人教版八年级英语写作课课件Unit1.ppt（纯ppt,可能不含音视频素材）

1、2023-1-11人教版八年级英语写作人教版八年级英语写作课课件课课件Unit1My Weekend What do you usually do on weekends?exercise,eat breakfastdo homeworkgo shoppingplay basketballwatch TVread booksgo to bedActivities:1.写作第一步：写作第一步：审题审题，找出文章要表达，找出文章要表达 的中心、使用的主要时态，人称。的中心、使用的主要时态，人称。My Weekend 一般现在时一般现在时人称：人称：I 2.写作第二步：写作第二步：列要点列要点。用简

2、单的句子。用简单的句子 列出文章的要点。列出文章的要点。My Weekend I exercise.I eat breakfast.I do my homework.I go shopping.I play basketball.I watch TV.I read a book.I go to bed.1.I exercise.2.I eat breakfast.3.I do homework.4.I go shopping.5.I play basketball.6.I watch TV.7.I read books.8.I go to bed.列出短文要点列出短文要点3.写作第三步：写作第

3、三步：加细节加细节。给简单的句子穿。给简单的句子穿上衣服（加入时间、地点、人物、方式上衣服（加入时间、地点、人物、方式等。）等。）In most countries,people usually eat traditional food on special holidays.I go shopping.On Saturday afternoon,I usually go shopping.On Saturday afternoon,I usually go shopping in the supermarket.On Saturday afternoon,I usually go shopp

4、ing with my mother in the supermarket.I usually go shopping.1.On Saturday morning,I often exercise for an hour.2.I eat breakfast at 8 oclock.3.I do my homework alone at home.4.On Saturday afternoon,I usually go shopping with my mother.5.On Sunday morning,I play basketball with my friends in my schoo

5、l.6.I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon.7.In the evening I always read some story books.8.I go to bed at ten oclock.加细节加细节On Saturday morning,I often exercise for an hour.Then I eat breakfast at 8.After that,I do my homework alone at home.On Saturday afternoon,I usually go shopping with my mothe

6、r.My weekend is very colorful.I usually do lots of interesting things on weekend.I usually have a busy weekend.What about you?a nice heada nice taila nice body4.写作第四步：写作第四步：巧相连巧相连。恰当使用关联词。恰当使用关联词 句，使文章清晰，上下衔接自然。句，使文章清晰，上下衔接自然。1.表并列或递进表并列或递进:and2.表转折表转折:but,however,although3.表因果表因果:because,so,4.表条件表条

7、件:if,5.表解释表解释:for example,such as,6.表顺序表顺序:firstly,secondly,next,then,after that,finally,in the end;7.表强调表强调:also,too,either 8.表结论表结论:in a word,all in all On Saturday morning,I often exercise for an hour.Then I eat breakfast at 8 oclock.After that,I do my homework alone at home.On Saturday afternoon

8、,I usually go shopping with my mother.On Sunday morning,I play basketball with my friends in my school.I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon.In the evening I always read some story books such as The Old Man and The Sea.And I go to bed at ten oclock.巧相连巧相连5.写作第五步：写作第五步：美化短文美化短文。选择好的句型、。选择好的句型、词句，给短

9、文化化妆，戴上首饰。词句，给短文化化妆，戴上首饰。1.On Saturday morning,I often exercise for an hour,2.I do my homework alone at home.3.In the evening I always read some story books.because I think it is good for my health.My parents have to work on weekends.So I can learn something new from them.书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧(writing sk

10、ills)列列加加连连美美审题审题列要点列要点加细节加细节巧相连巧相连美化美化 My weekend is very colorful.I do lots of interesting things on weekend.On Saturday morning,I often exercise for an hour,because I think it is good for my health.Then I eat breakfast at 8 oclock.After that,I do my homework alone at home.On Saturday afternoon,I

11、usually go shopping with my mother.On Sunday morning,I play basketball with my friends in my school.I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon.In the evening I always read some story books such as The Old Man and The Sea.I can learn something new from them.And I go to bed at ten oclock.I usually have a

12、 busy weekend.What about you?范文展示范文展示My Last Weekend 一般过去时一般过去时人称：人称：I 1.起床起床2.帮妈妈做家务帮妈妈做家务3.做作业做作业4.去看电影去看电影5.拜访祖母拜访祖母6.打篮球打篮球7.读书读书8.看电视看电视1.get up2.help mom do housework3.do my homework4.go to a movie5.visit my grandma6.play basketball7.read a book8.watch TV Last weekend,I _ up.I _ mom do housewo

13、rk.I _ my homework.I _ to a movie.I _ my grandma.I _ basketball.I _ a book.I _ TV.列要点列要点gothelpeddidwentvisitedplayedreadwatched加细节加细节(时间、地点、人物、方式等时间、地点、人物、方式等)1.I got up _.2._,I helped mom do housework.3.I did my homework _.4.I went to a movie _.5._,I visited my grandma _.6.I played basketball _.7.

