高考英语作文得高分策略课件.ppt

1、 Welcome to our Class!Welcome to our Class!高考作文得分策略高考作文得分策略Tips for English Essay Writing1.Comprehensiveness.全面性全面性:要点全面要点全面.2.Accuracy.正确性正确性:语法正确并符合英语的语法正确并符合英语的表达习惯表达习惯。3.Differences.多样性多样性:词汇短语丰富，结构多词汇短语丰富，结构多样，句型复杂。样，句型复杂。4.Logic/Coherence.连贯性连贯性:恰当使用承上启恰当使用承上启下的词语和连接词，使全文流畅连贯，浑下的词语和连接词，使全文流畅连贯

2、，浑然一体。然一体。整整体体三三部部分分Introduction DiscussionConclusionThree parts of an essayProcedures for Writing English Essays四 个 步 骤1、审题：内容（要点）体裁，人称、时态、审题：内容（要点）体裁，人称、时态2、要点成句、要点成句:(1)正确正确符合英语语法和英语符合英语语法和英语表达习惯。表达习惯。(2)好好丰富的词汇，丰富而高级的丰富的词汇，丰富而高级的结构句式结构句式.3.联句成文：巧用过渡词和连接词联句成文：巧用过渡词和连接词.4.检查修改检查修改:语法语法,拼写拼写,字母大小写字

3、母大小写,标点符号标点符号.注意：注意：(1)开头的交代句与结尾的总结句开头的交代句与结尾的总结句,增强呼应增强呼应.(2)牢记常识性套话的习惯表达牢记常识性套话的习惯表达.(3)谚语，成语谚语，成语 联合国教科文组织某考察团正在联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。化很大。人们生活比以前

4、好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。儿童在此免费就读。注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100-120之间。之间。Practice 书面表达：书面表达：Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school.This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and abou

5、t 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.The school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the schoo

6、l-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here

7、 are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast.People here live a much richer life than before.书面表达：书面表达：Now i

8、t is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.In the past,the school he

9、re was very small and most families couldnt afford to go.But now it has been rebuilt which has 4 storeys,is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free education in it.We hope you enjoy your stay here.and the teaching building,Have a pl

10、easant time!Thank you.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast.P

11、eople here live a much richer/prosperous life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small and most families couldnt afford to go.But now it has been rebuilt and the teaching building,which has 4 storeys,is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school

12、-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free education.I hope youll enjoy your stay here.Have a pleasant time!Thank you.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】假设你是某种学生英文报的小记者，对中学生假设你是某种学生英文报的小记者，对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们对上网的看法。请你根据他们的观点写一篇简对上网的看法。请你根据他们的观点写

13、一篇简要的调查报告，并呼吁正确使用互联网。要的调查报告，并呼吁正确使用互联网。使用互联网的益处使用互联网的益处 1.资源丰富资源丰富 2.节省时间节省时间 3.方便交流和沟通方便交流和沟通使用互联网的弊端使用互联网的弊端 1.内容良莠兼有内容良莠兼有 2.沉迷网络沉迷网络游戏会影响学习。游戏会影响学习。3.过多使用会影响健康。过多使用会影响健康。注意：注意：1文章的开头以为你写好文章的开头以为你写好.2词数词数:100左左右右.With the development of computer technology,the internet has become more and more po

14、pular.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】要点突破：要点突破：1.体裁体裁 议论文议论文,调查报告并呼吁正确使用调查报告并呼吁正确使用.一般现在时一般现在时(the third person objective essay)2.三部分三部分:introduction-提出问题提出问题;discussion-正反观点展开讨论正反观点展开讨论;conclusion-总结总结正确使用正确使用.范文展示：范文展示：高考英语作文

15、得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】With the development of computer technology,the internet has become more and more popular.Is the internet good or bad for people?Students dont see eye to eye on this issue.Students who are against the internet believe that the use of internet does harm t

16、o people.First,the contents of the internet are not always suitable.Second,it is bad for ones health if one uses the internet too much.Whats more,its harmful for students to devote themselves to playing internet games but ignore their studies.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】Howev

17、er,as one swallow does not make a summer,other students believe that it is beneficial to use the internet.As the source of knowledge,the internet not only broadens the outlook but also expands peoples horizons.Moreover,it saves a lot of time to search for the information.Furthermore,communication be

18、comes more and more convenient with the help of the internet.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】Every coin has two sides.We have to be aware of the importance of the internet and make best use of it.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】Being on line,you can save a lot

19、 of time.Worse still,the computer games did harm to our studying.I believe it can lead the human beings to a better future as long as we use it in a correct way.The internet supports a new way of communication,making us communicate with friends and families freely.for one thingfor anotherTheir opini

20、ons of the internet vary from person to person.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】Most of the students agree that the interest is of great use and importance,helping them a lot not only in their life but also in their study.Some students even form the habit of playing the internet g

21、ames too much instead of studying.But at the same time,it leads to two arguments about the advantages and the disadvantages of surfing the internet.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】审题：意译要点，切忌字面翻译审题：意译要点，切忌字面翻译。毕业后他坚持打篮球。毕业后他坚持打篮球

22、。After graduation,he kept on/continued playing basketball.你能向我介绍一名好医生吗？你能向我介绍一名好医生吗？Would you please recommend a good doctor to me?我不特别喜欢没有花园的房子。我不特别喜欢没有花园的房子。I dont really like a house with no garden.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】符合语法和英语表达习惯符合语法和英语表达习惯。I like Animal World on t

