外研-高中英语必修4Module-2writing优秀课件26.ppt（纯ppt,可能不含音视频素材）

1、Module 2 Traffic Jam Writing外研版必修四 Four(too Read the passage on 1.How many problem talk about?Beijing Traffic What is a traffic jam?It means lots of traffic traveling in the street at the same time.To know something about traffic jamsTo write a passage about traffic problems individuallyBrainstorm-i

2、deas about the trafficPre-writing2.What are the causes of the problems?3.How many solutions does the writer find?Read the passage on page 18 and answer the questions.1.How many problems does the writer talk about?Problems causes solutions while-writingSome advice how to write a passage about the tra

3、ffic jam Learn some vocaulary,phrases and sentence patterns Practice最近，你班同学围绕最近，你班同学围绕“How to solve the problem of heavy traffic”这一话题进行了激这一话题进行了激烈的讨论，请将讨论结果写成一篇英语短烈的讨论，请将讨论结果写成一篇英语短文。要点如下：文。要点如下：交通拥堵的原因：人多、车多、人们遵守交通拥堵的原因：人多、车多、人们遵守交通规则的意识淡薄。交通规则的意识淡薄。第一步：审题构思很关键第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题一、审题 1确定体裁：此类文体为议论文；确定体

4、裁：此类文体为议论文；2确定人称：主要人称应为第三人称；确定人称：主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。二、构思二、构思第一段：简要提出目前多数城市出现交通拥挤第一段：简要提出目前多数城市出现交通拥挤这一现象，并展开讨论。这一现象，并展开讨论。第二段：分析出现交通拥堵的原因。第二段：分析出现交通拥堵的原因。第三段：针对这一现象提出合理化建议。第三段：针对这一现象提出合理化建议。第二步：核心词汇和句型第二步：核心词汇和句型1have a debate about就就展开讨论展开讨论2traffic jam 交通阻塞交通阻塞3to start wi

5、th 首先首先4lead to 导致导致5 last but not least 最后同样重要的是最后同样重要的是6respect/obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则遵守交通规则7deal with 处理，对付处理，对付8insist on 坚持坚持9pedestrian 行人；步行者行人；步行者sentence patterns1The reason whyis that2 Sb hold the opinion that3.The most important reason is that4.Only whencan sb/sth1.whats more/besides/m

6、oreover/in addition2.to begin with/first of all.at last.3.last but not least 最后但同样重要的是最后但同样重要的是.4.in a word/all in all.Transitional Words第三步：由词扩句雏形现第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.首先，人多导致了交通拥堵。首先，人多导致了交通拥堵。(简单句简单句)To start with,a vast population leads to heavy traffic.2.最重要的原因是一些人没有意识到遵守交最重要的原因是一些人没有意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。通规则的

7、重要性。(that引导表语从句引导表语从句)The most important reason is that some people dont realize the importance of respecting traffic rules.3.为了解决这个问题，一些学生建议建设更为了解决这个问题，一些学生建议建设更多宽阔的道路。多宽阔的道路。(不定式作目的状语；不定式作目的状语；suggest)To deal with this problem,some students suggest that we(should)build more wide roads.4.有人认为我们应该多步

8、行或多骑自行车。有人认为我们应该多步行或多骑自行车。(宾语从句宾语从句)Someone else thinks we should walk and ride the bike more.5.减少私家车的使用。减少私家车的使用。(private cars)We should drive private cars less.6.行人应该遵守交通规则。行人应该遵守交通规则。(obey)Pedestrians should obey traffic rules.7.行人在红灯时不要乱穿马路。行人在红灯时不要乱穿马路。(at a red light)Pedestrians shouldnt cross

9、 the road at a red light.第四步：句式升级造亮点第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用用instead of合并句合并句4和句和句5 Someone else thinks we should walk or ride the bike more instead of driving private cars.2.用用and并列句合并句并列句合并句6和句和句7 Pedestrians should obey traffic rules and not cross the road at a red light.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇第五步：过渡衔接联成篇How to solve

10、the problem of heavy trafficAlmost every city has a big traffic problem.Today,our class have a debate about how to solve it.To start with,a vast population leads to heavy traffic.The reason why traffic jam happens frequently is that some people dont realize the importance of respecting traffic rules

11、.To deal with this problem,some students suggest that we(should)build more wide roads._ and more bus lanes should be opened.Besides,someone else holds the opinion that we had better walk or ride the bike more instead of driving private cars.Last but not least,Pedestrians should obey traffic rules an

12、d not cross the road at a red light.In a word,only when everyone starts from himself can the traffic problems be solved.Relaxation Role play 假设你是北京世园会的一名志愿者，正在接假设你是北京世园会的一名志愿者，正在接受记者采访，就五一小长假期间市民去世园受记者采访，就五一小长假期间市民去世园会游览的交通出行给一些适当的建议。比如会游览的交通出行给一些适当的建议。比如尽量少开私家车，多乘坐公共交通工具；避尽量少开私家车，多乘坐公共交通工具；避开出行的高峰期

13、；遵守交通规则，绿色出行开出行的高峰期；遵守交通规则，绿色出行You(Y)Reporter(R)An example R:Hello.Y:hello.R:You know the May Day holiday is coming,during this period the citizens are likely to travel to the Beijing Expo,which may cause traffic jams,could you please offer some advice?Y：Ok.Y:Since the Expo opening,there have been s

14、o many tourists around the world coming heremany tourists around the world coming here,Which will be a big challenge for transportation.Id like to give the following suggestions：First of all,we shoud drive private cars less and take more pubic transports,such as undergrounds,travel buses,bikes and s

15、o on.Second,avoid traveling at the rush hour.Last but not least,respecting traffic rules is very important.R:Thank you so much.Lets have a green travel and enjoy our trip.Bye.Y:Bye.Sharing and appreciatingSafe transportation is the key.安全出行是关键。安全出行是关键。Civilized travel brings out our quality.文明出行显素质。

16、文明出行显素质。Green travel is worth praising.绿色出行需点赞。绿色出行需点赞。Beauty lies in the state of mind.美不美丽在心境。美不美丽在心境。Para1:problems Para2:causes Para3:solutions HomeworkWrite a similar passage about your town.Use the phrases and sentence patterns mentioned in the class.1.美育包括美术教育和审美教育,文化是美育的底色和灵魂,不能忽视文化精神的培养。2.欣

17、赏中国绘画,应该了解其中计白当黑、浓淡生趣、意境天成等艺术手法和精神追求。3.美育在中国近代历史上是一个很重要的概念,一直承载了爱国救亡、除弊振新的重任。4.当下美育应重传统轻西方,融汇西方与民族、古典与现代的文化,形成好的审美教育体系。5.要推动人工智能规模化应用,就必须推动人工智能与各行业融合创新,在制造、农业、物流、金融等重点行业和领域开展人工智能应用。6.美国各执行机构每年与白宫主管预算科技政策办公室沟通,说明优先推动人工智能发展情况,按时列明计划,可期获得该项目预算优先权。7用金银珠玉来装点堂皇的宫殿庙宇，这种行为使得大量珍贵的人力物力降低为符号的陪衬，只能揭示意义的贫瘠和精神的无力。8让日常的景色转换成大师的杰作，使普通的词语凝结成千古不朽的诗句，这些审美和艺术创造，体现着人的精神世界的富足。9“富”的美应该是一种由内而外的富贵气，它是一种自然流露的美，它得自个人长期的、自觉的涵养，也得自社会的普遍氛围，与金钱没有必然关系。