2021届新高考英语复习-英语续写三部曲课件.pptx

1、 英语续写三部曲 Analysis,Inference&Polish2021届新高考英语精品复习届新高考英语精品复习读后续写题型：根据一篇350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容，所给段落开头语进行续写,将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。How can you get a high mark?1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。2.续写内容的丰富性。3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。4.上下文的连贯性。coherentabundantvividcorrectfluentlogical:After class,you will be able to.1.Le

2、arn how to analyse the passage.2.Infer the ending of the story logically.3.Add a logical and positive ending of the given story.4.Polish your writing with various sentence structures and vivid description.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Love Will Melt Your Heart The day before my daughter Norah s four

3、th birthday,something she said forecast a remarkable event.Id just picked her up from preschool when she cautioned me to mind the elderly person walking across the parking lot at a glaciers pace.She went on to explain that she has a soft spot for mature folks:I like old people the best because they

4、walk slow like I do and they have soft skin like me.They all gonna die soon,so Im gonna love them before they die.I was struck by her thoughtfulness and empathy.The following day-her birthday-again on the way home from school,she asked if we could stop at the grocery store to buy cupcakes.How do you

5、 say no to a birthday girl?So we headed toward the bakery and picked up the cupcakes.As I was distracted by a clearance shelf,Norah was busy standing up in the cart,excitedly waving and joyfully proclaiming,“Hi,old person!Its my birthday today!Before I could hush her,he stopped and turned to her.His

6、 expression softened as he replied,Well,hello,little lady!Happy birthday!They chatted for a few minutes.Then,Norah turned to me and asked,“Can I take a picture with him?”I told her wed certainly ask.I approached him and asked if hed take a photo with my daughter for her birthday.His expression chang

7、ed from confused to stunned to delighted.A photo?With me?he asked.Yes,sure,for my birthday!Norah answered.And so he did.I pulled out my iPhone,and they posed together.She placed her soft hand on top of his.He wordlessly stared at her with twinkling eyes as she kept his hand in hers,kissed the top of

8、 his hand and placed it on her cheek.They were chatting like long lost friend.I asked his name.and he told us to call him Dan.We were blocking other shoppers,but they didnt care.There was magic happening in the grocery store that day,and we could all feel it.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph 1:After a

9、few minutes,I thanked Dan for spending a bit of his day with us._Paragraph 2:A few days later,we visited Dans tidy house._Please answer some questions after reading the passage.1.Whats the writing style of the passage?2.Whats the main idea of the passage?3.Clarify the plot of the story.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节

10、进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Love Will Melt Your Heart The day before my daughter Norah s fourth birthday,something she said forecast a remarkable event.Id just picked her up from preschool when she cautioned me to mind the elderly person walking across the parking lot at a glaciers pace.She went on to explain

11、that she has a soft spot for mature folks:I like old people the best because they walk slow like I do and they have soft skin like me.They all gonna die soon,so Im gonna love them before they die.I was struck by her thoughtfulness and empathy.The following day-her birthday-again on the way home from

12、 school,she asked if we could stop at the grocery store to buy cupcakes.How do you say no to a birthday girl?So we headed toward the bakery and picked up the cupcakes.As I was distracted by a clearance shelf,Norah was busy standingup in the cart,excitedly waving and joyfully proclaiming,“Hi,old pers

13、on!Its my birthday today!Before I could hush her,he stopped and turned to her.His expression softened as he replied,Well,hello,little lady!Happy birthday!They chatted for a few minutes.Then,Norah turned to me and asked,“Can I take a picture with him?”I told her wed certainly ask.I approached him and

14、 asked if hed take a photo with my daughter for her birthday.His expression changed from confused to stunned to delighted.A photo?With me?he asked.Yes,sure,for my birthday!Norah answered.And so he did.I pulled out my iPhone,and they posed together.She placed her soft hand on top of his.He wordlessly

15、 stared at her with twinkling eyes as she kept his hand in hers,kissed the top of his hand and placed it on her cheek.They were chatting like long lost friend.I asked his name.and he told us to call him Dan.We were blocking other shoppers,but they didnt care.There was magic happening in the grocery

16、store that day,and we could all feel it.Writing style:Narrative.What s the main idea of the passage?A warm encounter between a lonely old man Dan and a kind 4-year-old girl Norah.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Love Will Melt Your Heart The day before my daughter Norah s fourth birthday,something she

