高考书面表达解题策略优质公开课课件.pptx

1、根据所给情景写150字左右短文书面表达要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。情景以文本信息或非文本信息的形式呈现，包括提纲、信函、短文、图表、图画等。考生应能：根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法、选用恰当的词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想。20201.描述事件 2.分析原因3.谈谈做法提纲 1.描述图片2.概述理解3.谈谈启示 漫画 20131.信息概述2.分析原因短文+图表3.谈谈启示2015请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。In recent years,internet voting has become increasin

2、gly popular in China.People not only cast on-line votes themselves,but also urge others to vote for competitions like the“Most Beautiful Teacher”and the“Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang,a high school student,is invited to vote in the“Best Police Officer”competition,organized by the local government to let the

3、public have a better understanding of police officers daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the“Future S

4、inger”competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition,the family will win an overseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much,but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote,or not to vote?This is a qu

5、estion that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。2016短文1.文字概述2.观点表达2017图表+短文1.图表信息概述2.分析原因3.预测趋势1.文字概述2.表达观点短文 2018 主题（文本信息、非文本信息）NoImage 看法（态度、原因等）NoImage 启示（解决方式、个人做法等）NoImage2020单一性综合性多样化简单化建议1:牢记形式服务于内容,以不变应万变.Are there different sentence patterns?*

6、afraid to let parents down（1）Behind the booming food delivery lie various factors.the new economic growth pointThere are some hidden problems.For another,make it a rule to order delivery food only when necessary so as to live a healthier and greener life.He is unable to go to school，let alone finish

7、 studies.We consumers should be _ to choose those restaurants whose quality of food is _.*an invitation to getting distracted from workMillions of Chinese parents,for whom having to do homework with their kids is virtually a nightmare,voice their disapproval over parental homework.People not only ca

8、st on-line votes themselves,but also urge others to vote for competitions like the“Most Beautiful Teacher”and the“Cutest Baby”.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；A post titled“Goodness,what have I done wrong to have to do homework with my kids!”caused a tremendous response in the society.*Bad beginning and ending20

9、15-2019书面表达话题汇总主题句（论点）+支撑句（论据）(Opinion,100-110w)用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。Su Hua likes his cousin very much,but he finds other singers perform even better.After millions of views on Sina Weibo,parents flocked to social media to share their own frustrating stories and experiences screaming

10、 and shouting their way through homework with their kids.生活与学习&做人与做事学习习惯、优秀品质、人生态度等社会现象&人际沟通科技、文化、经济、政治等自然生态&环境保护气候、资源、动植物的生存等人与自然人与社会人与自我 2018 消费排名 2016 网络投票 2019 中国传统服装 2017电影票房2015交通问题建议2:基于主题语境，关注社会热点,联系生活实际。吃透评分原则内容完整 语言规范 语篇连贯 词数适当 Structure Content Language ASSESSMENTStructureIs the essay div

11、ided into parts properly?Does each part have a topic sentence?ContentAre all the key points involved?Is everything to the point?Language Are linking words available?Is there any advanced vocabulary?Are there different sentence patterns?规范写作步骤结构+语言+思维审题确定主题构思成文谋篇布局遣词造句WhatHow 如何审题阅读下面文字和饼状图，并按照要求用英语写

12、一篇150词左右的文章。上图是2019年某市消费者选择餐厅时的关注因素1.用约30个词概括上图内容；2.请简要分析以上因素影响消费者选择的原因；3.谈谈你就餐的关注因素，并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。分析A Chinese boy is reported to have spent about 2 million yuan in studying in New Zealand but failed to get any diploma.He even could not take care of himself and his grandmother had to feed him.The

13、 man in the case is a socalled adult baby,because his deeds make him almost the same as a baby.He cannot take care of himself.He is unable to go to school，let alone finish studies.He even relies on his grandmother to feed him.However,he burns money faster than any normal student.He spent about 2 mil

14、lion yuan in two years overseas,but could not finish even the preparatory courses.We do not mean to judge his choice,but someone who lacks the basic ability to survive has little chance of success in any modern society.In a later interview,the mother of the boy was in tears and said she regretted no

15、t having taught her son well.She also told the story about how she “educated”her son:meeting all his demands,even the unreasonable ones.When he did not perform well in school,she simply spent money in sending him overseas;she would buy whatever he wanted.That was bad for her and bad for him.【写作内容】1.

