中考英语写作指导课写作课-整理课件.pptx

1、 基本句型结构的掌握基本句型结构的掌握简单句的句子结构：简单句的句子结构：1.主语+谓语。（这里的谓语为行为动词）2.主语+谓语+宾语。3.主语+谓语（及物动词）+间接宾语+直接宾语4.主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语（补充说明宾语的成分就叫做宾语补足语）。5,主语+系动词（be/keep/stay/remain/taste/look/sound/smell/feel）+表语（形容词，名词，介词短语）这种结构表示一种状态复合句：其结构是：从句复合句：其结构是：从句+逗号逗号+主句主句=主句主句+从句从句（1）条件状语从句：主句+连词（if,unless）+从句（2）时间状语从句：主句+连词（whe

2、n,while,after,before,until,till，as soon as ）+从句（3）原因状语从句：主句+连词（because）+从句（4）宾语从句：主语+谓语动词+that/if/whether/疑问词+从句。.一审(search)二列(list)三加(add)四连(connect)五美(beautify)考场作文五步法考场作文五步法假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报SurveyNamesHobbiesDream Jo

3、bsReasons Yi Ke writingwriterBring her pleasure and successBring her pleasure and success Li Rui Li Rui travellingguideExperience life and learn about Experience life and learn about different culturesdifferent cultures Wu Fan Wu Fanlooking after anima1sWWF workerhelp animals live in peacehelp anima

4、ls live in peace I(Xiao Peng)审题审题，明确写作主题、，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、时体裁、人称、时态态、字数、结构、提示要点和补充信息。、字数、结构、提示要点和补充信息。写作第一步：假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查报告。SurveyNamesHobbiesDream JobsReasonsYi KewritingwriterBring her pleasure and successLi Ruitrave11

5、ingguideExperience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1turesWu Fan1ooking after anima1sWWF workerhe1p anima1s 1ive in peaceI(Xiao Peng)一般现在时一般现在时 用简单的用简单的单词、短语和句子单词、短语和句子列出列出文章要点提纲文章要点提纲。注意：要根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想注意：要根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用明知同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用明

6、知是错的单词或没有把握的词句，是错的单词或没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道，符合英语表达习惯。场合，语言要地道，符合英语表达习惯。列列 (list)写作第二步：Yi Kes hobby is writing.She wants to be a writer.She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.Li Rui likes travelling best.He wants to be a guide.He can experi

7、ence different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals.He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.My dream is to work at school.I want to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English.I can be good with children and it makes me happy and

8、 pleased.加加首尾首尾句句，使结构完整。可以采取总分总三段式结构或总分一段式结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。加加(add)写作第三步：Yi Kes hobby is writing.She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success.Li Rui likes travelling best.He wants to be a guide.He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby i

9、s looking after animals.He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English.I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.I hope we enjoy our ho

10、bbies and our dreams can come true.a nice heada nice taila nice body恰当运用关联词，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。连连(connect)写作第四步：英语作文连接词英语作文连接词1.表文章结构顺序：表文章结构顺序：First of all;Firstly/First;Secondly/Second And then;Finally;In the end;At last 2.表并列补充关系：表并列补充关系：What is more;Besides;not onlybut also,In addition;3.表转折对比关系：

11、表转折对比关系：However;But;Although;On the one handOn the other hand;sothat4.表表 因因 果果 关关 系系：Because;As;So;As a result，therefore5.表换一种方式表达表换一种方式表达的的：In other words;that is to say 6.表进行举例说明：表进行举例说明：For example;such as+n/doing7.表时间关系表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,8.表达自己观点：表达自己观点：As far as I know;In my opi

12、nion，to my understanding,from my point of view,9.表总结：表总结：In short;in general ;As I see,As for me,As we all know,in a word;All in all;Generally speaking，Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing.She wants to be a writer.She thinks writing ma

13、kes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.Li Rui likes travelling best.He wants to be a guide.he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals.he wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English tea

14、cher.I like speaking English.I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.alsoalsoIn In this waythis wayBecauseBecause 美美(beautify)用好词好句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me

15、share ours with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing.So she thinks writing makes her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success.Li Rui likes travelling best.In this way he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals.I want to be an English

16、 teacher.Because I like speaking English.I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.She wants to be a writer.She wants to be a successful writer in the future,just like Mo Yan.He wants to be a guide.He is looking forward to

17、travelling abroad so he wants to be a guide in foreign countries.He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.When she grows up,she wants to be a WWF worker to save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace.Time is money.一寸光阴一寸金一寸光阴一寸金Time waits for no man.岁月不待人岁月不待人Knowledge

18、 is power.知识就是力量知识就是力量Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者，事竟成有志者，事竟成Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧熟能生巧Its never too old to learn.活到老，学到老活到老，学到老Skill One 适当适当运用名言或俗语运用名言或俗语Skill Two Make your sentences correct(标题、大小写、标点、单词拼写、语法错误、人标题、大小写、标点、单词拼写、语法错误、人称代词、第三人称单数等等）称代词、第三人称单数等等）Good good study,day d

19、ay up.We should do sports a week once.Watch TV too much is bad for your eyes.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekWatchingbeachieve 简单句简单句的扩展的扩展 She is a tall girl.She has long hair.She is a tall girl and she has long hair.(添加并列连词and)She is a tall girl wh

20、o has long hair.(运用关系代词who引导定语从句)Skill Three Express in different ways.Express in different ways When he spoke more,he got more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he got.We should learn English grammar.Its important for us to learn English grammar.同义表达的替换同义表达的替换A They listened to the music o

