2021年牛津译林版中考英语作文结构（ppt课件）.pptx

1、中考专题 书面表达PART TWO第二篇 语法突破篇中考作文中考作文“六步六步”走走 By Zhang Baozhu满分作文展示（前置作业）（前置作业）2021年印度疫情肆虐年印度疫情肆虐,5月安徽疫情再起，月安徽疫情再起，新型冠状肺炎新型冠状肺炎（COVID 19）在很大程度上影响了人们的在很大程度上影响了人们的生活。生活。请你以请你以“How to Protect Ourselves from COVID 19”为题为题,根据以下提示，用英文写一篇根据以下提示，用英文写一篇90词左右的短文。词左右的短文。写作要点：写作要点：1.减少外出；外出时佩戴口罩；2.勤洗手；3.多喝水，适当锻炼；4

2、.饮食健康，不吃野生动物。5.人称：人称：时态：时态：一般现在时一般现在时第一人称第一人称(read the requirements carefully)誊查连添列审书面表达 Main points1.尽量少外出，佩戴口罩尽量少外出，佩戴口罩2.勤洗手勤洗手3.多喝水、适当锻炼多喝水、适当锻炼4.饮食健康，不吃野生动物饮食健康，不吃野生动物 5.try not to go out,wear a maskwash your handsdrink more water and take proper exercisekeep a healthy diet,dont eat wild animal

3、s（前置作业）（前置作业）2021年印度疫情肆虐年印度疫情肆虐,5月安徽疫情再起，新型冠状肺炎月安徽疫情再起，新型冠状肺炎（COVID 19）在很大程度上影响了人们的生活。在很大程度上影响了人们的生活。请你以请你以“How to Protect Ourselves from COVID 19”为题为题,根据以下提示，用英文写一篇根据以下提示，用英文写一篇90词左右的词左右的短文。短文。写作要点：写作要点：1.减少外出；外出时佩戴口罩；2.勤洗手；3.多喝水，适当锻炼；4.饮食健康，不吃野生动物 5.用简单的英文句子用简单的英文句子或短语列出或短语列出要点。要点。来确定文章的框架，来确定文章的框

4、架，但必须确保但必须确保要点无要点无遗漏。遗漏。誊查连添列审书面表达 Main points1.尽量少外出，佩戴口罩尽量少外出，佩戴口罩2.勤洗手勤洗手3.多喝水、适当锻炼多喝水、适当锻炼4.饮食健康，不吃野生动物饮食健康，不吃野生动物 5.1.try not to go out,wear a mask2.wash your hands3.drink more water and take proper exercise4.keep a healthy diet,dont eat wild animalsIts necessary to.Its important to.Its a good

5、idea to.Wed better(not)do.At this special time,we should try not to go out.We should(not)do.1.添枝加叶：主语、添枝加叶：主语、定语定语、状语等；注、状语等；注意意句式多样性句式多样性 At this special time,we should try not to go out.Its necessary to wear a mask when we go out.Its very important to wash your hands as often as possible.Its also

6、a good idea to drink more water and take proper exercise to keep healthy.We should keep a healthyeating habit.Wed better not eat wild animals.I believe we have confidence and we are able to overcome the disease.（topic sentence）（the ending）Over the past months,COVID 19 has greatly influenced our life

7、 and study.In order to protect ourselves from COVID 19,we should pay attention to our personal protection and follow these tips.2、加首尾，使文章结构完整，开头和结尾应注意简洁漂亮誊查连添列审书面表达 Over the past months,COVID 19 has greatly influenced our life and study.In order to protect ourselves from COVID 19,we should pay atten

8、tion to our personal protection and follow these tips.Firstly,at this special time,we should try not to go out.Secondly,Its necessary to wear a mask when we go out.Thirdly,Its very important to wash your hands as often as possible.Its also a good idea to drink more water and take proper exercise to

9、keep healthy.At the same time,We should keep a healthy eating habit.What more,Wed better not eat wild animals.I believe we have confidence and we are able overcome the disease.恰当运用恰当运用连接词连接词，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。Firstly Secondly Thirdly At the same time Whats more 恰当的连接词恰当的连接词 表顺序表顺序 At f

10、irst,first of all,first(ly),second(ly),then,next finally/at last,in the end.表解释表解释for example,such as.表对比表对比while;on one hand,on the other hand(一方面，另一方面一方面，另一方面.)表转折表转折but,however,though/although.表因果表因果because,as,so,as a result.表条件表条件if,unless.表并列表并列递进递进whats more,moreover,besides,especially,in fact

11、,as well as.表观点表观点I think,I believe,I hope,as we all know.表总结表总结all in all,in a word,in general,last but not least.誊查连添列审书面表达1.要点要点是否齐全是否齐全 2.时态时态是否正确是否正确3.人称人称是否用对是否用对4.主谓主谓是否一致是否一致5.名词的名词的单复数单复数等等6.有无有无语法语法、拼写、拼写、大小写、大小写错误等错误等7.避免出现避免出现Chinglish现象现象8.前置作业2前置作业31.要点要点是否齐全是否齐全 2.时态时态是否正确是否正确3.人称人称是否

12、用对是否用对4.主谓主谓是否一致是否一致5.名词的名词的单复数单复数等等6.有无有无语法语法、拼写、拼写、大小写、大小写错误等错误等7.避免出现避免出现Chinglish现象现象8.工整，美观地抄写在答题纸上。工整，美观地抄写在答题纸上。卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分。卷面潦草一定要扣分。誊查连添列审书面表达2021年是十四五开局之年，也是建党年是十四五开局之年，也是建党100周年，各行各业都在周年，各行各业都在为建设美丽中国而奋斗。请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业为建设美丽中国而奋斗。请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业是怎样做贡献的。作为学生，你又该怎么办？是怎样做

13、贡献的。作为学生，你又该怎么办？Buiding Beautiful ChinaDoctors(save)Policemen(protect)Farmers(grow)Scientists(invent)Students(study)档次得分内容五档15-13能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。四档12-10能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误，但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚。三档9-7能写明一些要点，语言错误较多，但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。二档6-4能写明少数要点，语言错误多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达。一档3-0只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。评分标准Nowallt

14、heChinesepeoplearemakingtheireffortstobuildbeautifulChinaandachievetheChineseDream In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levelsIn order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plantsMeanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try

15、their best to save patients day and night Besides，they also take good care of the oldIn our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect peopleAs for scientists，they devote themselves to scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country.Summary习作习作steps 誊English writing添添列列连连审审查查Homework1.Organize your notes 2.Correct your writing