16、以约30个词概括文章大意；2.谈谈你如何看待“巨婴”现象，然后用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。分析请阅读下面有关中国在线外卖现状调查的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。The fast food delivery service,which depends on the alreadyexisting restaurants,can cover a larger place with more customers without taking the seats of restaurants.Under the current economic and market

17、condition,the fast food delivery service has been the new battlefield of the fast food giants in China.Even MacDonalds and KFC,the two international fast food giants are fighting against each other for more market share in Chinas fast food delivery industry.However,Jing Linbo,Deputy Director of the

18、Institute of Finance and Trade Economics,the Chinese Academy of Social Science,thought that the fast food delivery is the new growth point of fast food enterprises.But the fast food enterprises should have certain comprehensive strengths to do this service,which is thought to be different from the t

19、raditional food industry in some aspects.Besides,with the development of the new industry,there also emerge problems.And some observers have given their warnings.They warn that if the fast food enterprises take no notice of the hidden problems,they will lose the customers in the competitive market g

20、radually.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.结合上述信息，简要分析外卖盛行的主要原因；3.请从消费者角度谈谈你对外卖的看法及建议，用23个理由支撑你的观点。分析请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。A post titled“Goodness,what have I done wrong to have to do homework with my kids!”caused a tremendous response in the society.After millions of views on Sina Weibo,parents fl

21、ocked to social media to share their own frustrating stories and experiences screaming and shouting their way through homework with their kids.Kevin Today from Huawei P10 I now consider homework as a source of conflict in my house.Sometimes all I think about when I am at work is my sons homework.Now

22、,millions of parents in China are calling for something that Chinas tiger mothers would have considered unthinkable only a few years agoa break from homework.Education chiefs are already fighting back against challenging workloads,with officials in the eastern Jiangsu and Zhejiang provinces,and also

23、 the northern Ningxia province,ruling that homework should not become“parental homework”or be set“above the level of the curriculum or the ability of the student”【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.用约120个单词谈谈“父母陪孩子做作业”所带来的负面影响，内容包括：(1)父母陪孩子做作业会带来哪些负面影响(至少两点)；(2)结合自身经历或见闻举例说明其负面影响。分析如何构思现象/趋势/问题(Introductio

24、n,30w)主题句（论点）+支撑句（论据）(Opinion,100-110w)简要总结(Conclusion 10-20w)概述看法总结高三期末考试高三期末考试概述主题句看法总结现象/趋势/问题(Introduction,30w)原因/意义/影响 概述分析观点/启示/建议/措施我的看法 The traffic issue is a hard nut to crackle.It not only affects our everyday life,but may also threaten peoples life.The three selections presented above are

25、 typical example.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways,there is still much room for improvement,because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.Whats worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do no think it vita

26、l to obey traffic rules.In fact,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone dont secure an orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that matter.Its everybod

27、ys duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.概述分析原因启示建议2015高考如何成文Content:*Everything needed is not covered and relevantStructure:*Bad beginning and ending*poorly organized and developedLanguage:*Chinglish*Grammatical mistakes*Inaccurate words and simple sentence

28、patterns请阅读下面有关中国在线外卖现状调查的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。The fast food delivery service,which depends on the alreadyexisting restaurants,can cover a larger place with more customers without taking the seats of restaurants.Under the current economic and market condition,the fast food delivery service

29、has been the new battlefield of the fast food giants in China.Even MacDonalds and KFC,the two international fast food giants are fighting against each other for more market share in Chinas fast food delivery industry.However,Jing Linbo,Deputy Director of the Institute of Finance and Trade Economics,

30、the Chinese Academy of Social Science,thought that the fast food delivery is the new growth point of fast food enterprises.But the fast food enterprises should have certain comprehensive strengths to do this service,which is thought to be different from the traditional food industry in some aspects.

31、Besides,with the development of the new industry,there also emerge problems.And some observers have given their warnings.They warn that if the fast food enterprises take no notice of the hidden problems,they will lose the customers in the competitive market gradually.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.结合上

32、述信息，简要分析外卖盛行的主要原因；3.请从消费者角度谈谈你对外卖的看法及建议，用23个理由支撑你的观点。The message conveyed in that bar chart and the article is that recent years have seen the flourishing fast food delivery service.And it aroused fierce debate among the society.学生概述原稿信息不全&偏题思维定势要点：(柱状图看趋势，文本找主旨句）1.The number of customers increase f

33、rom 2011 to 2018.2.The fast food delivery service a new battlefield of many fast food giants in China.3.There are some hidden problems.概述部分（图+文）关键词+趋势（现状）With the ever increasing number of consumers,the fast food delivery industry in China has witnessed a boom from 2011 to 2018,which has encouraged

34、competition and invited some problems as well.(33)学生概述修改稿分析原因挖掘材料信息1.Cover a larger place with more customers without taking the seats of the restaurants 2.has been the new battlefield 3.the new economic growth point 节约成本，节约时间，提高效率，增强竞争意识（服务）（1）Behind the booming of food delivery lies various factor

