中考英语书面表达高分技巧课件.pptx

1、三段四步法“美文秀秀”写作建议一三段四步法内容审题清晰，紧扣提示语，不能偏题、离题结构分段明显，层次清晰，运用过渡词和过渡句，有严密的逻辑结构语言句式规范，表达准确，恰当、流畅地使用了一些高级句式一档文：17-20分：写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个），基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解二档文：13-16分：基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。三档文：9-12分：写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。四档文：5-8分

2、：写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太通顺，语法结构单调、错误较多，只有少数句子可读，影响理解。五档文：0-4分：词不达意，不知所云；只有2-3个短语可读。假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear David，Thank you so much for your emailIm very hap

3、py to tell you about my school life _How about your school life？Write to me soonBest wishes，Su HuaTo：suhuachinacomFrom：davidsmithbritaincomSubject：School lifeDear Su Hua，Glad to hear youre graduating from junior highIm interested in how you feel about those three years of school lifeWould you please

4、 tell me the following things.What do you like best about your school life？Whats the biggest problem as a junior student？Who has helped you most？And why？Do you enjoy your school life？Why or why not？I look forward to hearing from you soonAll the best，David审时态审人称审体裁审主题步骤一：速审题审内容要点应用文(电子邮件)主体部分为说明文校园生活

5、以一般现在时为主以第一人称为主收获、困惑、感恩、感受写句子列提纲步骤二：打草稿 Ive made quite a few friends by joining the clubI t s a n e x c e l l e n t c h a n c e t o l e a r n t e a m s p i r i tT h e b i g g e s t o n e i s h o w t o a c h i e v e a b a l a n c e b e t w e e n m y s c h o o l w o r k a n d m y h o b b i e sS h e i

6、s t h e p e r s o n w h o /t h a t h a s h e l p e d m e m o s t i n j u n i o r h i g h I t s c o l o r f u l a n d m e a n i n g f u l中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件(1)在连句成篇时，前后句之间为因果关系，可以用because或so来连接。(2)在补充说明原因时，可以使用besides或whats more来表达语义的引申。(3)在连句成篇时，前后句句意转折，可以使用however来连接。(4)总结时，可以使用all i

7、n all或in short，这样对整个上文能起到归纳和概括的作用。步骤三：巧衔接中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件步骤四：成篇章Dear David，Thank you so much for your emailIm very happy to tell you about my school life（开篇点题）I like the Football Club best because Ive made quite a few friends by joining the clubMoreover，its an excellent chance to l

8、earn team spirit However，Ive also met some problems over the three yearsThe biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbiesWhenever I am in great need，my English teacher always comes to help me【高分句型一】She is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school【高分句型

9、二】（介绍我的学校生活）In short，I enjoy my school life because its colourful and meaningful（总结全文）How about your school life？Write to me soonBest wishes，Su Hua中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件1.速审题2.打草稿3.巧衔接4.成篇章中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档 内容要点名词单复数单词拼写错误动词时态语态主谓一致标点符号综合性错误过于简单的结构/词汇要试

10、着变化 变换与美颜中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件二“美文秀秀”中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件 As far as Im concerned,a strict teacher is good for us.When I was in middle school,I was too lazy and I even didnt want to remember English words.H

11、owever,my English teacher was very strict with us.She asked us to dictate new words and practise reading articles every day.In the end,we all got high marks in the final exam.We were so happy.How important a strict teacher is!其实还不错啦，就是有点普通！没啥语法错误，凑合吧！开头写的还不错，就是没啥亮点！15中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt

12、课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件 be good for-be helpful tovery-extremelyask-requirehappy-satisfied同意转换用稍难一点的词汇替代比较简单常见词汇 A s f a r a s I m concerned,a strict teacher is good for us.When I was in middle school,I was too lazy and didnt want to remember English words.However,my English teacher was

13、very strict with us.She asked us to dictate new wo rd s a n d p r a c t i s e reading articles every day.In the end,we all got high marks in the final exam.We were happy.How important a strict teacher is!As far as Im concerned,a strict teacher is helpful to us.When I was in middle school,I was too l

14、azy and didnt want to remember English words.However,my English teacher was extremely strict with us.She required us to dictate new words and practise reading articles every day.In the end,we all got high marks in the final exam.We were satisfied.How important a strict teacher is!中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考

15、英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件01 I thinkAs for me,I hold the belief that Personally,As far as I am concerned,0203中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件01 try to do0203make efforts to do 努力做make every effort to do 努力做spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件01 want to do0203decide to do=make a deci

16、sion to dodesire to do=be eager to domake up ones mind to do中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件without any difficultyhave no trouble doinghave no difficulty doinghave no problem doingattractivebeautifulcharming，catching中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件1、You can develop a good habit easily.You will h

