高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文课件定稿.pptx

1、Summary WritingWhat is a summary?A summary is a brief statement that gives only the main points of sth,not the details(牛津高阶英汉双解词典)How much do you know about summary writing?普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的，从从总分中减去总分中减去2 2分分考试说明中评分标准规定

2、概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。complete(内容完整内容完整)coherent(衔接连贯衔接连贯)correct(语言正确语言正确)评分原则concise(用词简洁用词简洁)60词左右词左右complete correct coherent concise “4C”principle(“4C”原则原则)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿How

3、to write a good summary?1.Read 2.Paraphrase 3.Polish4.Revisestructure,key pointsrewrite in your own wordsmake it coherentspelling、grammar、vocabulary、words、punctuation（标点）（标点）高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para 1)These days our society develops r

4、apidly and forces people to rush.It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 (Para 2)The main reason that convinces us

5、to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of making mistakes in a rush.When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry,they cant make a sound decision and probably regret later.As the saying goes,“Haste makes waste.”We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less

6、 quickly.We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.(Para 3)Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.For example,taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane.However,taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot

7、 of new friends.Besides,it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way.On the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 (Para 4)Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.As i

8、s known to all,taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress.People think if they are not in a hurry,they will become a loser and that annoys them.But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally.According to some studies,people who have a slower pace suffer fewer

9、diseases,tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense,even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.(Para 5)In short,working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced.Yet,much stress cant bring enjoyment,friends and healt

10、h,which are much more important than money and other material advantages.Therefore,take your time and live your life at a slower pace.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 1:Readread for structure Skim the passage and answer the following questions.Q1:Is it the passage a(an)A.narratio

11、n(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)C.argumentation(议论文)Q2:How many parts can the passage be divided into?A.3(para1;para2-4;para5)B.4(para1;para2-3;para4-5)C.2(para1;para2-5)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 1:ReadSupporting ideas:Conclusion:Topic:Argumentation(议论文）议论文）Para1Para2-Para4Para5高考英

12、语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 1:Read read for key pointsUnderline the topic sentence or key points of each paragraphfocus on the first sentence and pay special attention to such words as:however,on the contrary,but,yet,therefore高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 (Pa

13、ra 1)These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush.It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.Step 1:Read(for key points)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考

14、英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 1:Read(for key points)(Para 2)The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of making mistakes in a rush.When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry,they cant make a sound decision and probably regret later.As the saying goes,

15、“Haste makes waste.”We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly.We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 1:Read(for key points)(Para 3)Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life bette

16、r.For example,taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane.However,taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends.Besides,it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way.On the contrary,being in a hurry will make

17、 us lose chances of enjoying our lives.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 1:Read(for key points)(Para 4)Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.As is known to all,taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress.People think if they are not

18、in a hurry,they will become a loser and that annoys them.But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally.According to some studies,people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases,tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense,even if the former finish jo

19、bs more slowly than the latter.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 1:Read(for key points)(Para 5)In short,working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced.Yet,much stress cant bring enjoyment,friends and health,which are much more important t

20、han money and other material advantages.Therefore,take your time and live your life at a slower pace.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to

21、 hurry to get things done.got accustomed tolive a slower life策略策略2 2：简化句子：简化句子 Although people have got accustomed to being in a hurry,leading a slower life is better.策略策略3 3：句型转换：句型转换 Although people have got accustomed to being in a hurry,its better to live a slower life.Step 2:Paraphrase策略策略1 1：同

22、义转换：同义转换高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of making mistakes in a rush.Step 2:Paraphraseslow downcommitting errors The main reason for slowing down is to reduce the chance of committing errors.chance高

23、考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 2:ParaphraseA slow pace of lifeslowing down A slower pace of life allows people to have more opportunities to enjoy lifewin/get/have Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.On the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lo

24、se chances of enjoying our lives.opportunities More opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace of life.策略策略5 5：合并句子：合并句子策略策略6 6：语态转换：语态转换策略策略4 4：反义转换：反义转换高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Some strategies to use to paraphrase策略1：同义转换策略5：简化句子策略4：句型转换策略2：反义转换策略6：合并句子策略3：语态转换

