2021届高考英语复习课件 书面表达之谋篇布局优秀课件.pptx

1、002-2021届高中英语书面表达之谋篇布局记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的启示或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。1写作步骤概括原文衔接过渡描述事件发表看法2过渡语句This reminds me of the similar experience.This story brings me back to an event many years ago.I had a similar experience.记叙文之谋篇布局3注意事项(1)时态 记述经历类的记叙文，无论写人还是记事，通常以过去时态为主。如果所写的内容不但有过去的人和事，而且还有现在的人和事，那

2、么对过去的人和事应采用过去时态，对现在的人和事应采用现在时态。(2)人称 要根据题目的要求选用合适的人称，做到上下文人称一致。(3)篇章结构 通常以时间或事件发展的顺序为线索，有时也可采用倒叙手法。详写主要情节，略写次要情节。(2017江苏仪征中学月考)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。The Elephant and the FlyAn elephant was standing and picking leaves from a tree.A small fly came,flying and buzzing near his ear.The elephant wa

3、ved it away with his long ears.Then the fly came again,and the elephant waved it away once more.This was repeated several times.Then the elephant asked the fly,“Why are you so restless and noisy?Why cant you stay for a while in one place?”The fly answered,“I am attracted to whatever I see,hear or sm

4、ell.My senses pull me constantly in all directions and I cannot resist them.What is your secret?How can you stay so calm and still？”The elephant said,“My senses do not rule my attention.Whatever I do,I get involved in it.Now that I am eating,I am completely absorbed in eating.In this way I can enjoy

5、 my food and chew it better.I rule and control my attention.When you are in charge of your senses and attention,your mind will become calm.”写作内容1以约30个单词概括短文的内容；2然后以约120个单词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法，包括以下要点：(1)看完故事后的感受及启发；(2)描述一次你或他人因受太多干扰而使学习、生活或工作受到影响的经历；(3)你打算在高三这一年里如何保持专注。写作要求1可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不

6、能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。审题本文为寓言性短文，要概括故事的内容，就要读懂故事的寓意。结合题目要求“就专注这一主题发表你的看法”，从而确定文章写作应围绕“专注”这一主题。审题时应做到：(1)定时态：本文在概括内容和描述经历时用过去时，在写打算时用将来时；(2)定人称：描述自己的经历用第一人称，他人的经历用第三人称。第一段：概括短文内容,30words第二段：衔接过渡语,引出主题句第三段：描述一次受干扰的经历第四段：保持专注的打算2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件

7、满分范文 An elephant was constantly disturbed by a restless 不安宁的 fly,who wondered about the secret of remaining calm.The elephant revealed 显示 that calmness would be obtained when ones senses and attention were focused.Inspired by what the elephant said,I realized the ability to focus ones attention is t

8、he key to success.Any person,if easily distracted,is unable to achieve his success.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件This reminds me of what happened in my primary school.I once signed up for too many various afterclass activities.As a result,I didnt spend enough time on my

9、 studies.Consequently,I fell behind and failed in exams.Since then I have known that one should focus on one thing before it is well done.As a Senior Three student,having set a clear goal,I will give priority 优先权 to it,trying to resist any temptation 诱惑.Im fully aware that only with a determined min

10、d can I achieve my goal.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分理由1行文架构(1)概括短文内容(2)通过衔接过渡语(Inspired by what the elephant said.)引出主题：专注是成功的关键(3)描述经历：自己参加多种课外活动导致考试不及格(4)打算：在高三阶段如何保持专注2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2亮点词汇constantly不断地，obtain获得,focus on

11、es attention注意,distract分心,sign up报名,consequently因此,give priority to 给予优先权,set a clear goal,achieve ones goal3亮点句式句含有who引导的非限制性定语从句；句、句、句11.含有宾语从句；句、句使用了过去分词和现在分词作状语；句含有状语从句的省略。2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2018江苏卷81.请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。写作内容1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名（rat

12、ings）进行消费的现象；2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件Li Jiang 6 July,Sunny Our family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase.Two days ago,Mom asked me to find r

13、elevant information on the internet.But the information I got was rich and varied,or even contradictory.Confused,I simply based my decision on the ratings.Within five minutes,we ordered the one we were satisfied with.This afternoon,Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.Su Hua 6 Ju

14、ly,Sunny This morning,our family went out,hanging round in the downtown area.We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants,and went into one of them.We spent quite a lot of money,but were not happy.Mom complained a lot,and said that despite its high ratings,the food was not to our taste.I was puzzled

