初中英语写作教学专题讲座课件.ppt

1、How to teach writing 2023-2-2Do you enjoy giving writing assignments?学生写作错误过多学生写作错误过多 不重视或畏惧写作不重视或畏惧写作 难批改难批改 你辛苦付出多你辛苦付出多 学生改进不大学生改进不大 书写的问题书写的问题 教学的整体设计和规划不够教学的整体设计和规划不够 没有好的训练方法没有好的训练方法 教学资源缺乏教学资源缺乏 学生不听话学生不听话小时侯小时侯 乡愁是一枚小小的邮票乡愁是一枚小小的邮票 我在这头我在这头 母亲在那头母亲在那头 长大后长大后 乡愁是一张窄窄的船票乡愁是一张窄窄的船票 我在这头我在这头 新娘在

2、那头新娘在那头 后来啊后来啊 乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓 我在外头我在外头 母亲在里头母亲在里头 而现在而现在 乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡 我在这头我在这头 大陆在那头大陆在那头 初一时初一时 作文之愁是一枚小小的邮票作文之愁是一枚小小的邮票 我在这头我在这头 分数在那头分数在那头 初二时初二时 作文之愁是一张窄窄的船票作文之愁是一张窄窄的船票 我在这头我在这头 例文在那头例文在那头 初三时啊初三时啊 作文之愁是一方矮矮的坟墓作文之愁是一方矮矮的坟墓 我在外头我在外头 梦想在里头梦想在里头 而中考时而中考时 作文之愁是一湾深深的鸿沟作文之愁是一湾深深的鸿沟 我在这头

3、我在这头 改卷老师在那头改卷老师在那头 愁愁you or not Whether writewellwritebravelyWritingisonpaperThepenismightierthantheswordthinking,WRITINGallows learnerstime to think Its safer than speakingshows progressvalid assessmentintegrates other skillsis a real lifeskillsuits different learner styles英语写作是英语综合能力的具体运用英语写作是英语综

4、合能力的具体运用 是对学生进行全面考核的综合性测试是对学生进行全面考核的综合性测试 能够真实地反映出学生当前的英语水平和能力能够真实地反映出学生当前的英语水平和能力123普通初级中学英语课程标准普通初级中学英语课程标准(实验实验)强调在进一步发强调在进一步发展学生综合运用能力的基础上展学生综合运用能力的基础上,着重提高学生用英语获取着重提高学生用英语获取信息信息,处理信息处理信息,分析问题和解决问题的能力分析问题和解决问题的能力,特别是学生特别是学生用英语思维和表达的能力。用英语思维和表达的能力。七年级七年级“写写”的分级目标（的分级目标（三级目三级目标标）1、能正确使用常用的标点符号；2、能

5、使用简单的图表和海报等形式传 达信息；3、能参照范例写出或回复简单的问候 卡和邀请卡；4、能用短语或句子描述系列图片，编 写简单的故事。规范规范准确准确 八年级八年级“写写”的分级目标（的分级目标（四级目四级目标标）1、能正确使用标点符号；、能正确使用标点符号；2、能用词组或简单句为自己创作的图、能用词组或简单句为自己创作的图片写出说明；片写出说明；3、能写出简短的文段，如简单的指令、能写出简短的文段，如简单的指令、规则；规则；4、能在教师的帮助下或以小组讨论的、能在教师的帮助下或以小组讨论的方式起草和修改作文。方式起草和修改作文。规范规范准确准确流畅流畅 九年级九年级“写写”的分级目标（的分

6、级目标（五级目标五级目标）1、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；2、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师 指导下进行修改；指导下进行修改；3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑 关系；关系；4、能简单描述人物或事件；、能简单描述人物或事件；5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落 或操作说明。或操作说明。规范规范准确准确流畅流畅得体得体What is a good What is a good composition?composition?6分 14分考生作文考生作

7、文 212 12分考生作文考生作文3 15分 3分WRITINGspelling handwritinggrammarpunctuationcreativityvocabulary第一档：（第一档：（15-13分）分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，要点齐全，立意高。立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标 点，点，大小写正确

8、。大小写正确。导致学生扣分的问题：导致学生扣分的问题：They have dicided to try again.She leaved her hometown when she was young.This book spent me ten yuan.Is there anything you have difficult with？词汇掌握不牢词汇掌握不牢 Everything are going very well.I think do some sports is very important for us.语法错误语法错误He by bike to school.汉语思维方式写作

