高考英语二轮专题复习课件专题六书面表达.pptx

1、专题六书面表达-2-明晰体裁与题材特点,缩小刷题数量-3-4-5-解读评分标准,明确写作任务-6-7-8-优化训练策略,破解高分锦囊卷面书写很重要。卷面的美观直接影响评分标准。每天背诵书面表达范文后默写到一张16开高考形式的练字纸上,集中训练34周,养成良好的书写习惯后注意保持。字体先摹后临,书写时,适当降低占上中格的辅音字母的高度,这样写出来的字母饱满圆润,美观大方。写错了的单词画一条线或两条线,切勿涂抹。背诵积累是硬道理。学英语就是模仿,英语句子是背诵模仿出来的,不是自己创造出来的,因此加强篇章、语段、句式以及衔接词的背诵仿写非常重要。强化限时训练。平日训练的时间要少于考场上的写作时间,考

2、试时才能从容不迫。-9-养成修改习惯。养成自我检查的习惯,加强自我检查能力的训练。有些错误学生能自我纠正,因此写完后一定要再次检查。运用写作小技巧。如果词数不够,增加上下过渡强调的句式,可以用短语代替单词,学会替换表达。例如:用from my point of view 替换 I believe.,用take.into consideration 替换consider,用hold the view that替换think等,尽量有意识地替换普通的词汇,做到多元化表达。-10-遵循“两美”原则,规范写作思路保证外观美1.分段合理:近几年的高考作文高分范文,绝大多数为23 段,个别范文为4段甚至5

3、段。将时间、空间或其他逻辑关系方面相关联的内容安排在相应的段落内,使文章主题突出、结构合理、层次分明。2.书写美观:书写整洁漂亮能先声夺人,给阅卷老师留下一个好印象。卷面美观就是指字母的大小和字母之间的距离匀称,无涂改、增补现象。-11-力求内在美1.要点齐全:写作时应列出要点,避免遗漏。根据评分标准,漏掉内容要点的文章要降低得分档次。2.用词得体:写作时需要考虑身份、语气、风格等因素,也要考虑词义的褒贬。用词要讲究准确、得体。3.避免错误:审题错误、词汇错误、语法错误和中式英语等都是妨碍我们得高分的绊脚石,应尽力避免。4.过渡自然:衔接词可以使文章结构紧凑、前后连贯,能很好地起到穿针引线的作

4、用,使逻辑更严密。5.词汇新颖:高级新颖词汇的选用能使阅卷者眼前一亮,使他们相信考生具有较强的词汇功底和表达能力,从而给出高分。-12-6.句式多样:考生要想使所写的文章凸显文采,就必须写出几个漂亮的句子来,为文章增添色彩。这需要注意,不是句子越长越好,也不是词汇越难越好,不要堆砌高难度短语和高难度句式,要避免盲目追求高大上,尽可能使用具有区别性的句式,强调表达的得体性。-13-使用靓词佳句模板,实现质的跨越巧妙过渡,让文章流畅起来在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性词语是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。连接性词语归纳如下:一、起始关系:to begin with,first

5、 of all,as you know,as is known,as is shown in,according to等。As we all know,good learning habits contribute to efficient study.众所周知,好的学习习惯有助于高效学习。-14-二、时间顺序:at the beginning,then,later,finally,at last,in the end,afterwards,since then,after that,immediately,meanwhile等。At the beginning,I collected all

6、 the things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I mopped the floors.首先,我把所有的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好,接着我擦去所有家具上的灰尘,然后我拖地。三、条件关系:if,unless,in case(of),as/so long as,on condition that,provided(that)等。I would be very grateful if you could meet my u

7、ncle at the airport.如果你能到机场接我叔叔,我将不胜感激。-15-四、转折关系:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,on the contrary,nevertheless等。However,not until the match was over did we realize that we lost it.然而,直到比赛结束我们才意识到我们输了。五、因果关系:because,as,since,for,thanks to,due to,as a result of,so,therefore,as a result/consequence等。Th

8、erefore,there is no reason for us to look down upon ordinary jobs.因此,我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。六、并列关系:and,or,as well as,not only.but also.,either.or.,not.but.,neither.nor.等。We will have a good time there and I will send you some photos taken there.我们在那里会玩得很愉快,而且我将会把在那里拍的照片寄些给你。-16-七、递进关系:besides,whats more,more

9、over,furthermore,whats worse,still less,to make matters worse,worse still,more importantly等。Many of them can hardly look after themselves,still less manage their own life.他们中的很多人几乎不能照顾自己,更别说经营他们自己的人生了。八、列举事实:such as,for example/instance,take.for example,that is to say,as follows,in other words,on th

