2021年安徽省英语中考复习考点分层练专题十七　书面表达 （ppt课件）.ppt

1、 中考英语（安徽专用）专题十七书面表达A组安徽中考题组Writing 1(2020安徽)假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下:1.熟悉家乡;2.乐于交流;3.擅长英语。注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:journalist(n.记者);column(n.专栏)Dear Sir/Madam,Yours,Li Hua答案答案写作提示写作提示1.这是一篇应用文,要求写自荐信。要以第一人称为主。时态要以一般现在时为主,

2、辅之以一般过去时。2.这是英文报招募小记者,所以要求自荐者拥有较高的英语水平,并且作适当补充。参考范文参考范文Dear Sir/Madam,I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown.I hope to be a member of the team.First,I know a lot about my hometown,such as its history and culture.Besides,I used to work as a journalist for my school newspap

3、er and I did a very good job.Im easy-going and always ready to communicate with oth-ers.Moreover,I have a good knowledge of English,and Im skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.Im sure to be the right person you are looking for.Id be thankful if I could get this chance.Yours,Li Hua精彩语句精彩语

4、句 1.精美词汇easy-going adj.随和的;communicate with与交流2.出彩结构Im sure to be the right person you are looking for.(you are looking for为定语从句,修饰先行词person)Id be thankful if I could get this chance.(if I could get this chance是条件状语从句)Writing 2(2019安徽)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:

5、1.经常做户外活动;2.很少用电子产品;3.坚持做眼保健操;4.注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mike,Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.Yours,Li Hua答案答案写作提示写作提示1.视力减退有多种原因。有运动量减少,体质下降;有饮食不当,营养不良;有使用电子产品过度对视力造成伤害等。可根据各条提出建议并解释原因。2.以第一人称为主,一般现在时态为主。参考范文参考范文Dear Mike,Im sorr

6、y to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.Id like to share with you some ways of protecting eye-sight in my daily life.At school,I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.In my free time,I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone

7、or computer.You know,the light they give off is harmful to our eyes.Besides,doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.Lastly,I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.I hope youll find my ways helpful.Yours,Li Hua精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇do physic

8、al exercise进行体育锻炼;avoid using the mobile phone避免使用手机2.出彩结构Lastly,I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.(to make sure.为动词不定式短语,作目的状语)Writing 3(2018安徽)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thank you,my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:1.严格要求;2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;4.注

9、意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。答案答案写作提示写作提示1.时态以一般过去时为主。2.人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。3.主要内容:严格要求;耐心指导;热情鼓励。参考范文参考范文Id like to say thanks to my English teacher,Miss Li,because shes helped me a lot.Once,I failed my English exam.When she found I was very worried,she encouraged me to study harder an

10、d promised to help me.After that,I turned to her for help every time I had questions.She was always patient to make me understand every single question.With her help,Ive had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you,my dear teacher!The love and support from you

11、will be with me forever.精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇fail v.不及格,未能通过;encourage v.鼓励;promise v.承诺;turn to sb.for help向某人求助;patient adj.有耐心的2.出彩结构After that,I turned to her for help every time I had questions.(every time 引导时间状语从句)She was always patient to make me understand every single question.(不定式短语作状语)With her

12、help,Ive had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.(With her help作状语)Writing 4(2017安徽)假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化戏曲进校园”展演活动,你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。1.时间:7月1日下午2点;2.地点:学校操场;3.内容:文化展览、节目表演等。提示词:戏曲opera n.表演performance n.注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信中不能出现与

13、本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mike,I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture.Yours,Li Hua答案答案写作提示写作提示1.这是一封电子邮件,属于应用文。2.时态以一般将来时为主,以一般现在时为辅。3.内容主要有:邀请的原因,即学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化戏曲进校园”展演活动;时间是7月1日下午2点;地点在学校操场;内容包括文化展览、节目表演等。4.可以适当发挥,词数80100。参考范文参考范文Dear Mike,I know you are interested in tra

14、ditional Chinese culture.Now,I have a piece of good news to share with you.There is an activity about traditional Chinese operas at 2:00 p.m.on July 1.It will be held in the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend.On that day,a culture show and many wonderful opera per