23、he CCTV very much.Not only because animals are friends of human beings,but also because the host does a good job inI like Animal World on the CCTV very much,not only because animals are friends of human beings,but also because the host does a good job inI like Animal World on the CCTV very much.That

24、s not only because animals are friends of .高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】All the preparations are made,were ready to start.With all the preparations made,were ready to start.All the preparations made,were ready to start.All the preparations are made and were ready to start.Stud

25、ents not being permitted to go to the toilet during class,it may also affect their health./高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】1.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.When he spoke,he felt more

26、 and more excited.5.As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.怎样使用较高级的词汇怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.高考英语作

27、文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】1 .She left hurriedly,and I didnt have the time to say good-bye to her.(Adverbial Clause of Time)2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（Noun Clause）3.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(Participles)4.He did not kno

28、w what had happened until he had read the news .(Emphatic Structure)5.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(Subjective Mood）She left hurriedly before I could say good-bye to her.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式 Followed by many students,s

29、he walked out of the lab.With many students following her,she walked out of the lab.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for/without your help.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】用连接词填空用连接词填空

30、1.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends._,I saved$80.2.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth._,it may make us fat.3.Jack is thought to be smarter than the average dog._,Jack is a border collie,a breed known for its mental abilities._,the 9-year-old dog has been trained to fetch toys by their name

31、s since the age of nine months.As a result/a consequence/ConsequentlyWhats worseFor one thingFor another/In addition高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】英语惯用法，成语，谚语英语惯用法，成语，谚语once in a blue moon千载难逢千载难逢,get cold feet气馁气馁,hold ones horses沉住气沉住气,see eye to eye on this issueRoman is not

32、built one day.Its no use crying over spilt milk.Dont count your chickens before they are hatched.不要打如意算盘。不要打如意算盘。One swallow doesnt make a summer.一一燕不成夏。凡事不可以一偏概全。燕不成夏。凡事不可以一偏概全。Every coin has two sides.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考大纲中常用哪些高考大纲中常用哪些连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容

33、在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：and,and then,even,what is more/worse/better,besides,also,moreover,in addition2.表示转折关系表示转折关系 但是，然而，相反：but,however,yet,instead,on the other hand,otherwise,on the contrary.高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】3.表示因果关系表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以因为，因此，所以:for,so,therefore,as a result,b

34、ecause of,due to,owing to,thanks to 4.表示解释说明表示解释说明:that is(to say),in other words,namely,such as,for example,for instance,and so on5.表示时间顺序表示时间顺序:at first,then,later,meanwhile,in the end,finally,since then,at last高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】6.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实 实际上:in fact,actually

35、,as a matter of fact 跟你说实话:to tell you the truth7.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说:on the whole,in short,all in all,in general,in a word,to sum up,in conclusion高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】8.其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词 personally,more importantly,especially,hopefully 高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课

36、件】高考英语作文得高分策略(共29张PPT)【优秀课件】1.日本那些再现曲水宴的表演，有着不少日本那些再现曲水宴的表演，有着不少“中国元素中国元素”，但是由于现代年轻人对古代中国文化了解甚少，并不知道哪些元素来自中国。，但是由于现代年轻人对古代中国文化了解甚少，并不知道哪些元素来自中国。2.本着保证校车安全的原则，公安机关将会同教育行政等部门对校车驾驶人进行逐一审查，坚决清退不符合安全规定的校车驾驶人。本着保证校车安全的原则，公安机关将会同教育行政等部门对校车驾驶人进行逐一审查，坚决清退不符合安全规定的校车驾驶人。3.山寨文化是一种平民文化、草根文化，自然有其存在的意义和价值，但山寨产品的泛滥

37、则是中国知识产权意识不足的揭露与讽刺。山寨文化是一种平民文化、草根文化，自然有其存在的意义和价值，但山寨产品的泛滥则是中国知识产权意识不足的揭露与讽刺。4.神舟神舟7号宇宙飞船载着三位航天英雄胜利返回地球，这艘宇宙飞船是我们国家自行研制的，每一个中国人不能不为之骄傲。号宇宙飞船载着三位航天英雄胜利返回地球，这艘宇宙飞船是我们国家自行研制的，每一个中国人不能不为之骄傲。5.这家工厂虽然规模不大，但曾两次荣获省科学大会奖，三次被授予省优质产品称号，产品远销全国各地和东南亚地区。这家工厂虽然规模不大，但曾两次荣获省科学大会奖，三次被授予省优质产品称号，产品远销全国各地和东南亚地区。6.杭州湾跨海大桥是一座由我国自行建造、自行设计、自行管理、自行投资的特大型交通基础设施，是我国跨海大桥建设史上的一个重要里程碑。杭州湾跨海大桥是一座由我国自行建造、自行设计、自行管理、自行投资的特大型交通基础设施，是我国跨海大桥建设史上的一个重要里程碑。7、为防止东南亚地区发生的禽流感传入我国，国家质检总局和农业部今天联合发出通知，自即日暂行禁止进口来自疫区的禽类及其产品。、为防止东南亚地区发生的禽流感传入我国，国家质检总局和农业部今天联合发出通知，自即日暂行禁止进口来自疫区的禽类及其产品。