Unit 4 Write a Summary （ppt课件）-2022新人教版（2019）《高中英语》必修第一册.pptx

1、Write a summaryn.影响；结果Follow the steps below to write a summary for the text on page 50.Reading for WritingReading for WritingStep 1.Write a list of the main details.Step 2.Write down the main idea of each paragraph based on the details.Step 3.Organize the ideas and draft your summary.Step 4.Exchang

2、e drafts and give feedback on your partners draft.新闻摘要写作是对一篇新闻主要内容的提炼和浓缩，要求学生通过阅读，能理解新闻的主要内容、提炼其关键信息并能概括归纳其要点。这种写作方式既要求学生有准确的理解能力，又要求学生具有高度的概括能力。新闻摘要新闻摘要写作一般分为以下四个步骤：第一步：阅读新闻，摘选关键信息。掌握新闻主要内容和结构，摘出事件发生时间、地点、起因、结果以及可能的后续活动等。第二步：总结新闻各段主旨大意。概括总结新闻每段的中心意思，按照顺序列出要点，保留新闻中的主要事实，省略不必要的事实细节和事例。第三步：组织语言。用自己的语言

3、表达，可借鉴词语和句子。长度是原文1/3，内容只包括重要信息或事例。不需要加入自己的感情色彩和评论。第四步：修改内容，定稿。1.A summary is a short statement.2.It tells the main ideas and only lists the most important information.3.It doesnt literally copy the original text,which requires us to write in our own words.Features of summarySummary 概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重

4、述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。考试说明中规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25 points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。写作方法:1.定位查找核心信息通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写用自己的语言改写信息在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。

5、改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。3.核查添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。Part 1(paragraph1)Part 2(paragraph2&3)Part 3(paragraph4&5)A:The effect of the earthquake.B:The following events after the earthquake.C:date,place and event.Figure out main idea of each parag

6、raph.Review Part 1(paragraph1):date,place and event.EventDatePlace An earthquake hit Tangshan China on 28 July 1976.(2).Review the main points of each paragraph.Part 2(paragraph23):The effect of the earthquakeEffectEffect(2).Review the main points of each paragraph.Part 3(paragraph45):The following

7、events after the quake Soldiers and medical workers came and began rescuing and rebuilding the city soon after the quakes.Following eventFollowing event(2).Review the main points of each paragraph.Step 1.Read the text and write a list of the main details.Strange things happened in the countryside be

8、fore the earthquake.An earthquake hit _ China on 28 July 1976.Tangshan The number of people who were killed or badly injured in the quake was more than 400,000.Nearly everything in the city was destroyed.Soldiers and medical workers came and began rescuing and rebuilding the city soon after the quak

9、es.With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the citys people,a new Tangshan was built upon the earthquake ruins.Step 2.Write down the main idea of each paragraph based on the details above.Strange things happened in the countryside of Hebei,China.A strong earthquake hit Ta

10、ngshan and many people were killed or injured.The city was greatly affected and nearly destroyed.The rescue work began soon after the quakes.With strong support from the government and the citys people,the new city of Tangshan was built.Step 3.Organize the ideas and draft your summary.Pay attention

11、to the following:A summary should be around one third the length of the original text.Write down the key supporting points for the topic.Do not include unimportant details or examples.n.长；长度 Paraphrase/rewiteExpress the meaning of using different words,especially to achieve greater clarity.What can

12、we do after finding the main points?What can we do after finding the main points?On 26 December 2004,a tsunami killed more than 6,500 tourists,fishermen and other locals in Southeast Asia.Monday,27 December 2004.The most powerful earthquake caused a tsunami yesterday,killing more than 6500 people in

13、 Indonesia,India,Thailand,MalaysiaFishermen,tourists,hotels,homes and cars were swept away.List the main points12Rewrite the main pointsSimplify and combineChange the sentence pattern（Para1）paraphrase(summary1)Thousands of people are missing and the number of deaths is expected to grow.The damage ca

14、used by the tsunami is making it difficult for rescue workers to help the survivors.Thousands of people are still missing,and the number of deaths is expected to grow.However,dangerous conditions and damaged roads will make it difficult to deliver food and supplies.12Rewrite the main pointsSimplify

15、and combineChange the sentence pattern（Para3）（summary3）List the main pointsSteps of summary writing.paraphrase(3).Rewrite the main points of each paragraph(in your own words as possible as you can).One possible version:Strange things occurred in the countryside before the earthquake.On 28 July 1976,

16、Tangshan was hit struck by an earthquake.Para1.Strange things happened in the countryside before the earthquake.An earthquake hit Tangshan China on 28 July 1976.Change the voiceUse synonymsoccurredstruckOne possible version:More than 400,000 people were dead or injured.Para2.The number of people who

17、 were killed or badly injured in the quake was more than 400,000.Change the sentence patterndead(3).Rewrite the main points of each paragraph(in your own words as possible as you can).One possible version:The city was nearly/almost ruined.Para3.Nearly everything in the city was destroyed.Change the

18、subjectalmostruined(3).Rewrite the main points of each paragraph(in your own words as possible as you can).One possible version:Soldiers and medical workers arrived and started rescuing and rebuilding work right after the quakes.Para4.Soldiers and medical workers came and began rescuing and rebuildi

19、ng the city soon after the quakes.Use synonymsarrivedstarted(3).Rewrite the main points of each paragraph(in your own words as possible as you can).One possible version:Because of the governments support and the peoples efforts,we built a new Tangshan.Para5.With strong support from the government an

20、d the tireless efforts of the citys people,a new Tangshan was built upon the earthquake ruins.with the governments support/aidChange the voice(3).Rewrite the main points of each paragraph(in your own words as possible as you can).sStrange things occurred in the countryside before the earthquake.on 2

21、8 July 1976,Tangshan was hit by an earthquake.More than 400,000 people were dead or injured.And the city was nearly ruined.soldiers and medical workers arrived and started rescuing and rebuilding work right after the quakes.Because of the governments support and the peoples efforts,we have built a n

22、ew Tangshan.(4).Organize the ideas,using conjunctions if necessary.Sample writingDateEventPlaceEffectFollowing eventsThen,However,Step 4.Exchange drafts.Use the checklist to give feedback on your partners draft.Does the summary give you a clear idea of what the text is about?Does the summary include only the most important information of the text?Is the summary the proper length?Are there any spelling or punctuation errors?Does the writer use the correct tenses?