieve

14、 our dreams.5)积累丰富的谚语积累丰富的谚语(一周两至三句）一周两至三句）英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能增强英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能增强文章的说服力和感染力。文章的说服力和感染力。As the saying goes,“.”1)锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.2)集中注意力于学习集中注

15、意力于学习As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate our mind on our studies.其他谚语其他谚语:1.Think twice before you do.2.Practice makes perfect.3.Where there is a will,there is a way.4.Failure is the mother of success.5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.6.All roads lead to Rome.7.Every co

16、in has two sides.1.水水(节水方法节水方法)To make the limited water last long,1)wed better turn off the taps or showers while we are washing hair or brushing teeth.2)its good to save water by reusing the used water to flush the toilet冲冲厕所厕所.2.交通方式交通方式(自己、告诉他人自己、告诉他人)In order to reduce the air pollution,1)we sh

17、ould either walk or take the bus to school.2)We are supposed to tell our parents to ride bikes or take the subway as much as possible.3.电电(节电方法节电方法)Dont forget to turn off lights and TVs when we leave the room so that we can save the energy目的目的4.纸纸In order to make full use of paper,1)its necessary f

18、or us to collect used paper and books and recycle them.2).we need to use both sides of it5.购物袋购物袋To reduce the white pollution,we are supposed to take our own bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.6.植树造林植树造林 Wed better plant trees as many as possible instead of cutting them down.In this w

19、ay，we can make the world greener and the air fresher.词不离句，句不离篇。词不离句，句不离篇。能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语法法,谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练学生写作的最终目的。谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练学生写作的最终目的。篇章篇章 如何运用已有的如何运用已有的“遣词造遣词造句句”能力在写作实践中学能力在写作实践中学会会“谋篇布局谋篇布局”“战无不胜战无不胜”呢？呢？1）表并列补充并列补充关系的：What is more，Besides，2)表示转折关系的过渡词：but,yet,ho

20、wever 3)表示时间关系的过渡词：first,second,third,and then,finally,after,before,after a few days,at last,at that time,later,in the past,immediately,in the meanwhile,when,while,then,after that 4)表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to),far(from),in the front of,beside,behind,beyond,above,below,to the right,to the left,on one side,on

21、 the other side of,outside 5)表示比较关系的过渡词：表示比较关系的过渡词：in the same way,just like,just as 6)表示对照关系的过渡词：表示对照关系的过渡词：but,still,yet,however,on the other hand,in spite of,even though 7)表示递进关系的过渡词：表示递进关系的过渡词：also,and,then,too,in addition,moreover,again 8)表示因果关系的过渡词：表示因果关系的过渡词：because,since,then,thus,so,therefo

22、re,as a result9)表示解释说明的过渡词：表示解释说明的过渡词：for example,in fact,in this case,for,actually She came in spite of her cold.Force a laugh in spite of pain.We met some friends and other people in addition.I can help you.Moreover,you should rely on yourself.10)表示强调的过渡词：表示强调的过渡词：in fact,indeed,necessarily,certai

23、nly,without any doubt,truly,most important 11)表示目的的过渡词：表示目的的过渡词：for this reason,for this purpose,so that,in order that,so as to,in order to,12)表示列举的过渡词：表示列举的过渡词：for example,such as 13)表示总结性的过渡词：表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion,finally,at last,in brief,in a word,in general,all in all,in a word,generally speak

24、ing He has his faults,but,all in all,he is a good helper.英语写作中用好英语写作中用好“四心四心”1.精心精心审题，沉着写稿审题，沉着写稿 2.耐心耐心修改，提炼句子修改，提炼句子 3.细心细心检查检查,消灭错误消灭错误 4.虚心虚心抄写，一丝不苟。抄写，一丝不苟。议论文写作技巧议论文写作技巧 议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,表明表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文有三要素文有三要素,即论点、论据和论证。论点的基

