描写文-descriptive-writing优秀课件.ppt

1、Descriptive writing,sometimes called“showing writing”,is writing that describes a particular person,place or event in great detail.u Descriptive writing uses a lot of flowery adjectives and adverbs to describe what is going on or how something appears.uDescriptive essays are often subjective tasks.T

2、he descriptive essay is often creative,personal,or simply artistic.If you were going to describe biting into an apple,you would not simply say:He bit into the apple and it tasted good.Descriptive writing would convey the same sentence as follows:The crunch of his teeth piercing the apples skin was d

3、eafening and the sweet juices of the apple ran down his chin.He slowly closed his teeth on the ripe,succulent,ruby-colored apple.The taste of the meat was as sweet as candy and he felt euphoric.5 sensesHearingTouchTastesightSmellSmellAdjectives include:芳香的：aromatic,sweet-scented,fragrant 臭的，恶臭的：smel

4、ly,reeking，fetid,malodorous putrid（腐烂的)TasteAdjectives include:pungent(辛辣的辛辣的),sour,acrid(辛辣的辛辣的),bitter,fetid,stinking,putrid（腐烂的）（腐烂的）,decaying,rancid（陈腐的）（陈腐的）,reek,stale（不新鲜，走味的（不新鲜，走味的),bad.Example One:Salt Looks like:white,small,shiny.Feels like:grainy,soft,slips through my fingers.Tastes like

5、:bitter,salty,bad.Sounds like:quiet,rustle,silent.Smells like:faint,odorless,mildly bitter.Example Two The scar on his chin only shows up in a certain light.(sight)He wears too much aftershave(须后水须后水).(smell)The kiwi fruit tastes acid.(taste)He has a high-pitched laugh.(sound)His hair feels wiry(金属丝

6、的金属丝的).(touch)Heres an example of how all five of our senses can be used to describe a simple scene:The apple was bright green,its skin polished and shining as it nestled in the fruit bowl(sight).The scent was fresh,as though the fruit had just been plucked from the tree(smell).She took it from the

7、bowl,her fingers closing around the firm smooth skin(touch)as she lifted it to her lips.The apple crunched loudly(sound)as her teeth cut through the skin into the tart,juicy flesh(taste).As the fresh juice ran down her throat she noticed a small black speck moving slowly in the creamy flesh.Closer i

8、nspection revealed that she hadnt just taken a bite from the apple-shed bitten through a fat,juicy worm.Para.8 Pay attention to the use of TOUCH in descriptive writingI feel the delicate symmetry of a leaf.I pass my hands lovingly about the smooth skin of a silver birch,or the rough bark of a pine.I

9、n spring I touch the branches of trees hopefully in search of a bud,the first sign of awakening Nature after her winters sleep.I feel the delightful texture of a flower,and discover its remarkable folds;and something of the miracle of Nature is revealed to me.Occasionally,if I am very fortunate,I pl

10、ace my hand gently in a small tree and feel the happy quiver of a bird in full song.I am delighted to have cool waters of a brook rush through my open fingers.To me a thick carpet of pine needles or soft grass is more welcome than the most luxurious Persian rug.Persian rugs:To me the colorful season

11、s are a thrilling and unending drama,the action of which streams through my finger tips.Find the adjectives and adverbs in this paragraph and underline themTask 1 I feel the delicate symmetry of a leaf.I pass my hands lovingly about the smooth skin of a silver birch,or the rough bark of a pine.In sp

12、ring I touch the branches of trees hopefully in search of a bud,the first sign of awakening Nature after her winters sleep.I feel the delightful texture of a flower,and discover its remarkable folds;and something of the miracle of Nature is revealed to me.Occasionally,if I am very fortunate,I place

13、my hand gently in a small tree and feel the happy quiver of a bird in full song.I am delighted to have cool waters of a brook rush through my open fingers.Task 2Pay attention to the verbs showing how Helen felt the things around.I feel the delicate symmetry of a leaf.I pass my hands lovingly about t

14、he smooth skin of a silver birch,or the rough bark of a pine.In spring I touch the branches of trees hopefully in search of a bud,the first sign of awakening Nature after her winters sleep.I feel the delightful texture of a flower,and discover its remarkable folds;and something of the miracle of Nat

15、ure is revealed to me.Occasionally,if I am very fortunate,I place my hand gently in a small tree and feel the happy quiver of a bird in full song.I am delighted to have cool waters of a brook rush through my open fingers.1、如果你生活在那个时代，你能想出什么好办法解决新中国工业化的问题呢？1.依据辐射方向确定“辐射源”,确定辐射名称和热量传播空间2、假如由你来主持制定“一五计划”，你将优先发展什么？3.材料二中“一个国家，两种制度”的含义是什么，邓小平提出它的根本目的是什么？4.根据材料二和所学的知识，说明香港问题能最终解决的主要原因（至少列出2点），并指出其历史意义。5.正面战场的抗战是中国抗日战争和世界反法西斯战争的重要组成部分；6.正面战场的抗战，粉碎了日本三个月灭亡中国的战略计划和“速战速决”的方针，消耗了日本的军事和经济实力；7.正面战场的抗战，有力地支援了中国共产党领导的敌后战场；8.大气对太阳辐射的削弱作用:主要包括吸收和反射.9、含义：荒漠化是一个动态发展过程，其实质是土地退化。