25、words(单词层面单词层面)sentences(句子层面句子层面)高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally.Step 2:Paraphraseofferspsychologically Finally,better health condition physically and

26、psychologically is offered by a slower life pace.slowing down can help Finally,better health condition physically and psychologically is what a slower life pace offers.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 Therefore,take your time and live your life at a slower pace.Step 2:Paraphrase Ther

27、efore,lets take a slower life from now on高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 3:Polish make it coherent by adding some connectives常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：for example/such as对比：on the contrary,by contrast结论：in short,in conclusion 高考

28、英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Althogh people have got accustomed to being in a hurry,leading a slower life is better.Step 3:PolishThe main reason for slowing down is to reduce the chance of committing errors.More opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace of life.Finall

29、y,better health condition physically and psychologically is what a slower life pace offers.Therefore,lets take a slower life from now onFirstly,Secondlyly,make it coherent by adding some connectives高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Despite being accustomed to being in a hurry,people ar

30、e recommended to lead a slower life.(要点1)Firstly,slowing down reduces the chance of committing errors.(要点2)Secondly,More opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace of life.(要点3)Finally,better health condition physically and psychologically is also what a slower life pace offers.(要点4)Th

31、erefore,lets take a slower life from now on(要点5)(63w)Step 4:Revise4“C”:complete,concise coherent,correct 高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para 1)Getting rid of dirt,in the opinion of most people,is a good thing.However,there is nothing fixed about

32、 attitudes to dirt.Time for practice高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 (Para 2)In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease,as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particu

33、lar danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538,the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the king of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry IV,King of France,was famously dirty.Upon learning th

34、at a nobleman had taken a bath,the king ordered that,to avoid the attack of disease,the nobleman should not go out.(Para 3)Though the belief in the of dirt was long-lived,dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is goo

35、d to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet,it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea;clothes need to be whiter than white,cloths ever softer,surfaces to shine.Has the hat

36、e for dirt,however,gone too far?(Para 4)Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt,which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary,Mary Ruebush,an American immunologist(免疫学家),encourages children t

37、o play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter position is gaining some ground.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 (Para 1)Getting rid of dirt,in the opinion of most people,is a good thing.However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.Step 1:Read高考英语新题型“概要

38、写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 (Para 2)In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease,as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.

39、By 1538,the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the king of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry IV,King of France,was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath,the king ordere

40、d that,to avoid the attack of disease,the nobleman should not go out.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 (Para 3)Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived,dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning away di

41、rt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet,it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea;clothes need to be whiter than white,cloths ever softer,surfaces to shine.Ha

42、s the hate for dirt,however,gone too far?高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 (Para 4)Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt,which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary,Mary Ru

43、ebush,an American immunologist(免疫学家),encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter position is gaining some ground.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.Step 2:ParaphraseIn the early 16th cen

44、tury,people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out diseaseAttitudes differ hugely nowadaysencourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter position is gaining some ground.dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th

45、century.scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 3:Polish常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：for example/such as对比：on the contrary,by contrast结论：in short,in conclusion 高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文P

46、PT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Step 4:ReviseOne possible version:People have mixed opinions toward dirt.In the early 16th century,people of some European countries,France,for example,believed that dirt on the skin could prevent people from getting ill.However,Since the 18th century,people have been t

47、old that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.But now some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help make our immune system strong.高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿ConclusionWhat is a summary?What are the steps to write a summary?What strategies can we use to par

48、aphrase?What is“4C”principle?It is a brief statement that gives only the main points of sth,not the details 策略1：同义转换策略2：反义转换策略3：语态转换策略4：句型转换策略5：简化句子策略6：合并句子高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿Finish the summary writing of the following Pass

49、ageHomework高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文PPT课件定稿 阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。词左右的内容概要。Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times.Many years ago,people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early,we would be energetic(充满活力的充满活力的)the whole day.

50、So,getting up early is of great importance to us all.In fact,morning is the best time of a day.In the morning,the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions(条件条件).Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than a