如何进行英语写作教学课件.ppt

1、第五档（很好）（第五档（很好）（25-3025-30分）分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖所有内容要点。覆盖所有内容要点。-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期写作目的。完全达到了预期写作目的。2006年全国高考英语书面表达评分标准：年全国高考英语书面表

2、达评分标准：语句流畅自然，层次清楚语句流畅自然，层次清楚语篇信息齐全语篇信息齐全应用较高级词汇应用较高级词汇注意句与句的连贯性注意句与句的连贯性丰富的句式表达丰富的句式表达书面整洁书面整洁1 1、积累高级词汇、积累高级词汇2 2、熟练运用、熟练运用1010种常用句型种常用句型3 3、背熟过渡词、背熟过渡词4 4、多读多背好文章、范文、多读多背好文章、范文5 5、注意书法练习、注意书法练习1.我们每天有许多作业做。2.非常感谢你的帮助。3.我们家的浴室和厨房很好。We have endless work to do every day.I feel thankful grateful for y

3、our help.I appreciate your help very much.Our bathroom and kitchen are well furnished.1.It is adj.n.for sb.to do及其变形 对待考试有个正确的态度非常重要对待考试有个正确的态度非常重要。使我们的父母过上幸福的生活是我们的职责。使我们的父母过上幸福的生活是我们的职责。科技的发展使我们太空旅游成为可能科技的发展使我们太空旅游成为可能。The development of science and technology makes it possible for us to travel in

4、 space.Its important to have a right attitude towards examinations.Its our responsibility to enable our parents to lead a happy life.2.With复合结构1)这部电影叫 War of the worlds，由Steven Spielberg执导，Tom Cruise主演。2)由于每天有这么多的人用英语交流，熟练掌握一门外语变得越来越重要。3.非谓语动词非谓语动词The film is called War of the Worlds,directed by Ste

5、ven Spielberg with Tom Cruise playing the leading role.With so many people communicating in English every day,it becomes more and more important to have a good knowledge of English.5、强调句式强调句式 25%的学生认为家族基因使他们肥胖。4、倒装句式、倒装句式 平时努力学习，做好准备。只有这样才能克服考试平时努力学习，做好准备。只有这样才能克服考试 紧张情绪。紧张情绪。Study hard every day an

6、d make good preparations.Only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure.25 percent of the students claim that its the family genes that are to blame for their obesity.6、while连接的并列句连接的并列句 不同年龄的人有不同的运动方式。中年人喜欢晚上在广场上跳舞，年轻喜欢夏天游泳，冬天滑冰。7、when连接的并列句连接的并列句 他正认真地看电视突然电话铃响了。People of different ages

7、 have various choices in sports.Quite a few middle-aged prefer to dance together in squares in the evening,while the young peoples favorite is to go swimming in summer and go skating in winter.He was watching TV attentively when the bell rang.8、有有15%的学生没有意识到肥胖的危险。的学生没有意识到肥胖的危险。我们组有我们组有30人，人，15名男生。名男

8、生。许多学生认为营养过剩使得他们成为现在这样许多学生认为营养过剩使得他们成为现在这样。The students who dont realize the danger of obesity make up fifteen percent.Our group consists of 30 people,of whom 15 are boys.Many students say that they are supplied with too much fatty and rich diet,which makes them what they are now.定语从句9、not only but

9、also Our parents not only give birth to us,but also bring us up with care and love.10、用名词性从句代替名词。、用名词性从句代替名词。我将尽我所能来帮助你。I will do what I can to help you.whats more,in addition,besides,furthermore，let alone,worse still,moreover转折型：转折型：on the other hand,on the contrary,instead,otherwise,however,yet,ne

10、vertheless列举型：列举型：firstlysecondlyfinally;on the one hand,on the other hand;for one thing,for another 见解型：见解型：in my oppinion,personally speaking,as far as Im concerned解释型：解释型：that is(to say),in other words总结型：总结型：in a word,to sum up,in short写作一般分以下几个步骤：写作一般分以下几个步骤：1 1 审题审题 理解题意、抓住中心。理解题意、抓住中心。审文体审文体，

11、审人称审人称，审审时态时态，审要点审要点。2 2 构思构思 按照作文主旨组织文章框架，拟出提纲，按照作文主旨组织文章框架，拟出提纲，设计每段的主题句，再围绕主题句考虑扩展句，最后设计每段的主题句，再围绕主题句考虑扩展句，最后是结尾句，对全段内容归纳、总结或提出建议。是结尾句，对全段内容归纳、总结或提出建议。3 3 组织文章组织文章 确定关键词，连词成句，连句成文。确定关键词，连词成句，连句成文。4 4 修改修改 从以下几个方面着手：从以下几个方面着手：a.a.主谓是否一致主谓是否一致 b.b.时态是否混乱时态是否混乱 c.c.拼写是否有错拼写是否有错 d.d.标点、大小写是否正标点、大小写是否

12、正确确 e.e.用词是否得当用词是否得当 f.f.句子成份是否完整句子成份是否完整5 5 抄写抄写 书写时要注意清晰匀称、美观大方，每个书写时要注意清晰匀称、美观大方，每个字母（大小写）、标点符号乃至字距、行距都要一丝字母（大小写）、标点符号乃至字距、行距都要一丝不苟。不苟。1假如你校与澳大利亚某中学是友好学校，对方假如你校与澳大利亚某中学是友好学校，对方校刊来信想了解你校选修课的开设情况校刊来信想了解你校选修课的开设情况.请根据请根据下表提供的学生调查问卷，用英语写一篇报道下表提供的学生调查问卷，用英语写一篇报道.课程门类课程门类上课时间上课时间学生反映学生反映学生学生要求要求十余种十余种（

13、学生可（学生可任选）任选）每周二每周二下午下午3:45-4:251.十分感兴趣十分感兴趣2.有大量的实践机会，学到课有大量的实践机会，学到课外知识外知识3计算机，旅游英语，艺术计算机，旅游英语，艺术最受欢迎最受欢迎1.增加选修课增加选修课2.减少作业量减少作业量3组织参观，了组织参观，了解社会解社会注意：1.报道需包括表内提供的所有内容.2.词数：100左右。报道题目已给出.3.生词：optional选择的.23 However,2Para 1 more than ten optional courses choose from from 3:45 to 4:25 every Tuesday

14、afternoonThis term our school has offered more than ten optional courses,from which students can choose.?Para 2-Atake great interest in .get much practicelearn a lot aboutThey say they have got and they have learned.favorites Para 2-B more optional courses will be offered their homework should be re

15、duced more trips and visits should be organized learn more about society(what is going on outside school)However,students hope while They suggest so that they can.However,This term our school has offered more than ten optional courses,from which students can choose.The courses are given from 3:45 to

16、 4:25 every Tuesday afternoon.Students take great interest in the optional courses.Their favorites are computer,travel English,art and so on.They say they have got a great deal of practice and they have learned a lot that is not taught in the textbook.However,students hope more optional courses will be offered while their homework should be reduced.They suggest more trips and visits should be organized so that they can learn more about what is going on outside school.信息点全，文章紧凑，时态准确，信息点全，文章紧凑，时态准确，句式丰富，层次分明，使用连接词句式丰富，层次分明，使用连接词感谢您的聆听！Thank youThank you！