17、said forecast a remarkable event.Id just picked her up from preschool when she cautioned me to mind the elderly person walking across the parking lot at a glaciers pace.She went on to explain that she has a soft spot for mature folks:I like old people the best because they walk slow like I do and th

18、ey have soft skin like me.They all gonna die soon,so Im gonna love them before they die.I was struck by her thoughtfulness and empathy.The following day-her birthday-again on the way home from school,she asked if we could stop at the grocery store to buy cupcakes.How do you say no to a birthday girl

19、?So we headed toward the bakery and picked up the cupcakes.As I was distracted by a clearance shelf,Norah was busy standingup in the cart,excitedly waving and joyfully proclaiming,“Hi,old person!Its my birthday today!Before I could hush her,he stopped and turned to her.His expression softened as he

20、replied,Well,hello,little lady!Happy birthday!They chatted for a few minutes.Then,Norah turned to me and asked,“Can I take a picture with him?”I told her wed certainly ask.I approached him and asked if hed take a photo with my daughter for her birthday.His expression changed from confused to stunned

21、 to delighted.A photo?With me?he asked.Yes,sure,for my birthday!Norah answered.And so he did.I pulled out my iPhone,and they posed together.She placed her soft hand on top of his.He wordlessly stared at her with twinkling eyes as she kept his hand in hers,kissed the top of his hand and placed it on

22、her cheek.They were chatting like long lost friend.I asked his name.and he told us to call him Dan.We were blocking other shoppers,but they didnt care.There was magic happening in the grocery store that day,and we could all feel it.plot:love and carecame acrossgreetedclosertook a photobecame friends

23、more contact？Tip 1:Make inference according to the title of the passage.Love Will Melt Your Heart1.Whose heart will be melted?Dan,the old mans heart will be melted.2.Is his heart frozen before?What made his heart frozen?Something happened to his family./His wife died./He didnt have a friend.And he f

24、eels depressed and lonely.3.Whose love melted Dans heart?Norahs.4.How did Norah melt Dans heart?Maybe by visiting/chatting with/accompanying Dan.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Love Will Melt Your Heart The day before my daughter Norah s fourth birthday,something she said forecast a remarkable event.I

25、d just picked her up from preschool when she cautioned me to mind the elderly person walking across the parking lot at a glaciers pace.She went on to explain that she has a soft spot for mature folks:I like old people the best because they walk slow like I do and they have soft skin like me.They all

26、 gonna die soon,so Im gonna love them before they die.I was struck by her thoughtfulness and empathy.The following day-her birthday-again on the way home from school,she asked if we could stop at the grocery store to buy cupcakes.How do you say no to a birthday girl?So we headed toward the bakery an

27、d picked up the cupcakes.As I was distracted by a clearance shelf,Norah was busy standing up in the cart,excitedly waving and joyfully proclaiming,“Hi,old person!Its my birthday today!Before I could hush her,he stopped and turned to her.His expression softened as he replied,Well,hello,little lady!Ha

28、ppy birthday!They chatted for a few minutes.Then,Norah turned to me and asked,“Can I take a picture with him?”I told her wed certainly ask.I approached him and asked if hed take a photo with my daughter for her birthday.His expression changed from confused to stunned to delighted.A photo?With me?he

29、asked.Yes,sure,for my birthday!Norah answered.And so he did.I pulled out my iPhone,and they posed together.She placed her soft hand on top of his.He wordlessly stared at her with twinkling eyes as she kept his hand in hers,kissed the top of his hand and placed it on her cheek.They were chatting like

30、 long lost friend.I asked his name.and he told us to call him Dan.We were blocking other shoppers,but they didnt care.There was magic happening in the grocery store that day,and we could all feel it.Tip 2:Analyse the movement and emotion to help plotting:Norah enjoys every minute being with the old

31、man Dan.Norah loves and cares the elderly.Norah is very kind and outgoing.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Love Will Melt Your Heart The day before my daughter Norah s fourth birthday,something she said forecast a remarkable event.Id just picked her up from preschool when she cautioned me to mind the e

32、lderly person walking across the parking lot at a glaciers pace.She went on to explain that she has a soft spot for mature folks:I like old people the best because they walk slow like I do and they have soft skin like me.They all gonna die soon,so Im gonna love them before they die.I was struck by h

33、er thoughtfulness and empathy.The following day-her birthday-again on the way home from school,she asked if we could stop at the grocery store to buy cupcakes.How do you say no to a birthday girl?So we headed toward the bakery and picked up the cupcakes.As I was distracted by a clearance shelf,Norah