10、e one hand,on the other(hand).,for one thing.,for another.等。On the one hand,I can earn some money by doing it to help my parents;on the other hand,I can gain some experience from it,which will do good to my future life.一方面,我能通过做这样的事赚些钱来帮助父母;另一方面,我能从中获得一些经验,这会对我将来的生活有益。-17-九、表示观点:in my opinion,in my

11、view,in my point of view,as far as I am concerned,as for me,personally等。As far as I am concerned,they stand for love,friendship and unity.在我看来,它们代表爱、友谊和团结。十、总结:in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,to sum up,all in all,on the whole,in general,generally speaking等。All in all,traveling is the best

12、choice to enrich our lives and get ready for the new challenges.总的来说,旅游是丰富我们的生活、准备迎接新挑战的最好的选择。-18-运用提分句式,提升文章档次一、灵活运用非谓语动词1.使役动词let/make/have/get/keep/leave.do/doing/done 使/让做/正在做/被做We cant leave such an important matter unfinished.我们不能让这样一件重要的事半途而废。2.感官动词see/notice/watch/hear.do/doing/done 看到/注意到/观

13、察/听到做/正在做/被做I heard the English song sung many times.我多次听到有人唱这首英文歌。3.when/while/once/unless/although.+doing/done 当/一旦/除非/尽管正在做/被做Be careful while/when crossing the street.过马路的时候小心点。-19-4.having done.已经Having talked with him for several seconds,the driver led the man across the road.和他谈了几秒钟后,司机领着这个人过

14、马路。5.by doing.通过做Under the environment of fierce competition,the only way he could imagine to handle stress was to get tougher by making greater efforts.在竞争激烈的环境下,他唯一能够想到的应对压力的方式就是通过更加努力使自己变得更加坚强。6.疑问词+to doFor a fresh man of society,the question is how to start work.对于刚涉世的人来说,问题是如何开始一项工作。-20-7.only

15、 to do/to be done结果却He hurried to the post office only to find it was closed.他匆忙赶到邮局,结果却发现它关门了。8.with+宾语+补足语Similarly,with living standards improving,people tend to provide their children with material comfort.同样地,随着生活水平的提高,人们不自觉地提供给孩子们舒适的物质条件。9.have difficulty/trouble(in)doing sth.做有困难/麻烦When Peter

16、 speaks in public,he always has trouble thinking of the right things to say.彼得在公共场合讲话时,总难找到合适的话语。-21-二、变化使用各种从句1.名词性从句(1)I wonder whether/if.我想知道是否I wonder if you could do me a favor.不知道我能否请您帮我个忙。(2)What impressed/surprised/shocked me most was that.给我印象最深的/使我最吃惊的是What impressed me most was that they

17、 never lost heart.给我留下印象最深的是他们从不丧失信心。(3)It is+important/necessary/strange that.重要的是/必要的是/奇怪的是It is important that you should be good at it.重要的是你应该精通此道。-22-(4)That/This/It is why/because.那就是为什么/因为That is why he likes the place so much.那便是他如此喜欢这个地方的原因。(5)The reason why.is that.的原因是The reason why Mothe

18、r was late with dinner was that there were so many dishes to prepare.母亲晚饭做到很晚的原因是她要做的菜实在太多。(6)The chances are(that).很可能The chances are you wont have to pay.你很可能不用必须付钱。(7)No one can deny the fact that.不可否认的事实是No one can deny the fact that smoking leads to cancer.没有人可以否认吸烟能致癌的事实。-23-(8)Sb.holds the be

19、lief/view that.某人持有某种观点Most people hold the view that education can change ones fate.多数人持有这样的观点,即教育能改变人的命运。2.状语从句(1)when/while.当时候When I showed my answer to him,the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.当我把答案给老师看的时候,老师表扬我具有独立思考的能力。(2)on condition that.在条件下;如果Ill lend this book to you on con

20、dition that you keep it clean.如果你不会把它弄脏,那么我就把这本书借给你。-24-(3)each/every time.每次,每当Every time I think about the sad experience,I feel very sorry for my mother.每次想起那伤感的往事的时候,我就觉得非常对不起我的母亲。(4)the first time.第一次The first time I saw you,I realized I seemed to have met you somewhere before.第一次看见你,我就意识到好像以前在

21、哪里见过你。(5)as soon as/the moment/the instant/immediately/directly/instantly.一就The moment the teacher entered the classroom,the students stood up.老师一进教室,学生们就站起来了。-25-(6)as/so long as 只要We can surely overcome these difficulties as long as we are closely united.只要我们紧密团结就一定能克服这些困难。(7)providing/provided/su