35、s.（2）First and foremost,with the rapid development of Internet,the food delivery makes people convenient to order meals online instead of waiting in a restaurant.（3）Alternatively,its hard for people who are engaged in working to get around to doing meals by themselves,in that case,food delivery may

36、save a considerate amount of time and energy.（4）Equally is important,it creats a new occupation an provides the chance for people out of employment to bring in money.学生原因分析初稿语言表达问题 （1）Behind the booming food delivery lie various factors.（2）First and foremost,with the rapid development of Internet,th

37、e food delivery makes it more convenient for consumers to order meals online instead of waiting in a restaurant.（3）Additionally,for those who are too busy to make meals,fast food delivery is obviously a good choice,as it saves them a considerable amount of time and energy.（4）More importantly,the ris

38、e of this new industry creates many job opportunities,which can greatly relieve the pressure of unemployment.学生原因分析修改稿看法和建议看到盛行的同时不忘存在问题立场：消费者角度内容：看法和建议外卖盛行的看法如何应对目前外卖行业存在的问题学生看法建议初稿 （1）From my perspective,seeing from consumers angle,there still comes problems in fast food delivery.（2）For one thing,

39、junk food does harm to our health in the long term,which may cause versatile diseases.（2）For another,if reckoning on fast food delivery,chances are that we stay at home instead of enjoying ourselves.思维问题学生看法建议修改稿 As consumers,we shouldnt ignore the potential problems with fast food delivery service

40、despite its increasing popularity.For one thing,keep away from those food enterprises whose food quality is not guaranteed.For another,make it a rule to order delivery food only when necessary so as to live a healthier and greener life.参考范文 The number of the consumers of the fast food delivery servi

41、ce has _ _ from 2011 to 2018._,there may _ some potential problems with the new industry.increased steadily However exist A number of reasons contribute to the _.Not only can _ quality and _ prices of fresh food be guaranteed to some _ but the service can also _ those who are too busy to prepare mea

42、ls themselves.Whats more,the development of the Internet has made it easy to decide on their favorite food and place orders,which is both _ and _.increase good reasonableextent benefit time-saving economical As a consumer,I am _the fast food delivery service will witness a constant rise in the near

43、future.We consumers should be _ to choose those restaurants whose quality of food is _.And fast food enterprises should actively take hidden problems into _ and provide _ service.convinced guaranteed cautious account quality 请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。A post titled“Goodness,what have I done wrong

44、to have to do homework with my kids!”caused a tremendous response in the society.After millions of views on Sina Weibo,parents flocked to social media to share their own frustrating stories and experiences screaming and shouting their way through homework with their kids.Kevin Today from Huawei P10

45、I now consider homework as a source of conflict in my house.Sometimes all I think about when I am at work is my sons homework.Now,millions of parents in China are calling for something that Chinas tiger mothers would have considered unthinkable only a few years agoa break from homework.Education chi

46、efs are already fighting back against challenging workloads,with officials in the eastern Jiangsu and Zhejiang provinces,and also the northern Ningxia province,ruling that homework should not become“parental homework”or be set“above the level of the curriculum or the ability of the student”【写作内容】1.用

47、约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.用约120个单词谈谈“父母陪孩子做作业”所带来的负面影响，内容包括：(1)父母陪孩子做作业会带来哪些负面影响(至少两点)；(2)结合自身经历或见闻举例说明其负面影响。审题:关键词:父母陪孩子写作业构思Part 1:概述主要内容Part 2:谈谈“父母陪孩子做作业”的负面影响Part 3:实例说明负面影响文本解读文本解读1.1.概述部分概述部分提炼重点信息提炼重点信息材料一:A post caused tremendous responses.have to/be forced to do homework with ones kidsfrustratin

48、g stories and experiences 材料二:Millions of Chinese parents are calling for a break from homework.材料三:Measures are being taken to solve this problem.My version Millions of Chinese parents,for whom having to do homework with their kids is virtually a nightmare,voice their disapproval over parental home

49、work.The authorities concerned are taking measures accordingly.(30)文本解读文本解读2:2:负面影响负面影响借用文字信息借用文字信息1.家长角度:frustrated stories and experiences;screaming and shouting*a heavy burden *out of control/be driven crazy*a source of conflict*an invitation to getting distracted from workMy version Parents find

50、 it a heavy burden to do homework with kids because the frustrating experiences always drive them crazy.Besides,as a major source of conflict among the family,it definitely causes great damage to their bonds with kids.文本解读文本解读2:2:负面影响负面影响借用文字信息借用文字信息2.孩子角度*be dependent on parents*unable to think for