Unit 3 Writing 建议信（ppt课件）-2022新人教版（2019）《高中英语》必修第一册.pptx

1、WritingWrite a letter of advice to Tonyabout healthy lifestyle Lets do a quiz about lifestyle!1.Do you sleep at least 8 hours every night?Never.Always.Sometimes.2.Do you have breakfast every morning?No.No time for it.Yes.A nice healthy breakfast every day.Yes.A quick breakfast most of time.3.Do you

2、exercise for at least 1 hour each day?Never.Yes,always.Yes,sometimes.4.Do you eat dessert when you feel unhappy?Rarely.Quite often.Sometimes.Facing the terrible lifestyle,what will you do?Change假如你是李华，你的好朋友假如你是李华，你的好朋友 Tony 给你写信，因为不健康的生活方式导给你写信，因为不健康的生活方式导致自身健康上出现问题，希望你能给他提几点致自身健康上出现问题，希望你能给他提几点保持健康

3、的建议保持健康的建议。内容包括内容包括(1)写信目的；写信目的；(2)请给请给 Tony 提出提出 3 点保持健康的建议；点保持健康的建议；(3)期望回信。期望回信。注注 意：意：(1)可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；(2)词数：词数：100 左右。左右。contents目录目录一精准审题，谋篇布局二头脑风暴，遣词造句三斟酌词句，妙笔生花四衔接过渡，斐然成篇一、精准审题，谋篇布局一、精准审题，谋篇布局第一步第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局精准审题，谋篇布局1 1、明确体裁话题、明确体裁话题2 2、确定时态人称、确定时态人称3 3、布局文章框架、布局文章框架4 4、列出核心

4、要点、列出核心要点第一步第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局精准审题，谋篇布局1.1.明确体裁话题明确体裁话题2.2.确定时态人称确定时态人称建议信；如何保持健康一般现在时；第二人称为主第一步第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局精准审题，谋篇布局3.3.布局文章框架布局文章框架称呼 Dear XXX,（顶格）首段：对收到信进行反馈；安慰对方；想给建议引出后文中段：建议1/2/3+原因/结果尾段：希望我的建议可以帮到你；期待你的来信落款 Yours,（右对齐）XXX4.4.分析题目，列出核心要点分析题目，列出核心要点1.指出问题所在2.提出保持健康的建议二、头脑风暴，遣词造句二、头脑风暴，遣词造句Brainstor

5、munhealthy lifestyle1 不吃早饭不吃早饭3 很少锻炼很少锻炼 2 吃垃圾食品吃垃圾食品4.熬夜到很晚熬夜到很晚 5 晚上睡不好觉，也不能专心学习晚上睡不好觉，也不能专心学习.skip breakfasttake little exercise eat junk food stay up late cant have a good sleep at night and cant concentrate on studying Brainstormadvice1.早睡早起早睡早起2.远离垃圾食品远离垃圾食品3.不吃含太多脂肪和糖的食物（不吃含太多脂肪和糖的食物（cut out）

6、4.养成一个健康的饮食养成一个健康的饮食5.每天积极运动每天积极运动sleep and get up earlystay away from junk foodcut out foods which contains lots of fat and sugardevelop a healthy diet work out actively everyday三、斟酌词句，妙笔生花三、斟酌词句，妙笔生花造句完成句子造句完成句子1.你应该吃更多水果蔬菜，远离垃圾食品你应该吃更多水果蔬菜，远离垃圾食品_2.你应该尽量不吃含太多脂肪和糖的食物。你应该尽量不吃含太多脂肪和糖的食物。(cut out；con

7、tain)_3.为了养成健康的饮食，你应该多吃水果蔬菜，为了养成健康的饮食，你应该多吃水果蔬菜，尽量不吃含太多脂肪和糖尽量不吃含太多脂肪和糖的食物的食物。_You should try to cut out foods which contain lots of fat and sugar.非谓动词改写非谓动词改写You should try to cut out foods containing lots of sugar and fat.You should eat more fruit and vegetables and stay away from junk food.To deve

8、lop a healthy diet,you should eat more fruit and vegetables and try to cut out foods which contain lots of fat and sugar.so that改写改写You should eat more fruit and vegetables and try to cut out foods containing lots of fat and sugar，so that you will develop a healthy diet.Working out actively every da

9、y is a good way to build up your strength造句完成句子4.每天积极锻炼是增强体质的好方法。（动名词作主语）四、衔接过渡、斐然成篇四、衔接过渡、斐然成篇Dear ,I am sorry to hear that .(就某事表示遗憾就某事表示遗憾)You have asked me for my advice and I will try to make some useful recommendations.(承上启下承上启下)First of all,.Besides,.Last but not least,.(提出建议并给出理由提出建议并给出理由)I

10、hope you will find these suggestions useful and apply them to practice.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.(结尾句，希望上述建议能结尾句，希望上述建议能有所帮助有所帮助)Yours,_Dear Tony,I am sorry to hear that you often eat too much junk food,stay up late and take little exercise.You have asked me for advice to keep fi

11、t and I will try to make some useful recommendations.First of all,you should sleep and get up early.As a result,you will feel much more energetic.Besides,you should eat more vegetables and fruit and try to cut out foods containing lots of fat，so that you will develop a healthy diet.Last but not least,working out actively every day is a good way to build up your strength.I hope you will find these suggestions useful and apply them to practice.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua