高考英语作文道歉信-课件.ppt

1、 第一段：第一段：第二段：第二段：第三段：第三段：表示歉意，开门见山，说明写信目的表示歉意，开门见山，说明写信目的说明道歉原因，对失误或错误进行说明道歉原因，对失误或错误进行解释（注意语句衔接，句式多样）解释（注意语句衔接，句式多样）提出弥补措施提出弥补措施,请求原谅请求原谅道歉信一般使用道歉信一般使用第一人称第一人称和和第二人称第二人称，时态，时态以以一般现在时一般现在时和和一般过去时一般过去时为主，同时注意为主，同时注意道歉信道歉信语气要诚恳语气要诚恳，要写清楚给对方造成不，要写清楚给对方造成不便的原因，理由要便的原因，理由要实际合理实际合理，表达得体，表达得体，充充分考虑对方感受。分考虑

2、对方感受。1.I am writing to apologize to you for not handing in my homework on time.2.I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.3.I am writing to make an apology to you for not handing in my homework on time.4.I am terribly sorry that I cant hand in my homework on time.5.I am afraid I ha

3、ve brought you too much trouble.6.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Paragraph 1 Express your apology第一段：写信目的，表示歉意第一段：写信目的，表示歉意 我真的很抱歉周五下午不能和你一起去书店了。我真的很抱歉周五下午不能和你一起去书店了。我希望这个变化不会给你带来太多麻烦。我希望这个变化不会给你带来太多麻烦。I am really sorry to say that I cant go to the bookstore with you on Friday

4、 afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.I am writing to apologize to you for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.Paragraph 2 Explain your reason1.The reason is that.Therefore,the doctor a

5、sked.As a result,I have not.2.The reason why I cant hand in my homework on time is that I caught a bad cold last week.3.It is mainly because I caught a bad cold last week,which is quite out of my expectation.第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释 我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一 个重要的班会，那是我

6、个重要的班会，那是我没有预料到没有预料到的的(beyond ones expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所以我我是我们班的班长，所以我 不能错过这个班会。不能错过这个班会。或：我的表哥李明告诉我他将在本周五下午归来。他是去或：我的表哥李明告诉我他将在本周五下午归来。他是去 年出国年出国深造深造的的(further education)。他让我和他父母。他让我和他父母 一起去机场接他。你知道，我们已经大约一年没见了一起去机场接他。你知道，我们已经大约一年没见了 。所以我真的不能拒绝他。所以我真的不能拒绝他。第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释 我不能

7、信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一个重我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一个重 要的班会要的班会(a class meeting)。那是我。那是我没有预料到没有预料到的的 (beyond ones expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所。我是我们班的班长，所 以我不能错过这个班会。以我不能错过这个班会。The reason why I cant keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon.That is quite beyond my ex

8、pectation.I am monitor of our class,so I cant miss it.第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释 我的表哥李明告诉我他将在本周五下午归来。他是去我的表哥李明告诉我他将在本周五下午归来。他是去 年出国年出国深造深造的的(further education)。他让我和他父母一。他让我和他父母一 起去机场接他。你知道，我们已经大约一年没见了，起去机场接他。你知道，我们已经大约一年没见了，所以我真的不能拒绝他。所以我真的不能拒绝他。Li Ming,my cousin,informed me that he would

9、return this Friday afternoon.He went abroad for further education last year.He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents.As you know,we havent seen each other for about a year,so I really cant refuse him.Paragraph 3 Offer a solution 1.I wonder if I could hand it in next week and I will

10、 do everything I can to finish the composition as soon as possible.2.I sincerely hope you can forgive me and accept my apology.3.I would appreciate it if you could allow me to hand it in next week.4.Would it be fine with you if I hand it in next week?5.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience cau

11、sed.6.Again,I deeply apologize for the trouble I may have caused.第三段：提出弥补措施，另约时间第三段：提出弥补措施，另约时间 我想知道我们可否我想知道我们可否另约时间（另约时间（make itmake it another time another time）。周六上午怎么样？我们可。周六上午怎么样？我们可 以早点出发这样我们将会有更多的时间来读以早点出发这样我们将会有更多的时间来读 书和选书。如果方便的话，就让我们书和选书。如果方便的话，就让我们8:308:30在在 校门口见面吧。对于造成的不便我再次表示校门口见面吧。对于造成

12、的不便我再次表示 歉意。期盼着你的答复！歉意。期盼着你的答复！I wonder if we could make it another time.What about Sunday morning?We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books.If its convenient to you,lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Looking f

13、orward to your reply!Skill1 for High Marks:Clear structure and all the points 清晰的结构和所有要点清晰的结构和所有要点 The letter of apologyPara.1 express your apologyPara.2 explain your reasonPara.3 offer a solutionSkill 2 for High Marks:advanced words,expressions and sentences 高级词汇高级词汇,短语短语,句子和不同的句子和不同的语法结构语法结构副词的使用：

14、副词的使用：really,sincerelyapologize to sb for sth accept ones apology,forgive sb hand in my homework on timebe too weak to go to schooldo everything I can to do sth高级短语：高级短语：Skill 2 for High Marks:1.I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.定语从句定语从句2.The reason is that I caught a bad co

15、ld last week and I was too weak to go to school.3.I wonder if I could hand it in next week.I sincerely hope you can forgive me and accept my apology.宾语从句宾语从句advanced words,expressions and sentences 高级词汇高级词汇,短语短语,句子和不同语法句子和不同语法结构结构表语从句表语从句 The reason why I cant keep my word is that I will have to att

16、end an important class meeting on Friday afternoon.That is quite beyond my expectation.句式升级句式升级 The reason why I cant keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon,which is quite beyond my expectation.句式升级句式升级 Li Ming,my cousin,informed me that he would re

17、turn this Friday afternoon.He went abroad for further education last year.Li Ming,my cousin,who went abroad for further education last year,informed me that he would return this Friday afternoon.句式升级句式升级 We can set out early.We will have more time to read and select books.We can set out early so tha

18、t well have more time to read and select books.We can set out early,so we will have more time to read and select books.Skill3 for High Marks:linking words 衔接语衔接语therefore,as a result,in addition/besidesfor one thing,for another The reason why I cant keep my word is that I will have to attend an impo

19、rtant class meeting on Friday afternoon,which is quite beyond my expectation.I am monitor of our class,so I cant miss it.使用衔接语把句子连起来使用衔接语把句子连起来 The reason why I cant keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon,which is quite beyond my expectation.As you know,I am monitor of our class,so I cant miss it.Skill4 for High Marks:beautiful handwriting 漂亮的书法漂亮的书法Advice:“Rome is not built in a day.”“Practice makes perfect”Practice makes perfect！