15、formances will be put on.Its a chance for you to learn more about traditional Chinese culture.Come and join us!I think well have a great time.Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua思路分析思路分析本篇书面表达要求学生写一封电子邮件,开头和结尾已给出,考生需要根据所给要点适当补充细节。尤其要注意的是,写作时要紧扣主题、囊括要点、文理通顺、语言得体。本题对内容和范围有所限定,但是题目所提供的内容

16、要点有一定的开放性,考生写作时可根据自己的生活经历,围绕主题适当发挥。解题关键解题关键要表述清事件的内容、人物、时间、地点和原因,即我们常说的五个“w”(what,who,when,where,why)。确定主题句,巧用连接词,并归纳总结。要有新意和亮点。易错警示易错警示写作要点不能缺失,不能用中文思维直接翻译句子,词数要足,书写要工整无误。精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇traditional Chinese culture 中国传统文化;a piece of good news一条好消息;hold v.举办;attend v.参加2.出彩结构It will be held in the pl

17、ayground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend.(一般将来时的被动语态)Writing 5(2016安徽)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack来信,说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信,提几点建议,要点如下:1.大胆自信;2.放慢语速;3.借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:自信的confident

18、肢体语言body languageDear Jack,How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua答案答案写作提示写作提示1.本文是应用文。主体时态是一般现在时。2.内容要点:对朋友的到来表示欢迎并且乐意提供帮助;具体建议:大胆自信、放慢语速、借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式;美好祝愿。参考范文参考范文Dear Jack,How is everything going?I am very glad to learn t

19、hat you are coming to China this summer.Its not necessary to worry about your Chinese.Id like to share my ideas,which I think might help.First,be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others.Its of great importance to be con-fident about myself.We Chinese are very friendly so you n

20、eednt be afraid of making any mistakes.Second,its better to speak slowly and clearly.In this way you can make yourself understood more easily.Whats more,sometimes you can use drawings or pictures,and as you know,body language is also widely used across cul-tures and very often it really works.Best w

21、ishes!Yours,Li HuaB组20162020年全国中考题组话题一计划与安排Writing 1(2020湖北武汉)Topic TodayABC English校园版邀你投稿!My English Study Plan假如你是李明,打算向ABC English投稿,谈你的英语学习计划。请根据以下内容提示用英语完成稿件。内容要点如下:1.时常阅读,培养良好语感;2.看英文影片,了解西方文化;3.坚持写英文日记,提高写作技巧;4.向他人学习,改进学习方法;5.补充一两点个人想法。注意:1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;2.词数:6080;3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4.标题和开头已给出,

22、不计入总词数。参考词汇:develop v.培养sense n.感觉Western adj.西方的My English Study PlanI will put more time and energy into English study.答案答案写作提示写作提示1.人称:第一人称为主。2.时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。3.要点:(1)时常阅读,培养良好语感;(2)看英文影片,了解西方文化;(3)坚持写英文日记,提高写作技巧;(4)向他人学习,改进学习方法;(5)补充一两点个人想法。参考范文参考范文My English Study PlanI will put more time and e

23、nergy into English study.First,I will read regularly and develop a good sense of lan-guage.Second,I plan to watch some English movies to know more about Western culture.Third,I will keep di-aries in English.I think it will help improve my writing skills.Fourth,to improve my learning methods,I will d

24、iscuss how to learn English well with my friends and learn from them.Last but not least,I plan to join an Eng-lish club to practice my spoken English.No pain,no gain!I will make efforts to study English.精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇improve v.提高,改善;make efforts to do sth.努力做某事2.出彩结构No pain,no gain!(英语中的俗语,意为“不劳则无获

25、!”)Writing 2(2020江苏连云港)2020年6月,我市西游文化嘉年华(carnival)活动全面启动。为了鼓励同学们更好地阅读与理解西游记,你校组织了“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。假定你是李华,请用英语写一封信,邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选。内容包括:(1)活动名称及目的;(2)时间地点:7月20日下午6:00前,学校网站;(3)参与方式:观看唱歌、故事讲述、短剧表演等视频作品,投票选择“最佳美猴王”;(4)希望他注意:(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;(4)参考词汇:西游记Journey to th