25、本要求是即论点、论据和论证。论点的基本要求是:观观点正确点正确,认真概括认真概括,有实际意义有实际意义;论据的基本要求是论据的基本要求是:真实可真实可靠靠,充分典型充分典型;论证的基本要求是论证的基本要求是:推理必须符合逻辑。推理必须符合逻辑。英语议论文的结构一般较为固定英语议论文的结构一般较为固定,通常包括以下三部分通常包括以下三部分:1.在导语部分提出需要议论的议题在导语部分提出需要议论的议题;2.在正文部分对所提出的问题进行议论在正文部分对所提出的问题进行议论;3.在结论部分对以上的讨论进行总结和归纳。在结论部分对以上的讨论进行总结和归纳。lets see some examples S

26、hall we send children to study abroad?With more and more people becoming rich in recent years,it is a new tendency for them to send their children to study abroad.But I dont think it is a good idea.First of all,children are too young to look after themselves.Second,the language barrier is a serious

27、problem.Many children are not proficient in the foreign language before going abroad.As a result,they have difficulty in understanding what the native speakers are talking about.Third,they may get into trouble when dealing with various situations for lack of knowledge of the customs in the strange l

28、and.Furthermore,the cost of living is much higher than that in our country,which might cause a heavy burden to the family.In conclusion,there are more disadvantages in sending children to study abroad.So,wed better not do it.Learn To Respect Our Parents Nowadays,more and more families have only one

29、child.As most of the students today are the only child in the family,they often regard themselves as the center of the family and become selfish,without caring too much about their parents.So we should learn to respect our parents.Firstly,we are supposed to remember our parents birthday and express

30、our best wishes to them.Secondly,we should say hello to our parents when we see them returning home.Thirdly,we are supposed to tell our parents where we go when we leave home.In a word,respecting parents is our Chinas traditional values.No matter how old we are,its necessary for us to respect our pa

31、rents.On the one hand,computer has many advantages.It can help people finish work quickly.And it also can help people to do more and more work.Its not noly a good way for students to receive education but also its very convenient for people to communicate with others by using computers.On the other

32、hand,it has some disadvantages.Computer can work out difficult math problems that students cant.But it may make them be lacking in thinking.And if you often work with computer,maybe you will get sick.Some people surf the Internet all day,they waste much time and have no time to care for the real peo

33、ple.So we should have a right way to deal with the greatest invention computer.My Favorite Places Many people have favorite places they like to go to when they are feeling sad or bored.I also have favorite places that I go to as often as I can.Here are the three places that I like most.First of all,

34、I like the zoo.The animals are amazing because some are so cute and some are so ugly!I like to pet(宠宠)them,feed them and watch them perform.Museums are cool places,too.They have good exhibits(陈陈列品列品)and fascinating displays(吸引人的展品吸引人的展品).I like the works of art(艺术品艺术品)there.Some museums teach me a l

35、ot about history and science.From dinosaurs to robots,I love them all.Finally,theme parks are my favourite place.I think the roller coasters are the best.Its fun to scream and getscared.These places always cheer me up(快活）快活）.I try to go to each of my favorite places once a year.I am going to find mo

36、re favorite places to go to when I grow up.作文走向预测及参考范文1.1.最近，老师布置了一道作业，就最近，老师布置了一道作业，就 “Can parents be friends?Can parents be friends?”这一问题在同学中间开展一次调查，下表是调查的结果：这一问题在同学中间开展一次调查，下表是调查的结果：45%45%的同学可能父母的同学可能父母太忙，没有时间关心他们。太忙，没有时间关心他们。55%55%的同学可能在家里，父母常常和他们谈心，像的同学可能在家里，父母常常和他们谈心，像朋友一样。你的观点朋友一样。你的观点?请根据以上调

37、查数据，写一份请根据以上调查数据，写一份8080词左右的调查报告。报告的开头已给词左右的调查报告。报告的开头已给出。出。I recently surveyed(调查调查)my classmates about their views(观点观点)on whether parents can be friends.According to the survey,45%of the students in our class think it impossible to make friends with their parents as theyre always too busy to show