9、汉语思维方式写作He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart.In my life have many things happened.Today is raining.审题不准审题不准 My summer vacation Summer vacation is coming the next month.I hope I can have a good time.My mother is busy every day,she gets up early and does house work and then goes to work.In

10、the evening when she comes back,she has to cook for me.She is really tired.I love my mother,so I will help her to do some house this summer.标点符号使用不当标点符号使用不当She likes dancing、skating、surfing、boating and swimming.He said he could play volleyball,basketball I have a dream,said Martin。I hope you can sen

11、d it to me as soon as possible.I love you very much and hope you can help me.语言表达不得体语言表达不得体Playing sports can change students health and study.词汇贫乏词汇贫乏 My school is in the west of the city.You can easily remember these words if you use them every day.The party is a great success.My school lies in th

12、e west of the school./Youll have no trouble/difficulty remembering these words if you use them every day.The party is a great success.书写不规范1.Handwriting activities2.Sentence writing activities3.Paragraph writing activities中考阅卷感受：中考阅卷感受：1.1.阅卷时间阅卷时间短短；2.2.阅卷的速度阅卷的速度快快；3.3.阅卷老师的心理：阅卷老师的心理：给分中庸给分中庸 最吃亏

13、学生群：中等左右学生如何打动和取悦阅卷老师？如何打动和取悦阅卷老师？以卷面感人以卷面感人 以内容动人以内容动人卷面，体现了一种态度卷面，体现了一种态度1）书写的规格）书写的规格（1）应按照字母的笔顺和字母在三格中应占的位）应按照字母的笔顺和字母在三格中应占的位置书写。置书写。（2）每个字母都应稍向右倾斜，约为）每个字母都应稍向右倾斜，约为5，斜度要，斜度要一致。一致。（4）小写字母）小写字母a，c，e，m，n，o，r，s，u，v，w，x，z写在中间的一格里，上下抵线，但都不出格。写在中间的一格里，上下抵线，但都不出格。（6）小写字母）小写字母i和和j的点、的点、f和和t的上端都在第一的上端都在

14、第一格中间，格中间，f和和t的第二笔紧贴在第二线下的第二笔紧贴在第二线下（8）小写字母）小写字母a，d，h，i，k，l，m，n，t和和u，它们的提笔是一个上挑的小圆钩，不能写，它们的提笔是一个上挑的小圆钩，不能写成锐角成锐角（10）书写句子时，单词之间必须有适当的距）书写句子时，单词之间必须有适当的距离，一般以空出一个小写字母离，一般以空出一个小写字母a的宽度为宜的宽度为宜（11）标点符号要写在一定的位置上）标点符号要写在一定的位置上 汉语汉语英语英语句号句号。.逗号逗号，,省略号省略号顿号顿号、无无感叹号感叹号！!注意：英语中无顿号注意：英语中无顿号、有效训练方法列举有效训练方法列举 志愿者

15、评委志愿者评委 每排字数每排字数.2.Sentence writing activitiesI very excited.He must at home.I am like English.I was went to Chengdu last week写正确的句子写正确的句子I should go home see my parents this weekend.The final exam is coming,everyone has to work hard.There are many students in our class live at school.五种基本句型天天练五种基本句

16、型天天练 扩句扩句 缩句缩句 She does a part-time job She does a part-time job in a department store three afternoons a week.1.This word processing program is complex.2.This word processing program is more complex.3.This word processing program is more complex than the one I used two years ago.例句例句那个那个16岁大的男孩子没有关

17、岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。灯就出去了。第一步：找出句子主干第一步：找出句子主干 男孩男孩出去出去 第二步：确定主干的相关词汇第二步：确定主干的相关词汇 那个那个16岁大的岁大的男孩男孩子没有关灯子没有关灯就就出去出去了。了。boy,go out 第三步：翻译句子主干第三步：翻译句子主干 那个那个16岁大的岁大的男孩男孩子没有关灯就子没有关灯就出去出去了。了。The boy went out.考虑：考虑：时态时态 语态语态 第四步：添加修饰成分第四步：添加修饰成分The 16-year-old boy went out.The 16-year-old boy went out without