15、.Should I believe in these ratings,or should I not?2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件As a major channel of consumption information,the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption.Interestingly,the same rating may have different influence

16、s on different consumers.范文2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase.Firstly,the higher rating means the higher quality of the product,or better service.Based on the ratings,I bought my beloved backpack,saw interesting films

17、 and tasted delicious foods.Secondly,ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping.For example,there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from.In that case,it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.There is no doubt that it is

18、 unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption.The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related.It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件句式改写1用only 倒装句改写句中的宾语从句The elephant revealed 显示 t

19、hat calmness would be obtained when ones senses and attention were focused.The elephant revealed that only when ones senses and attention were focused would calmness be obtained.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件 2用强调句改写句Inspired by what the elephant said,I realized the abi

20、lity to focus ones attention is the key to success.Inspired by what the elephant said,I realized it is the ability to focus ones attention that is the key to success.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件(2017江苏省镇江市高三期末考试)阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Its always emotional when a

21、sports superstar announces his or her retirement.And when Kobe Bryant,37,wrote a poem called Dear Basketball to say goodbye to one of the greatest,most fascinating careers in NBA history,the sadness was overwhelming 势不可挡.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件Whether competing i

22、n the Finals or making jump shots after midnight in an empty gym,he has an unconditional love for the game.When Team USA was training in Las Vegas months before it headed to London for the 2012 Olympic Games,Bryant started his workout at 5：30 every morning in the gym until team practice began at 11：

23、00 am.During each practice Bryant counted every single shot he hit,and he wouldnt leave the gym until he had hit at least 400.This kind of hard work certainly paid off.He won an NBA MVP award,five NBA championships with the Lakers and two Olympic gold medals,making him one of the greatest players in

24、 NBA history.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件写作内容1用约30个词写出上文概要2用约120个词发表你的观点，内容包括 你对“成功源于坚持不懈的努力”的看法 用事例说明你或你朋友是怎么努力的写作要求1阐述观点或提供论据时，不得直接引用原文语句2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件参考范文：The passage above tells us that people generall

25、y feel sad at Kobe Bryants retirement and that his success results from his love for basketball and years of hard work.Kobes example reminds me that ones success is based on both passion and hard work.Besides Kobe,other people such as Thomas Edison,Steve Jobs and so on have all proven that perfectly

26、.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件 When I was a child,I was faced with great difficulty in learning English,especially in vocabulary.Nevertheless,with my English teachers patient instruction and help,I kept on practicing.In the end,my perseverance and determination paid of

27、f.“Where there is a will,there is a way”，as the old saying goes.If we are determined to do something,we will find a way of doing it and achieve success.Without perseverance,it is impossible for us to keep trying until our dreams come true.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件议

28、论文读写任务型作文指的是根据阅读材料所描述的某一事件、现象、观点或话题发表个人观点、意见和建议的一类读写任务，其实质就是要求考生根据题目要求写议论文。英语议论文有其独特的框架结构，能让读者迅速捕捉作者的观点和思路，值得考生模仿。其写作思路如下：议论文谋篇布局2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件过渡/引出话题There is no doubt that.It can not be denied that.No one can ignore the fact that.From what is mentioned

29、above,we know.提出观点From my point of view.As far as I am concerned.I hold the view/belief that.Personally,I believe that.表达立场Actually,I am in favour of the idea that.In some way,I am against the thought that.一、开门见山引出论点 在文章开头，通过主题句鲜明地提出观点或引出将要论述的内容，防止在论述的过程中跑题。常用的句式有：2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届

30、高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件总述原因There are several reasons that contribute to.My views are based on the following reasons.分层论述To begin with/First of all.Besides/Furthermore/Finally/Last but not(the)leastOn(the)one hand.On the other hand For one thing.For another.二、多种形式展示论据 议论文在写作手法上以议论为主，如通过对比观点、阐述原因、列举

31、例子等进行议论，但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。议论中的说明常为议论的开展创造条件或是对议论的补充；叙述和描写应是为论点提供依据，因此，叙述应该是概括的，描写应该是简要的。议论文常用的句式有：2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件列举例子Take.for example.For example/instance.引出经历It reminds me of the time when.What impresses me most is that.分析因果Thanks to/Owing to/Because of

32、.Consequently/Therefore/Thus/As a result.讨论后果Just imagine what would be like if there were no.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件三、总结升华，重申观点在文中或文末，考生可以用不同的语言重申主题或提出解决问题的建议，从而使文章结构严谨、主题鲜明。常用的句式有：To sum up/In short/In conclusion/On the whole/All in all.Taking all the factors i