38、 their concern.On the other hand,55%of the students believe they can make friends with their parents because their parents often talk with them like friends at home.In my opinion,its just natural for parents and children to be friends so long as they trust each other,the parents often talk with thei

39、r children and know how to share.2.爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的明，你们学校的“English Garden”正在举办主题为正在举办主题为“付付出即是收获出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求：要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。2.80100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。总词数。Giving i

40、s Receiving My name is Li Ming.I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy.I often help my classmates with their schoolwork.Sometimes I help clean up my house.I go to the old peoples home and do some cleaning for them once a month.I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the si

41、ck kids up.I read stories and sing songs for them.I also help people in trouble.I think giving is receiving.Helping others is helping ourselves.Do you agree with me?3.假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的假如你叫李华，参加学校开展的“有困难向谁求助有困难向谁求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的调查活动，调查结果如下。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信反映相关）的调查活动，调查结果如下。请用英语给校报

42、编辑写一封信反映相关内容。内容。求助对象：同学、朋友，求助对象：同学、朋友，58%，年龄相仿，容易理解交流。老师家长，年龄相仿，容易理解交流。老师家长，30%，有爱心、，有爱心、有经验、可以有经验、可以 信任。无，信任。无，12%，不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通。，不愿与人交流，难以与人沟通。注意：注意：1内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连内容要点全面，并表达出你的观点。为了使文章连 贯，可适当增加内容。贯，可适当增加内容。2词数：词数：90词左右。词左右。Dear editor,Im a student.We have made a survey“Who do you turn to

43、when in trouble?”Here are the results.Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble as theyre almost of the same age,so they have a lot in common and understand each other easily.Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for hel

44、p as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much.They can be trusted by these students.Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves.They hate to talk with others and cant get on well with others.They have few friends.In my opinion,when in trouble wed better as

45、k our teachers,parent,friends or classmates for help.Yours Li Hua4、台湾自古以来是中国领土不可分割的一部分，尽早解决台湾问题，实现祖国的完全统一，是中华儿女的共同期盼。假定你们正举行“我心中的台湾”主题班会，请你根据提示写篇短文。1：台湾是中国的一部分 2：我所知道的台湾（地理位置、人口或其他资讯）3：台湾与祖国大陆的民间交往（走亲访友、商业往来、兴办工厂等）4：愿望。词语准备：Taiwan Island,Taiwanese,the mainland,many kinds of,beautiful,relative,shop,f

46、actory,lie.Visit,build,run.There is but one China and Taiwan is part of China.Taiwan,the biggest island,lies to the southeast of Fujian Province.The weather there is warm and wet.So many plants grow very well.The fruit there are really delicious,like bananas,oranges and so on.It has a popolation of

47、23.000.000.Taiwan produces many kinds of products,especially seafood.It is a very beautiful island.Riyuetan Pool AND Mount Ali are very famous places of interest,Now many Taiwanese come to the mainland,they visit their relatives and friends,and some of them build factores and run shops,I love Taiwan

48、 very much and I hope I can visit Taiwan some day.China is getting stronger and stronger.All the people hope Taiwan can come back quickly.Im sure Taiwan will come back in the future.5.阳光运动工程阳光运动工程(Sunshine sports program)Dear Jane,Thank you for your last letter asking about our sunshine sports progr

49、am.Now I tell you some sports in our school.Many students doing sports one hour everyday.Different students have different interests.Some boys like playing football,because they love it.Most girls like shopping,because they think it relaxing.But most boys like playing Chinese Kongfu,because they bel

50、ieve it can help they keep healthy.And some girls like dancing,because they want to keep fit.I think the sunshine sports program is very important for us.Because the study of students very hard.Sports can also let brains have a good rest so that our study will be more effective.And it can help you r