26、e West才艺展示 talent showDear Nick,The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started.Yours,Li Hua答案答案写作提示写作提示1.审题:这是一封英语邀请信。主体时态为一般现在时。2.确定要点:(1)活动名称及目的;(2)时间地点:7月20日下午6:00前,学校网站;(3)参与方式:观看唱歌、故事讲述、短剧表演等视频作品;投票选择“最佳美猴王”;(4)希望他参考范文参考范文Dear Nick,The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has star

27、ted.To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West,our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King.Im writing to in-vite you to vote for us.Youre expected to visit our schools website before 6 p.m.on July 20.There are not only videos of songs,stories bu

28、t also short plays.You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well.Wed like you to vote for the best Monkey King.I hope youll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West.Yours,Li Hua精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇encourage v.鼓励;as well也;vote v.投票2.出彩结构There are not only videos of songs,stories but also s

29、hort plays.(本句中用了not only.but also.结构)Writing 3(2019重庆)你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。要求:1.80120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息:1.活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学);2.活动构想(时间、地点、内容);3.Hello,everybody.I am planning a summer trip called“Be a Kid in the Mountains”.Thank you!答案

30、答案写作提示写作提示1.体裁:应用文。2.人称:主体人称为第一人称和第三人称。3.时态:以一般现在时态为主。4.要点:1)活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学);2)活动构想(时间、地点、内容);3)参考范文参考范文Hello,everybody.I am planning a summer trip called“Be a Kid in the Mountains”.It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.As many of their parents leave for

31、 the city development,these students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying.So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study,and prepare some interesting stories to share.In the daytime,we can go hiking and do some teamwork.In the evening,we can

32、 do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.Isnt that exciting?Come and join us.Lets be“a kid in the mountains”.I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.Thank you!精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇meaningful adj.有意义的;development n.发展;prepare v.准备;share

33、 v.分享;as well as也,和一样2.出彩结构I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.I believe(that).结构;as well as连接两个并列成分Writing 4(2018内蒙古包头)假设你是李华,请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节(English Culture Festival),邀请他参加本次活动,并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。邮件还应包括以下内容:1.活动时间:本周五下午14:30

34、17:30;2.活动地点:报告厅(Lecture Hall);3.活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲注意:1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。Dear Bob,How is it going?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua写作提示写作提示1.本题的文体是应用文,描述即将举办的文化节,故时态以一般将来时为主。2.写作要点:(1)邀请Bob参加文化节(2)文化节的情况活动时间:本周五下午14:3017:30;活动地点:报告厅(Lecture Hall)

35、;活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲(3)节目最后做关于如何学好英语的讲座答案答案参考范文参考范文Dear Bob,How is it going?An English Culture Festival will be held in our school.All of us students do hope that you could come and join us.The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14:30 this Friday and last about 3 hours.Weve prepared many programs

36、for it,for example,English songs.Whats more,some students will perform plays in English.As you know,many students in our school have difficulty in learning English well.So,when the performance finishes,it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.Looking f

37、orward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇last v.持续;prepare.for.为准备;whats more另外,而且2.出彩结构So,when the performance finishes,it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.(本句中的when引导的是时间状语从句,if引导的是条件状语从句)话题二学校生活Writing 1(2020辽宁营口,B)近日,几个城市提出了“两天半周末”的计划。该

38、计划顿时引起了同学们的热议。有的同学非常赞同,觉得两天半时间足够进行一次周末旅行,也有了更多的休闲时间;有的同学提出异议,担心自己的课业负担会更沉重。请根据要点提示,用英文写一篇短文,阐述你的观点和理由。要点:1.你的观点(赞成或反对)2.你的理由(至少2点)提示词:2.5-day weekend两天半周末要求:1.词数:6080词。2.短文应包括所选观点中的要点,可适当发挥。3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。These days,some cities worked out a plan about a“2.5-day weekend”.In that way,people wi

