雅思写作8分-逻辑一点通模板课件.ppt

1、雅思写作8分-逻辑“一点通”-(澳洲墨尔本)游洋雅思学校杨琳老师 传说中的传说中的“例证例证”ltopic sentence:lOnce a location is established as a main tourist destination,the effects on the local community are profound.l例证+启下lWhen hill-farmers,for example,can make more money in a few weeks working as porters for foreign trekkers than they can i

2、n a year working in their fields,it is not surprising that many of them give up their farm-work,which is thus left to other member of the family.l结果一+承上lIn some hill-regions,this has led to a serious decline in farm output and a change in the local diet,because there is insufficient labour to mainta

3、in terraces and irrigation systems and tend to crops.l结果二：lThe result has been that many people in these regions have turned to outside supplies of rice and other foods.l Once a location is established as a main tourist destination,the effects on the local community are profound.When hill-farmers,fo

4、r example,can make more money in a few weeks working as porters for foreign trekkers than they can in a year working in their fields,it is not surprising that many of them give up their farm-work,which is thus left to other member of the family.In some hill-regions,this has led to a serious decline

5、in farm output and a change in the local diet,because there is insufficient labour to maintain terraces and irrigation systems and tend to crops.The result has been that many people in these regions have turned to outside supplies of rice and other foods.并列lSuccessful sports professionals can earn a

6、 great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and given your own opinion.lThose who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with r

7、eal talent are very few(有才),and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful（成功标记）.l Competition is constant（压力持久）and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career（职业生涯短）.l The pressure from the media is intense（压力大）and there i

8、s little privacy out of the spotlight（丧失隐私）.l So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings递进递进l“Prevention is better than cure.”Out of a countrys health budget,a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.To what extent do yo

9、u agree of disagree with this statement?lTopic sentence:lObviously,there is a strong human argument for catching any medical condition as early as possible.l There is also an economic argument for doing so.Statistics demonstrate the cost-effectiveness of treating condition in the early stages,rather

10、 than delaying until more expensive and prolonged treatment is necessary.l Then there are social or economic costs,perhaps in terms of loss of earnings for the family concerned or unemployed benefit paid by the state.l Obviously,there is a strong human argument for catching any medical condition as

11、early as possible.There is also an economic argument for doing so.Statistics demonstrate the cost-effectiveness of treating condition in the early stages,rather than delaying until more expensive and prolonged treatment is necessary.Then there are social or economic costs,perhaps in terms of loss of

12、 earnings for the family concerned or unemployed benefit paid by the state.自省自省:tourism优缺点优缺点lStories about the problems of tourism have become legion in the last few years.Yet it does not have to be a problem.l Although tourism inevitably effects the region in which it takes place,the costs to thes

13、e fragile environments and their local cultures can be minimized.l Indeed,it can even be a vehicle for reinvigorating local cultures and a growing number of adventure tourism operators are trying to ensure that their activities benefit the local population and environment over the long term.l Storie

14、s about the problems of tourism have become legion in the last few years.Yet it does not have to be a problem.Although tourism inevitably effects the region in which it takes place,the costs to these fragile environments and their local cultures can be minimized.Indeed,it can even be a vehicle for r

15、einvigorating local cultures and a growing number of adventure tourism operators are trying to ensure that their activities benefit the local population and environment over the long term.l2012年年12月月15日考题日考题lWe live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance,

16、but people do not visit them.Why do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas?What are the importance of museums to society?lStories about the problems concerned have become legion in the last few years.Yet it does not have to be a problem.Although some museums inevitably lose more

17、popularity than ever before,others displaying artistic masterpiece or technological breakthrough are still listed among the most frequently-visited places.That does necessarily mean that culture or history-based museums are of no importance.Indeed,.(今日作业）活动提示：l每周三下午：YY80151 北京时间：3:00-4:00PM 墨尔本时间：6:00-7:00pml课件+录音下载：www.globalielts.org.aul视频课程：www.globalielts.org.aul作业批改：l关注微博：hs_澳洲墨尔本游洋雅思学校l 注意：微博“作业评论贴”的评论中留下作业答案l 公众微信号mel_游洋雅思下周一推送答案