14、_,I read a book _.8.I watched TV _.early on SaturdayAfter breakfastin the afternoonwith my best friend in the evening.On Sunday morningwith my parentsin the afternoonIn the eveningabout futurefor an hour加细节加细节(首尾首尾)I got up early on Saturday.After breakfast,I helped mom do housework.I did my homewor

15、k in the afternoon.I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening.On Sunday morning,I visited my grandma with my parents.I played basketball in the afternoon.In the evening,I read a book about future.I watched TV for an hour.I had a busy weekend.I really had a good time last weekend.I had a bu

16、sy weekend.On Saturday,I got up early.After breakfast,I helped mom do housework._ I _ did my homework _ in the afternoon._ I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening.On Sunday morning,I visited my grandma with my parents._ _ I played basketball in the afternoon.In the evening,I read a book

17、 about future._ I watched TV for an hour._ I really had a good time last weekend.巧相连和美化巧相连和美化carefullyalsoI was tired but happy.After that Because that day was her birthday.Then And In a word,I had a busy weekend.On Saturday,I got up early.After breakfast,I helped mom do housework.I was tired but ha

18、ppy.I also did my homework carefully in the afternoon.After that I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening.On Sunday morning,I visited my grandma with my parents,because that day was her birthday.I played basketball in the afternoon.In the evening,I read a book about future.And I watched

19、TV for an hour.In a word,I really had a good time last weekend.范文展示范文展示 周末就要来了，你有什么打算吗？请根据表格提周末就要来了，你有什么打算吗？请根据表格提示，以示，以“My weekend plan”为题，写一篇短文。为题，写一篇短文。SaturdaySunday上午上午下午下午晚上晚上上午上午下午下午晚上晚上做作业做作业 去书店去书店买书买书上英语上英语课课去图书去图书馆馆看书看书陪妈妈陪妈妈购物购物看电视看电视My Weekend Plan提示一：一般将来时提示一：一般将来时 be going to 人称：人称：I

20、提示二：提示二：do my homework go to the bookstore buy books take an English lesson go to the library read books go shopping watch TVSaturdaySundayExample my weekend plan写好英语书面表达，应注意哪些问题？写好英语书面表达，应注意哪些问题？1、认真审题，紧扣提示内容、认真审题，紧扣提示内容 准确理解题意是成功写好作文的第一步，然后把要点一一写清，不能丢三落准确理解题意是成功写好作文的第一步，然后把要点一一写清，不能丢三落四，一般情况下，写清要点

21、后，要适当发挥，但必须紧扣主题，适可而止。四，一般情况下，写清要点后，要适当发挥，但必须紧扣主题，适可而止。2、做到语言基本无误。、做到语言基本无误。要点确定了，就可以构思文章的写作框架，先写什么，后写什么，尽量不要要点确定了，就可以构思文章的写作框架，先写什么，后写什么，尽量不要出现语法错误。出现语法错误。eg：名词的复数、所有格、代词的数与格，数词的基数与序数、：名词的复数、所有格、代词的数与格，数词的基数与序数、形容词的等级、动词的各种形式、句子的结构语序、标点等都要准确。形容词的等级、动词的各种形式、句子的结构语序、标点等都要准确。3、文章要通顺连贯。、文章要通顺连贯。条理要清晰，句与

22、句之间联系要紧密，连接词使用要恰当。不能东一笔，西条理要清晰，句与句之间联系要紧密，连接词使用要恰当。不能东一笔，西一笔，让人看了不知所云。一笔，让人看了不知所云。4、尽可能表达清楚，发挥想象力和创造力。、尽可能表达清楚，发挥想象力和创造力。每个要点、句子都尽可能表达清楚明白，根据提示，选用自己最熟悉、最有每个要点、句子都尽可能表达清楚明白，根据提示，选用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词组、句型来写每一句话，最好多用简单句，适当运用并列句、复合句，把握的词组、句型来写每一句话，最好多用简单句，适当运用并列句、复合句，切记不用自己没把握的、不熟悉的句式，以免写成切记不用自己没把握的、不熟悉的句式，以免写

23、成chinglish。5、提笔写文章时，要做到：、提笔写文章时，要做到：（1）语言精练，层次、结构分明。）语言精练，层次、结构分明。一般有词数限制，句子要言简意赅，语句达意，严禁写出与主题无关的话题。一般有词数限制，句子要言简意赅，语句达意，严禁写出与主题无关的话题。（2）用词贴切，力求变化。）用词贴切，力求变化。选用的词、句式，避免单一，反复出现，善用同义词、同义句表达出来。选用的词、句式，避免单一，反复出现，善用同义词、同义句表达出来。（3）时态准确，无语法错误。）时态准确，无语法错误。正确使用句子时态也是中考作文的重头戏。一般来说，记叙文是记叙已发生正确使用句子时态也是中考作文的重头戏。

24、一般来说，记叙文是记叙已发生的事，以过去时为主，说明文阐明的是事实，以现在时为主，通知表达的是将的事，以过去时为主，说明文阐明的是事实，以现在时为主，通知表达的是将要发生的事，以将来时为主。要发生的事，以将来时为主。（4）扬长避短，迂回表达）扬长避短，迂回表达 尽量用大家都会用的句子，大家都认识的词，如果某词不记得，或某句不知尽量用大家都会用的句子，大家都认识的词，如果某词不记得，或某句不知如何表达，最好用同义词或同义句表达。如何表达，最好用同义词或同义句表达。（5）字数要相当。）字数要相当。中考作文大都要求在中考作文大都要求在80词左右，一般不能少于最低字数，否则将被扣分，字词左右，一般不能少于最低字数，否则将被扣分，字数相符加数相符加1分。分。（6）书写工整、规范。）书写工整、规范。如文章书写潦草，会被甩到下一档，会吃大亏。如文章书写潦草，会被甩到下一档，会吃大亏。（7）反复修改，检查。）反复修改，检查。