18、 turning off the lights.那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。_ Making sentences by given words;Writing sentences for the pictures;Reordering the sentences;Completing sentences;Correcting mistakes of the sentences;.亮点 选词选词robbedsuitsWhich is better?周末我们会有很多作业要做周末我们会有很多作业要做.A We have endless homework to do at the weeke

19、nd.B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.他没听我课上讲的东西。他没听我课上讲的东西。A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.B He didnt listen to what I said in the class.鼓励学生使用鼓励学生使用“高端高端”的词汇。的词汇。=endless/oceans of Playing too much computer is bad for our study.=gets in the way of=have a bad influe

20、nce on I am very interested in pop music.I have lots of homework to do every day.=show/take great interest in 1.Our parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.2.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers.3.When he spoke,he

21、 got more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he got.4.We should learn English grammar.Its important to learn English grammar.We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.The young man couldnt hel

22、p crying when he heard the bad news.Hearing the bad news,the young man couldnt help crying.肯定 VS 否定在Mary的帮助下，我取得了成功。With Marys help,I succeeded.I could never succeed without Marys help.We need to help people.The people are in trouble.We need to help the people who are in trouble.运用从句。运用从句。运用从句运用从句Th

23、e earth goes around the sun.It is a fact that the earth goes around the sun强调句；强调句；We can achieve our dreams by working hard.Only by working hard,can we achieve our dreams.加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfe

24、ct.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.写前活动写前活动写中活动写中活动写后活动写后活动激发兴趣；激发兴趣；激活相关信息；激活相关信息；明确目的；明确目的；搜集素材；搜集素材；熟悉相关语言。熟悉相关语言。根据提示填空完成语根据提示填空完成语句；句；仿写语句；仿写语句；口头说句；口头说句；看图写话；看图写话；听写；听写；检查语句；检查语句；观察、临摹字母书写观察、临摹字母书写评讲；评讲；展示；展示；小组交流；小组交流；板报、墙报。板报、墙报。To think freely and put down all po

25、ssible ideas that come to their minds.Brainstorming bad for health cause lung cancer expensive bad for non-smokers pollute the air cause fire dangerous waste money smoking in public place indoor smoking smoking in public places to select the useful ideas to see how these ideas can be put together 1.

26、bad for health cause lung cancer bad for non-smokers 3.pollute the air indoor smoking smoking in public places 2.expensive waste money 4.dangerous cause fire Mapping-2 following mapping given 10 to 15 minutes do not need to care too much about spelling or grammar Write a more detailed outline.An out

27、line usually illustrates the main organizing structure and the most important points of essay.The main idea of each paragraph with topic sentences and notes for supporting details.An introduction and a conclusion Read through their writings and check the clarity of ideas or the logical development o

28、f their arguments.Students check carefully the grammar,spelling and punctuation of their writings.Adding or deleting;Correcting errors in spelling,punctuation,grammar or choice of words.示例示例 1 weekendsweekends Internet Brainstormingdownload search for latest newsfast convenientwatchgamesE-mailsendin

29、formationInternet Make sentences using the words or phrasesdownload search for latest newsfast convenientwatchgamesE-mailsendinformationInternet 2.3.5.4.We can send some emails to our friends.2.3.5.4.We can send some emails to our friends.With the Internet，we can get the latest news.The Internet is

30、fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.How to change it into a well-organized paragraphReason 1Reason 2 Reason 3 With the Internet，we can get the latest news.The Internet is fast and convenient.We can find and downl

31、oad information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.n The Internet plays an important part in our life./The Internet is very useful in our life.With the Internet，we can get the latest news.The Internet is fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we

32、 need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.n The Internet plays an important part in our life./The Internet is very useful in our life.We cant live without the Internet.With the Internet，we can get the latest news.The Internet is fast and convenient.We can find and download informat

33、ion that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.n The Internet plays an important part in our life./The Internet is very useful in our life.We cant live without the Internet.Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life.In my opinion,In a word,In short,Generally sp

34、eaking,Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life.With the Internet，we can get the latest news.It is fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.We cant live without the Internet.Nowadays the Internet play

35、s an important part in our life.It is not only fast but convenient as well.We can do many things with the Internet.First of all,we can get the latest news.Secondly,We can find and download information that we need.Whats more,we can send emails to friends.We can even play games on it.In a word,we can