22、ppose/supposing(that).如果,假如Supposing that there is no pure water,what shall we drink?假如没有纯净的水,那么我们喝什么?(8)before.在之前,还没来得及就,才He rushed out of the room before I could say a word.我还没来得及说一句话,他就冲出了房间。(9)(ever)since.自从Mr.Green has taught in that school since he came to China three years ago.自格林先生三年前到中国以来,

23、他就在那所学校教书。-26-(10)as.当时候;一边一边;随着He smiled as he stood up.他站起来的时候笑了。3.定语从句(1)As you can see in.正像你在中看到的那样As you can see in the drawing,it is windy and rainy outside,and yet the flower in the greenhouse is at its best.正像你在图画中所看到的那样,外面刮风下雨,然而,温室里的花长势很好。(2)As sb.puts it.正如某人所说As our coach often puts it,

24、everything is possible if we keep on.正如我们教练经常所说的那样,只要我们坚持,一切皆有可能。-27-(3)As we all know./As is known to all.众所周知As we all know,there is no shortcut to learning English.众所周知,学英语没有捷径。(4)which引导非限制性定语从句,意为“这”The number of the books is 10,000 or so,which can be used for improving your knowledge of Chines

25、e culture.图书有一万本左右,这些书可以用来提高你们对中国文化的认识。(5)one of the+复数名词+定语从句,意为“中的一个”As far as I know,this is one of the rooms that were damaged in the fire.据我所知,这就是那次大火烧毁的房间之一。-28-(6)such.as.像这样的;诸如此类的Hes not such a fool as he looks.他并不像看上去的那样愚蠢。(7)the same.as./the same as.像一样的She knew he felt just the same as s

26、he did.她知道,他的感受和她的一样。-29-三、高调使用特殊句式1.强调句型(1)It is/was+被强调部分+that+其他It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是故事本身,而是故事所反映的内容有价值。(2)It is/was not until.that.It was not until 8 oclock that he realized he had spent the whole day on the Internet.直到八点他才意识到自己整天都在上网。(3)主语+

27、动词+特殊疑问词+it is/was+that+其他部分I wonder what it is that makes you so happy.我想知道到底什么让你如此高兴。-30-(4)强调谓语时,借助于do/does/did+动词原形We study as a group and all of us do enjoy ourselves.我们以小组为单位学习,而且大家确实都非常开心。(5)Is/Was it+被强调部分+that+其他部分Is it because he is ill that he cant come?是因为生病他才没有来吗?(6)特殊疑问词+is/was it+that

28、+其他部分Why was it that you did not attend the meeting yesterday?为什么昨天你没来开会?-31-2.倒装句(1)Only+状语/状语从句+部分倒装,意为“只有”Only in this way can you learn English well.只有这样,你才能学好英语。(2)Not only.but also.不仅而且Not only does the sun give light but also it gives heat.太阳不但发光而且发热。(3)Not until.直到才Not until we lose our heal

29、th do we realize its value.等到我们失去了健康,才明白它的价值。-32-(4)As/Though 尽管Quiet student as he may be,he talks a lot about his favorite singers after class.尽管他可能是个沉默寡言的学生,但课下谈论他喜爱的歌手时,他话很多。(5)So+形容词/副词+that.如此以至于So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home.天气太冷,我们只好待在家里。(6)Hardly.when./No sooner.than.一就

30、No sooner had we reached the airport than the plane took off.我们刚到机场,飞机就起飞了。(7)Were/Should/Had.如果Had you worked hard,you would have finished it early.要是你工作努力的话,你早就完成了。-33-(8)Up/Down/In/Out/Now/Then.+全部倒装For a moment nothing happened.Then came voices all shouting together.有一段时间什么也没发生,然后传来了大家的喊叫声。(9)In

31、 front of/At the foot of.+全部倒装At the foot of the mountain stands an old temple,which takes on a new look.一座古老的寺庙屹立在山脚下,呈现出了一番新景象。-34-四、用一则谚语,点靓全篇1.As the saying goes,“Actions speak louder than words.”正如谚语所说,“事实胜于雄辩。”2.Just as the saying goes,“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”正如谚语所说,“患难见真情。”3.Fra

32、ncis Bacon once said,“Knowledge is power.”弗朗西斯培根曾经说过,“知识就是力量。”4.As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”正如谚语所说,“一天一苹果,医生远离我。”5.As the saying goes,“Where theres a will,theres a way.”正如谚语所说,“有志者事竟成。”6.As the saying goes,“The roses in her hand,flavor in mine.”正如谚语所说,“赠人玫瑰,手留余香。”-35-7.

