高考英语基础写作人物篇(优质课比赛名师精编课件).ppt

1、Basic Writing-Character introduction Just guess the manDescribed in the following sentencesu Born on the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.uShowing interest in music,he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.uWhen his firs

2、t album was released in 2000,he got the worlds attention.u His popularity sky-rocketed(急速上升急速上升),and he has received many awards for his songs.u His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.Jay Chou(周杰伦周杰

3、伦)Born on the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,Jay Chou,a famous singer,was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.分词结构分词结构 同位语同位语身份与身份与生平生平尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺 Showing interest in music,he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.When Jays firs

4、t album was released in 2000,he got the worlds attention.His popularity sky-rocketed(急速上升),which allowed him to received many awards for his songs.经历经历省略句省略句状语从句状语从句定语从句定语从句注意尽量用非谓语动词注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼使文章精炼尽量用复合句尽量用复合句,倒装倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章非限定定语从句等，润色文章 His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by

5、 others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.评价评价注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组1.他他1910年年11月月2日生于一个富裕家庭日生于一个富裕家庭,2005年年4月月24日因病于北京逝世。日因病于北京逝世。(due to)He was born into a rich family on November 2,1910 and died due to disease in Beijing on April 24,20

6、05.Born into a rich family on November 2,1910,he passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24,2005.2.他大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改他大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。变主意。When he went to college,he first chose to work on medicine but then changed his mind.3.他他19301935年于清华大学学习，之后到年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造英国继续深造.(further educati

7、on)Between 1930 and 1935,he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education.4.他获得博士学位。他获得博士学位。He received his doctors degree.5.他一生致力于社会科学他一生致力于社会科学(sociology)研究，促研究，促使使(advance)中国农村经济发展。中国农村经济发展。He devoted himself to the research on sociologyand advanced the development

8、 of Chinas ruraleconomy.费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。生。生平生平1910年年11月月2日生于一个富裕家庭。日生于一个富裕家庭。2005年年4月月24日因病日因病于北京逝世。于北京逝世。经历经历1、大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。、大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。2、19301935年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造，并获得博士学位。造，并获得博士学位。3、1938年

9、后，曾任教于清华大学和北京大学。年后，曾任教于清华大学和北京大学。评价评价1、致力于社会科学研究，促使中国农村经济发展。、致力于社会科学研究，促使中国农村经济发展。2、费孝通是一个活到老，学到老的人。、费孝通是一个活到老，学到老的人。参考词汇：参考词汇：社会学家 sociologist;社会活动家 social activist【写作要求写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。How How dodoyouyoudodothe the Basic Basic WritingWriting?The suggested steps:The suggested steps:1.

10、审题审题:确定文体、人称和时态确定文体、人称和时态 2.整合信息整合信息:把所有内容整合成把所有内容整合成5句句 3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构翻译句子：考虑语法结构 4.连句成篇连句成篇 5.检查检查费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。生。生平生平1910年年11月月2日生于一个富裕家庭。日生于一个富裕家庭。2005年年4月月24日因病日因病于北京逝世。于北京逝世。经历经历1、大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。、大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改

11、变主意。2、19301935年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造，并获得博士学位。造，并获得博士学位。3、1938年后，曾任教于清华大学和北京大学。年后，曾任教于清华大学和北京大学。评价评价1、致力于社会科学研究，促使中国农村经济发展。、致力于社会科学研究，促使中国农村经济发展。2、费孝通是一个活到老，学到老的人。、费孝通是一个活到老，学到老的人。参考词汇：参考词汇：社会学家 sociologist;社会活动家 social activist【写作要求写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。检查检查(How to correct?)1、是

12、否恰好五句话？是否恰好五句话？、是否每句都含必要信息？、是否每句都含必要信息？、可否自由发挥？、可否自由发挥？、pants纠错原则：纠错原则：1)pattern 2)agreement 3)number 4)tense 5)spelling .Born into a rich family on November 2,1910,Fei Xiaotong,a famous Chinese sociologist and social activist,passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24,2005.When going to coll

13、ege,he first chose to study medicine but then changed his mind.Between 1930 and 1935,he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education，where he received his doctors degree.After 1938,he once taught in Tsinghua University and Peking University.Fei,who studied hard all h

14、is whole life,devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.出出 生生1923年年5月月,香港香港.经历经历1,7岁丧父岁丧父,家境贫困家境贫困;2,1955年后年后,经营建筑经营建筑(architecture),航运航运,石油等石油等,成为成为国内外知名人士国内外知名人士;3,改革开放改革开放(the reform and open policy)以来以来,先后捐先后捐资支持教育资支持教育,文化文化,体育体育,和福利事业款项达和福

15、利事业款项达100多亿港元多亿港元.影影 响响成为成为感动中国感动中国的人物的人物(Moving China hero).请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章.牛刀小试牛刀小试:Now comes your turn!In May 1923,Dr Huo Yingdong was born from a poor family in Hong Kong.At the age of ten,his father died.After 1955,he was engaged in architecture,shipping,petroleum and becam

16、e a famous person at home and abroad.Since the beginning of the reform and open policy,he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education,culture,sports,and public welfare in Mainland.He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country,which makes him a Moving China hero.