34、 was busy standing up in the cart,excitedly waving and joyfully proclaiming,“Hi,old person!Its my birthday today!Before I could hush her,he stopped and turned to her.His expression softened as he replied,Well,hello,little lady!Happy birthday!They chatted for a few minutes.Then,Norah turned to me and

35、 asked,“Can I take a picture with him?”I told her wed certainly ask.I approached him and asked if hed take a photo with my daughter for her birthday.His expression changed from confused to stunned to delighted.A photo?With me?he asked.Yes,sure,for my birthday!Norah answered.And so he did.I pulled ou

36、t my iPhone,and they posed together.She placed her soft hand on top of his.He wordlessly stared at her with twinkling eyes as she kept his hand in hers,kissed the top of his hand and placed it on her cheek.They were chatting like long lost friend.I asked his name.and he told us to call him Dan.We we

37、re blocking other shoppers,but they didnt care.There was magic happening in the grocery store that day,and we could all feel it.Dan is willing to make friends with us.They cant talk for a long time.Will they meet again?how?when?where?Dan likes kids.He likes talking with kids.Tip 3:Analyse the given

38、two sentences to help plotting.Paragraph 1.After a few minutes,I thanked Dan for spending a bit of his day with us._ Paragraph 2:A few days later,we visited Dans tidy house._Whats Dans response to my gratitude?How did I know Dan s address?I asked for Dans telephone number and planned to pay a visit

39、some day.Dan thanked me.How should we tell the readers what he suffered from?Is his heart frozen before?What made his heart frozen?Something happened to his family./His wife died./He didnt have a friend.And he feels depressed and lonely.I posted the story and photo on my facebook.One of my friends r

40、ecognized Dan and told me his wife Mary died 6 months earlier.They said goodbye to each other and left.coherentParagraph 2:A few days later,we visited Dans tidy house._Make inference about what is going to happen by answering the following questions.1.What did we see?2.What did Norah do?3.How long d

41、id we stay?4.What happened after this visit?Paragraph 2:A few days later,we visited Dans tidy house._ And things of Mary are displayed everywhere.Norah asked Dan to play the toys with her.They read books and told stories to each other.We spent nearly three hours with him that day.After another recen

42、t visit,he told me that he had slept soundly every night since meeting my girl.He did not feel lonely any longer.What did we see?What did Norah do?How long did we stay?What happened after this visit?happy ending positive1.He thanked me.With tears in his eyes,he said,No,thank you.“With tears in his e

43、yes,he said,No,thank you.This is the best day Ive ever had in a long time.He expressed his gratitude to me and told me it is the best day he had ever had in a long time.2.They said goodbye to each other.They gave each other a long and loving hug and They said goodbye to each other.They gave each oth

44、er a long and loving hug and Norah watched him until he was out of view.3.He was kind with my daughter Norah.He was patient and kind with my talkative,constantly moving girl.Polish your writing by lengthening sentences.4.Later that night,I received a private message and I learned that Dans wife,Mary

45、,had passed away six months earlier.Later that night,I received a private message,from which I learned that Dans wife,Mary,had passed away six months earlier.5.After the visit,Norah was still concerned about Mr.Dan.Every day she asks about his health and hopes that he could feel loved.After the visi

46、t,Norah was still concerned about Mr.Dan,every day asking about his health and hoping that he could feel loved.Paragraph 1:After a few minutes,I thanked Mr.Dan for spending a bit of his day with us.With tears in his eyes,he said,No,thank you.This is the best day Ive ever had in a long time.With a ki

47、nd and good-humored spirit,he turned to my daughter.Look!How much pleasure youve brought to me,Miss Norah.They gave each other a long and loving hug and Norah watched him until he was out of view.I was blown away by this meeting and posted the story and a photo of them on my Facebook.Later that nigh

48、t,I received a private message,from which I learned that Mr.Dans wife,Mary,had passed away six months earlier,and he had been lonely and depressed since then.I asked for Mr.Dans phone number and planned to pay a visit some day.Paragraph 2:A few days later,we visited Mr.Dans tidy house.We spent nearl

49、y three hours with him that day.He was patient and kind with my talkative,constantly moving girl.Actually after the visit,Norah was still concerned about Mr.Dan,every day asking about his health and hoping that he could feel loved.So was Mr.Dan.During another recent visit,he told me that he had slept soundly every night since meeting my girl.Norah has healed me,he said.That left me speechless and my cheeks wet with tears.Seventy-eight years separate these two people in age.Somehow,their hearts and souls seem to have recognized each other from long ago.Thank you!