39、ll have an extra half-day off every Friday afternoon.写作提示写作提示1.人称以第一人称为主。时态用一般将来时和一般现在时。2.先表明自己的观点,要么支持,要么反对。接着要列出支持或反对的两点理由。可根据情况适当发挥。答案答案参考范文参考范文These days,some cities worked out a plan about a“2.5-day weekend”.In that way,people will have an extra half-day off every Friday afternoon.I think its a

40、 good way for us to balance schoolwork and free time.First,if we have an extra half-day off,we can spend more time taking a trip in the city nearby.That will help us to be more energetic.Also,at weekends,we will leave more time for hobbies and interests.Besides,we will not be as busy as before and w

41、e will have a good rest.I hope we will have a weekend like this,too.I cant wait!精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇balance v.平衡;schoolwork n.功课;spend v.度过,花费;energetic adj.精力充沛的;hobby n.业余爱好;interest n.兴趣爱好2.出彩结构First,if we have an extra half-day off,we can spend more time taking a trip in the city nearby.(if引导条件状语从句)B

42、esides,we will not be as busy as before and we will have a good rest.(连词and连接并列分句)Writing 2(2019新疆)初中生活即将结束,请你想一下,谁是你最喜欢的老师?他/她长什么样子?你为什么喜欢他/她?以My Fa-vorite Teacher为题,用英语写一篇短文,请根据要点进行描述,可以结合具体事例,也可以适当增加自己想写的内容。要点:1.What does he/she look like?2.Why do you like him/her?3.注意:1.词数80100;2.可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容

43、,要求行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。答案答案写作提示写作提示1.文体:记叙文。2.人称:以第三人称为主。3.时态:以一般现在时态为主。4.要点:What does he/she look like?Why do you like him/her?.参考范文参考范文My Favorite TeacherId like to say thanks to my English teacher.He is very tall and handsome.He has straight brown hair and he doesnt wear glasses.He usually wea

44、rs jeans,a T-shirt and sports shoes.I like him because he is really cool and fun,and he is good at soccer.He can always make his class lively and interesting.Whats more,he is patient and kind to us students.With his help,we have had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in Engli

45、sh.I want to say“Thank you!”to my dear teacher.The love and support from him will be with us forever.精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇say thanks to.向表达感谢;be good at 擅长;make much progress 取得很大进步2.出彩结构I like him because he is really cool and fun,and he is good at soccer.(because引导原因状语从句)With his help,we have had enough

46、 courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.(and 连接两个并列谓语,With his help 作状语)Writing 3(2019黑龙江齐齐哈尔,B)初中生活,精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐,展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待,请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。提示:1.初中阶段你有哪些收获;2.初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望;3.你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。要求:1.80100词,首句已给出,不计入总词数;2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。The life of my junior

47、 high school is coming to an end.答案答案写作提示写作提示1.特别注意时态。本篇文章既回忆过去,又展望未来,所以既要用到一般过去时、现在完成时,又要用到一般将来时态。2.写作要点分解:(1)收获;(2)遗憾或未实现的愿望;(3)计划或打算。3.注意行文连贯,表达清晰,语法正确。参考范文参考范文The life of my junior high school is coming to an end.Since I came to the junior high school,Ive gained confi-dence and happiness.With th

48、e help of our teachers,Ive learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge.Ive also made some good friends.However,there is still something that I feel sorry about.Because I was busy with my schoolwork,I couldnt keep on reading.Once in a while,I felt so upset and anxious that I quarre

49、led with my parents.In the future,Ill try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books.Meanwhile,Ill get on well with my parents.I believe Ill have a happy and colorful life.精彩语句精彩语句 1.精美词汇come to an end结束;with the help of在的帮助下;as well as也,还;be busy with忙于;keep on doing坚持做;once in

50、 a while偶尔;quarrel with sb.和某人争吵;make good use of好好利用;meanwhile adv.同时;get on well with sb.和某人相处融洽2.出彩结构Once in a while,I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.(本句是一个主从复合句。so.that.引导结果状语从句)话题三方法建议Writing 1(2020海南)周末是我们生活中重要的一部分,合理利用周末时间对青少年至关重要。某校英语杂志社就“如何让周末生活更有意义”开展征文活动。请你根据下面