33、nto account,we can draw a conclusion that.From the discussion above,it can be safely concluded that.Therefore,it is necessary for us to.To be brief,we should be aware of the importance of.Only when we/Only by.,can we.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件(2017盐城高三模拟)请阅读下面的短文，并按

34、照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。What can you do when you are unhappy?If you want to let out your anger or pressure by breaking things,you just do.Now a school in Nanjing has built a“stress wall”to help students who feel unhappy due to heavy schoolwork or for other reasons.The leader of the school said the idea o

35、f a stress wall started when footprints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件“These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they dont get along well with

36、other students.When under stress,the body gets ready to either run or fight and becomes very nervous.Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress，”he said.“Tests and homework make me sad，”said a junior girl,“I cant wait to hit the wall.It will help me a lot with my problems.”However

37、,another girl student who wouldnt give her name said，“The wall wont help because it cant talk，”and she added，“I need to talk to someone when Im sad.”2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件内容1以约30个单词概括短文内容；2以约120个单词就“Should the stress wall be built”这一主题发表你的看法，包括以下要点：(1)学生的压力来源；(2

38、)是否该建此墙并说明理由；(3)如认为不该建请提供一些其他有效的减压方式。要求1可以参照阅读材料但不得直接引用原文的句子；2作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当 审题定时态：一般现在时定人称：第一和第三人称 谋篇第一段：概括短文内容第二段：压力来源第三段：我的观点第四段：减压方法2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分范文 The passage

39、conveys to us that to help students with stress,a school built a“stress wall”for students to relax,towards which students hold different opinions.Nowadays,students are under great pressure,mainly coming from their school work as well as peer relationship.As far as I am concerned,building a stress wa

40、ll is not appropriate.For one thing,even if students punch the wall heavily,the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out.For another,this may lead to the result of solving a problem with violence of fixing a bad temper,which has bad effects on their health growth.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面

41、表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件In order to decrease our stress,here are my suggestions.To begin with,we can design more outdoor activities for students to get rid of the stress.Whats more,it is strongly suggested that we should take part in some sports events,which can surely help stude

42、nts out of stress and improve their health at the same time.All in all,only when we let out the stress properly can we live a happy school life.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件满分理由1行文架构(1)概括短文内容(2)压力来源：学习和同学关系(3)我的观点：不赞成建压力墙；两个方面去阐述(4)减压建议：参加课外活动；体育锻炼 2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋

43、篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2亮点词汇hold different opinions,as far as I am concerned,for one thing,in the bottom of ones heart,for another,to begin with,whats more,get ride of,all in all3亮点句式句含有宾语从句和定语从句句coming from.为现在分词作非限制性定语句building.为动名词作主语句中含有which引导的定语从句句中使用了句式it is suggested that.和w

44、hich引导的定语从句句中使用了倒装句2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件句式改写1用定语从句改写句Nowadays,students are under great pressure,which mainly comes from their school work as well as peer relationship.2用chances are that.和by doing.改写句 To begin with,chances are that students can get rid of the st

45、ress by designing more outdoor activities .2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件(2017江苏名校联考)请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。The rise of selfie(自拍)photography in some of the worlds most beautiful,and dangerous places is causing a range of interventions(干预措施)aimed at fighting riskt

46、aking that has resulted in a string of shocking deaths worldwide.The act of taking a picture of oneself with a mobile phone,placing the subject centrestage,has exploded in popularity in recent years,with everyone from Britains Queen Elizabeth to US.President Barack Obama joining in.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表

47、达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件 But the selfie has also inspired a lot of risktaking and offensive public behavior,pushing the boundaries of safety and behavior,whether by hanging from a skyscraper or posing with live explosives.Several governments and regulatory bodies have now begun tr

48、eating the selfie as a serious threat to public safety,leading them to launch public education campaigns reminding people of those against smoking and excessive drinking.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件内容1用约30个单词写出上文概要2你对此现象所持的观点3用23个理由或论据支撑你的观点要求 1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句2作文中不能出现

49、真实姓名和学校名称3不必写标题评分标准 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局PPT优秀课件参考范文 Today,more and more people,including some celebrities cannot resist the temptation to take photos of themselves in places with breathtaking scenery,regardless of the dangers involved.The trend has

50、 raised much public concern.Personally,I am against the behavior.Firstly,a cool selfie could cost you your life,and there have been several reports about people losing their lives while taking selfies.I strongly hold the belief that nothing is more important than life itself.2021届高考英语复习课件-书面表达之谋篇布局P