21、n the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beachSummary:searchlistaddconnectbeautify中考中考书面表达书面表达评分标准评分标准第一档第一档（很好（很好）（）（17-20分分）包含所有信息要点，能围绕信息适当发挥，内容丰富。使用较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准包含所有信息要点，能围绕信息适当发挥，内容丰富。使用较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚，没有或几乎没有语言错误，完全达到写作目标，格式正确。书确，句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚，没有或几乎没有语言错误，完全达到写作目标，格式正确。书写

22、工整，规范，美观。写工整，规范，美观。第二档第二档（好（好）（）（13-16分分）完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点，使用了要求的语言结构和词汇能满足任务；语言完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点，使用了要求的语言结构和词汇能满足任务；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚，达到预期写作目标。有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚，达到预期写作目标。第三档（一般第三档（一般）（）（9-12分分）基本基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯，连贯，格式正确，书写状况。格式正确，书写状况。第四档第四档

23、（较差（较差）（）（5-8分分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息，格式不信息，格式不正确，书写较差。正确，书写较差。第第五五档档（差（差）（）（0-4分分）未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，语句无条理，未，语句无条理，未能能清楚传达信息清楚传达信息。未写直接。未写直接0分。分。1.1.语语法错误法错误:you eyes:you eyes，must to do must to do

24、You should You should keep to do keep to do eye exercises.eye exercises.And dont And dont watch phone stay up late.watch phone stay up late.2 2.固定搭配固定搭配：keep your eyes keep your eyes health health,do do eyes eyes exercises exercises3 3.单词拼写错误单词拼写错误:.some.some advisesadvises,eat some,eat some friutsf

25、riuts4 4.标点错误：标点错误：5 5.有部分学生篇幅写的太长，甚至写满了整页有部分学生篇幅写的太长，甚至写满了整页6 6.卷面不整洁，书写不规范卷面不整洁，书写不规范7 7.传说中的恶搞作文传说中的恶搞作文出现出现，抄抄阅读段落；拼音阅读段落；拼音作文等作文等Rome is not built in a day.Tips:Tips:1.强化强化单词、短语的背记单词、短语的背记，尽量回避在作文中的拼写失误而丢分；，尽量回避在作文中的拼写失误而丢分；2.加强加强词性词性的的用法讲解用法讲解，尤其是名词（可数语不可数）、代词（人称代词、，尤其是名词（可数语不可数）、代词（人称代词、物主主代词

26、）这一块物主主代词）这一块；动词的时态、语态以及固定搭配等；动词的时态、语态以及固定搭配等3.加强加强五种简单句的基本句型五种简单句的基本句型在作文中的指导；在作文中的指导；4.着重着重强调强调卷面整洁和规范书写卷面整洁和规范书写的习惯，尽量减少学生在写作能力之外的失的习惯，尽量减少学生在写作能力之外的失分；分；5.建议考试建议考试作文不必写的过长作文不必写的过长，从而回避，从而回避“言多必失言多必失”造成的失分；造成的失分；6.建议老师们在最后一个月里建议老师们在最后一个月里强化作文分类训练强化作文分类训练，（不仅仅是一个大分值的，（不仅仅是一个大分值的题目题目，是是对学生综合运用英语语言能

27、力的培养，更是教师对学生终身教育负对学生综合运用英语语言能力的培养，更是教师对学生终身教育负责的责的体现体现）一、抓住复习之重一、抓住复习之重-词汇复习词汇复习1.将单词的读音，词性，词义结合起来记忆将单词的读音，词性，词义结合起来记忆2.重点重点复习高频考点词汇（贯穿在教材复习中）复习高频考点词汇（贯穿在教材复习中）3.根据根据 构词法构词法 记忆单词，省时省力记忆单词，省时省力4 4、展开联想，认真对比，归纳总结展开联想，认真对比，归纳总结 5 5、督促过关很重要、督促过关很重要二、抓住复习之本二、抓住复习之本-过教材（这也是解老师一直以来过教材（这也是解老师一直以来要求要求 、的的过教材

28、的复习方法）过教材的复习方法）三、抓住复习之魂三、抓住复习之魂-方法指导方法指导Thanks!1.新闻特写则是用形象的事实说话。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面进行描述，比消息更细腻、更生动、更形象。2.由于新闻特写的画面感特别强，因此常给读者以身临其境的感受。3.“花香蝶自来，题好一半文”，一篇文章有一个好的标题，就像一个人有一双明亮有神的眼睛一样，留给别人的是将是十分美好而深刻的印象，同时也是文学修养，语言功底，思想魅力的最直接的流露，从考试的角度来说，更是作文质量高底的一杆标尺。4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多一些有针对性的训练，掌握一定的技巧，达到需要应用时信手拈来，出语不俗的效果，感动自

29、己，征服读者。5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步挖深、提炼出来的题目，源源源于材料而高于材料，加进去个体的感悟与理解，充满了理性的光辉，于平凡中见奇倔，也是很多喜欢定议论文的同学拟题一种好方法，很有思想深度。6.路在脚下，更在心中，“前方转弯”的路牌不是要你停下，而是提醒你该转弯了，心随路转，心路常宽。让思维转弯是人生的智慧，因为挫折往往是转折，危机同时也是转机。7.自主性是天才的基本特征。正如居里夫人所说：“我们每个人都有能力干好一件事。”古今中外，多少仁人志士以自主为经，以勤奋为纬，编织成功。8.生存于宇宙间，同顶烈日炎炎，共沐明月清辉，我不比别人多，也不比别人少。只要勇于展示自己的个性与风采，我就没必要仰视任何人。