17、ave no trouble/difficulty/problem in developing a good habit.You can develop a good habit without any difficulty.2、I think we should try our best to learn English well.As far as Im concerned,we students should make every effort to/spare no effort to do learn English well.中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技

18、巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件结果状语从句：sothat铂金版When I was in middle school,I was so lazy that I didnt want to remember even a new word.钻石版把时间状语从句变为分词作伴随状语Studying in middle school,I was so lazy that I didnt want to remember even a new word.When I was in middle school,I was too lazy and didn

19、t want to remember English words.中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件She required us to dictate new words and practise reading articles every day.主动改被动We were required to dictate new words and practise reading articles every day.It is required that sb.should doIt was required that we should dictate ne

20、w words and practise reading articles every day.铂金版钻石版中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件In the end,we all get high marks in the final exam.We were satisfied.宾语从句We were satisfied thatWe were satisfied that we all got high marks in the final exam.Much to our satisfaction,in the end,we all got high ma

21、rks in the final exam.铂金版钻石版合成一句，把we were satisfied.变成介词短语。中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件众所周知：As is known to all,+句子魔鬼句型1毫无疑问：There is no doubt that 2It is+adj.+for sb to do sth.形式主语/sb find/feel/make it+adj.+to do sth.形式宾语3之所以的原因是 The reason why is thatThe reason why I keep doing exercises is t

22、hat it can make me healthy.4形容词最高级+完成时（have ever known/heard)Mr.LJ is the best teacher that I have ever seen.5Nothing is+形容词比较级+than to Nothing is more important than to receive education.6中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件顺承关系：for one thing.for the other thing；on one hand.on the other hand；to begin

23、 with；last but not least递进关系：besides;moreover;furthermore;in addition;as well,whats worse;whats more;转折关系：but;however;yet;instead因果关系：as a result,therefore,so that 总结关系：on the whole;in short;in brief；in a word；in conclusion;to conclude；in general 中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件1.Knowledge is powe

24、r.知识就是力量。2.Time is money.时间就是金钱。3.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。4.Actions speak louder than words.行动比言语更有说服力。（事实胜于雄辩）5.Its easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。6.It is love that makes the world go round.爱使世界更美好。7.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。8.Where there is life，there is hope.有生命就有希望。（留得青山在

25、，不怕没柴烧）9.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。10.Experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知。中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件开头：As far as Im concerned,a strict teacher is good for us.结尾：How important a strict teacher is!结尾应该呼应主题，又不能与开头重复。总结词In a word/In conclusion/Therefore/From my point of view

26、 一般可以用反义疑问句、感叹句或者祝愿句。In a word,we really need strict teachers in our learning,dont we?Therefore,I really hope that we can havestrict teachers to help us learn better.中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件 A s f a r a s I m concerned,a strict teacher is good for us.When I was in middle school,I was too l

27、azy and I didnt want to re m e m b e r E n g l i s h words.However,my English teacher was very strict with us.She asked us to dictate new words and practise reading articles every day.In the end,we all got high marks in the final exam.We were so happy.How important a strict teacher is!A s f a r a s

28、I m concerned,a strict teacher is helpful to us.When I was in middle school,I was too lazy andIdidnt want to remember English words.However,my English teacher was extremely s t r i c t w i t h u s.S h e required us to dictate new words and practise reading articles every day.In the end,we all got hi

29、gh marks in the final exam.We were satisfied.How important a strict teacher is!A s f a r a s I m concerned,a strict teacher is helpful to us.Studying in middle school,I was so lazy that Ieven didnt want to r e m e m b e r a n e w w o r d.H o w e v e r,m y English teacher was extremely strict with us

30、.We were required to dictate new words and practise reading articles every day.Much to our satisfaction,in the end,we all got high marks in the final exam.Therefore,I really hope that we can havestrict teachers to help us learn better.19中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件step 2step 1step 3step 1 磨磨“字

31、词字词”同意转换要活用稍难词汇替代简单常见词汇step 2 修修“五官五官”高级句型的使用step 3 创创“新句新句”短句变长句、从句要多用状语从句、名词性从句、定语从句、被动语态、it句型中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件step 5step 4step 6step 4 巧巧“逻辑逻辑”逻辑连接词灵活运用step 5 熟熟“谚语谚语”开头、结尾step 6 美美“框架框架”每个话题谚语熟记中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件三写作建议中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件英文写作是英语语言知识输出的过程，是不断磨砺、精雕细琢的过程，坚持，你会看到改变。翻译及仿写整合思考坚持训练周记随笔中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件