36、t live without the Internet.(70words)Body Conclusion/Opinion Topic sentence Supporting details Right Link wordsand sentence patternsA good compositionof “giving opinion”title1.1.尽量使用简单句，要牢记尽量使用简单句，要牢记“避繁就简避繁就简”原则，不原则，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。要出现单词拼写和语法错误。2.2.把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。也不要少

37、写。3.3.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，适当使用连词，如：贯，适当使用连词，如：and,so,or,but,and,so,or,but,Whats more;Whats worse,not onlybut Whats more;Whats worse,not onlybut also,neithernor also,neithernor 等。等。4.4.字体一定要工整漂亮。字体一定要工整漂亮。现在很多同学喜欢上网，但是老师对学生上网观点不一，请谈现在很多同学喜欢上网，但是老师对学生上网观点不一，请谈谈你对学生上网的观点。谈你对学生上网

38、的观点。TeachersOpinionReasonssomeagreemake friends，be good for studyothersdisagreewaste time,lose oneself in gamesI 示例示例 2词组短语法写不出好作文？不会写句子纯翻译，不注重语法不会用出彩的词组句型词组&短语He likes playing basketball.打篮球play basketball喜欢做什么事情like doing sth.他请你建议带一些礼物advise sb.to do sth.bring some presentsI advise all of you to

39、bring some presents.为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well?”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。（以上背景无需描述）短文要求如下：1.学生应该守时，守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗，不乱扔垃圾；4.请你就此话题再补充一至两个个人看法。要求：1.不要逐词翻译。2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。3.词数60-80左右。短文首句已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：dirty obey promise Behaving well is the secret of getting

40、 on well with others._be on timekeep promiseslie to sb.be polite to othersgive sb.a handtraffic rulesmake noiseStep1:找词组be on timelie to sb.be polite to othersgive sb.a handtraffic rulesmake noiseStudents shouldandDont lie to othersor say dirty words.We shouldPlease and give them a hand when they ne

41、ed it.Lets obeyDont Step 2:写句子or throw rubbish in public.keep promises.Students should be on time and keep promises.Dont lie to others or say dirty words.Please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.Lets obey traffic rules.Dont make noise or throw rubbish in public.First，.Second

42、，Third，.I will give you three suggestions.How to.How to behave well?Step 3:加结构Students should be on time and keep promises.Dont lie to others or say dirty words.Please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.Lets obey traffic rules.Dont make noise or throw rubbish in public.How to

43、 behave well?I will give you three suggestions.First，Second，Third，Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others并列：and,also,not onlybut also,neithernor,Either.or,转折：but,however,on the other hand因果：because of，therefore，as a result,重要性：first of all,the most important is,总结：all in all,above

44、 all,after all表自己观点：in my opinion 递进：besides,Whats moreStep 4:加关系词Students should be on time and keep promises.Dont lie to others or say dirty words.Please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.Lets obey traffic rules.Dont make noise or throw rubbish in public.How to behave well

45、?I will give you three suggestions.First，Second，Third，Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with othersBut Whats more,because ofkeeping away from traffic accident.not onlybut alsoStudents should not only be on time but also keep promises.Dont lie to others or say dirty words.Please be polit

46、e to others and give them a hand when they need it.Lets obey traffic rules.Dont make noise or throw rubbish in public.How to behave well?I will give you three suggestions.First，Second，Third，Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with othersBut Whats more,because ofkeeping away from traffic a

47、ccident.We will not make friends with someone if he makes noise or throws rubbish in public.Step 5:加从句、谚语Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.But how to behave well?I will give you three suggestions.First,students should not only be on time but also keep promises.Whats more,Don

48、t lie to others or say dirty words.Second，please be polite to others and give them a hand when they need it.Third，Lets obey traffic rules in order to keep away from traffic accident.Besides,if someone makes noise or throws rubbish in public,we will not make friends with him.All in all,I think smile

49、is another key to behave well,because where there is a smile,there is a friend.总结写作文步骤：1.找词组2.用词组写句子（没有语法错误）3.结构4.关系词5，利用名言或从句，使文章出彩。示例示例3 视频视频 批改批改 The summer holiday comes.More and more kids become unhappy because they have too many activities to do.The children dont have any lessons today four af

50、ternoons a week.Lets all go there to play.The students dont have much time to play with their friends.We all know it is important for kids to learn how to relax.It is not good for both kids and their parents.Many American girls take part in sports，dancing and singing groups.You can go to play soccer