33、As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”正如谚语所说,“没有努力就没有收获。”8.In a word,experience is the best teacher.总之,经验是最好的教师。-36-熟练套用模板,保证基础得分一、申请信Dear,I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for the position in.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that./I am confident that I am suitable for

34、the kind of job you are advertising./I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.For one thing,.For another,.I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.-37-I shall be much grateful if you offer me a precious opportunity for an interview./I will greatly appr

35、eciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success!Yours sincerely,说明信息来源说明自己可以胜任胜任理由一胜任理由二表达期望结束语-38-二、咨询信Dear,I am.I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with informat

36、ion regarding.First of all,what are?Secondly,when will?Thirdly,is?I would also like to inquire.Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,-39-

37、自我介绍要询问的内容要咨询的问题罗列附加问题表示感谢-40-三、建议信Dear,I am very to know that.Im looking forward to.Im afraid that.Id like to suggest that first,then.I believe this kind of arrangement will.Moreover,if,it is necessary for you to.With you will.Wish.Yours sincerely,-41-写信的原因表示期待表述提出建议的原因提出建议一建议的作用补充建议提出建议二祝愿-42-四、邀请

38、信Dear,.Im writing to invite you to.There are some points you may want to know about./During,we will have lots of activities you are interested in.First,.Second,.I believe that you will be very interested in.For one thing/First,.For another/Second,.Since the will begin,is it possible?I really hope yo

39、u can come./Im looking forward to.Yours,-43-活动的内容、时间、地点发出邀请活动的具体内容活动介绍一活动介绍二受邀人参加的理由提出希望-44-五、口头通知Ladies and gentlemen,may I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes./Please listen care

40、fully and well have a discussion in groups.Make sure youll come on time and dont be late.Please come and join in it./Everybody is welcome to attend it./I hope youll have a nice time here.Thats all.Thank you!-45-称呼语及开场白正文部分,说明具体通知事项说明通知对象和注意事项重申希望大家能够参加结束语-46-六、演讲稿Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,

41、Its a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech.My name is.The topic of my speech is.To begin with,many people suggest that.Secondly,.Thirdly,.What I want to stress is that.For one thing,.For another,.Besides,.In a word,.Thank you for your listening./Thank you.-47-表示荣幸自我介绍提出演讲主题话题或现象列举重申主题

42、原因或重要性列举总结-48-七、说明原因类说明文Nowadays,there are more and more.in some big cities.It is estimated that.Why have there been so many.?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that.Besides,.The third reason is.To sum up,the main cause of.is.Its time that something were done upon it.For one

43、 thing,.For another,.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of.-49-用具体数据说明某种现象原因一原因二原因三指出主要原因解决建议一解决建议二-50-八、社会现象类说明文Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.has increasingly become a common concern of the public.According to a survey,.There ar

44、e a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon.For one thing,.For another,.Whats more,.According to the above discussions,I can easily forecast that more and more people will.开篇介绍某种社会问题或现象列举实例导致该问题/现象的原因并列举实例总结-51-九、问题解决类说明文In recent days,we have to face the problem that.With the help of moder

45、n technology,we now have many means to solve it.By,we can.Whats the most important is that.Moreover/Besides,.Furthermore,.In a word,it is clear/obvious that.Only can we.提出问题解决办法结尾段,总结并预期问题能够得以解决-52-十、正反观点对比类议论文The topic of is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two different opinions a

46、bout it.Some people say is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of.Besides,.Moreover,.Others think that is a better choice for the following three reasons.Firstly,.Secondly/Besides,.Thirdly/Finally,.From my point of view,I think./For me,the former is surely a wise choice.The reason is

47、that.As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.-53-引出话题介绍第一种观点及支持第一种观点的理由介绍第二种观点及支持这一观点的理由自己的观点及理由-54-十一、谚语/警句类议论文The proverb reminds us that.Indeed,we can learn many things from it.First of all,.For example,.Secondly,.Another case is that.Furthermore,.In my opinion,.In s

48、hort,whatever you do,please remember the saying.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work,youll necessarily benefit a lot from it.引出名言,阐明含义理由自己的观点-55-题型1题型2题型3真题体验命题方式技巧点拨模拟演练提纲类Writing 1(2018全国卷)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数100左右;2.

49、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。-56-题型1题型2题型3真题体验命题方式技巧点拨模拟演练Dear Terry,How are you going?In your last letter,you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friends home.Now,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.To begin with,according to our tradition,you are supposed to arrive early,so that you can h

50、elp the family prepare the dinner,which is meaningful and interesting.Besides,youd better bring some gifts,like a book or a Chinese knot.Whats more,when you are enjoying the meal,you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful for you.I have the confid