2022新人教版八年级上册《英语》期末作文讲解-新年决心ppt课件.pptx

1、2022作文训练作文训练-新年规划新年规划-by xx老师What are youWhat are you going to do going to do for your New years for your New years resolution?resolution?BrainstormEat less and keep slimExercise moreVisit New York.A同学B同学有了这些内容，怎么写好有了这些内容，怎么写好“新年规划新年规划”呢？呢？给个模板吧给个模板吧 新年即将来临，你是否会许下一些新年决心呢？请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的新年决心。写作要

2、点：说说你的新年决心是什么；给出你的理由；如何实现。要求：短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；不能出现真实的人名和地名；词数不少于80。作文三步走是什么？作文三步走是什么？审找定第一步 审题1.时态 2.人称 3.字数一般将来时为主第一人称为主=80字第二步 找要点1.说说你的新年决心是什么？2.给出你的理由；3.如何实现。更加努力学习对自己：收获知识，成为一个有能力的人对父母：让父母开心，减少父母为自己的操劳对社会：用自己的知识为社会做出贡献养成好的学习习惯很重要：上课认真听讲，课下及时复习，及时完成作业；有不懂的知识多请教好好锻炼身体，作息规律。第三步 定框架S

3、tudy Harder总结观点升华主题说出理由以及实现的方法（3理由；3方法）介绍自己说出新年决定Hello,everyone!Its my great honor to give an introduction about my New Years resolution.If I take actions as my plans,I am sure to make greater progress next year.acquire knowledge to be a man of great ability;make my parents happy and reduce their wo

4、rkload of taking care of me;make great contributions to our society.正式写作文之前的准备工作正式写作文之前的准备工作遣词遣词+造句造句+谋篇谋篇第一步 遣词1.更加努力学习study harder2.收获知识get/require/harvest knowledge3.一个有能力的人a man of great ability4.减少父母为自己的操劳 reduce my parents workload of taking care of me5.为.做贡献make contributions to 6.养成好的学习习惯 de

5、velop a good study habit7.课下复习review lessons after class8.请教ask.for help9.做do=take actions第二步 造句高分句型一高分句型一 Its my great honor to give an introduction about my New Years resolution.1.我很荣幸能够介绍我的新年决定。某人很荣幸做某事：Its ones great honor to do sth.介绍：introduce sth.=give an introduction about sth.高分句型二高分句型二2.对我

6、们来说，养成好的学习习惯很重要。It is rather important for us to develop a good study habit.It is+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.对某人来说做某事.第二步 造句高分句型三高分句型三 The more questions I ask,the more new knowledge I can harvest.3.问的问题越多，我越会收获更多新知识。比较级：比较级：the more.,the more.收获：收获：get/gain/acquire/harvest高分句型四高分句型四2.如果我照着计划做，来年我定会取得更大

7、的进步。If I take actions as my plans,I will make greater progress next year.If引导的条件状语从句，遵从引导的条件状语从句，遵从“主将从现主将从现”。能量补给站能量补给站（三级跳好句积累）（三级跳好句积累）1.I have a best friend.He is 15 years old,but Im one year younger than him.He is as tall as me.2.One of the best ways to study hard is to develop a good study hab

8、it.4.Doing is better than saying.3.I should review my lessons as often as possibly after class.5.The more I exercise，the better my body will be.(我有个最好的朋友。他15岁，但是我比他小一岁。我们一样高。)(努力学习的最好方法之一是养成良好的学习习惯。)(下课后我应该尽可能多地复习功课。)(说到不如做到。)(我锻炼越多，身体就会越好。)第三步 谋篇1.表文章结构顺序：First of all,Firstly,Secondly/And then,Fina

9、lly,In the end,At last,Last but not least2.表并列补充关系的：Whats more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition 3.表总结：In short,In a word，All in all;In brief;In conclusion,In summary开头开头Hello,everyone!Its my great honor to give an introduction about my New Years resolution.I will study harder next year.1.大家好

10、！我很荣幸介绍我的新年决心。2.来年我将更加努力学习。中间（介绍理由）中间（介绍理由）The reasons why Im gonna to study harder include three aspects.1.我要更努力学习的理由有三个方面。2.理由一是如果我获得足够多的知识，自己将会成为一个有能力的人。The first one is that if I acquire enough knowledge,I will be a man of great ability.3.让我的父母开心，减少父母为自己的操劳也很重要。Making my parents happy and reduci

11、ng their workload of taking care of me are also vital.And most importantly,I desire to make great contributions to our society when I grow up.4.最重要的是，我期望长大了为社会做出巨大贡献。中间（介绍方法）中间（介绍方法）1.对我们来说，养成好的学习习惯很重要。It is rather important for us to develop a good study habit.I should listen to my teachers more ca

12、refully and review my lessons as often as possibly after class.2.我应该上课认真听讲，课下尽可能多地复习功课。Whats more,I promise to do my homework in time next year.3.除此之外，我承诺来年及时做作业。中间（介绍方法）中间（介绍方法）The more questions I ask,the more new knowledge I can harvest.5.我问的问题越多，我越会收获更多新知识。Last but not least,I need to strengthen

13、 my body by doing exercise,too.6.最后，我也需要通过锻炼强健身体。If I meet some difficulties when I am learning,I will ask my tearchers or classmates for help.4.如果学习过程中遇到困难，我会向老师或同学们寻求帮助。结尾结尾 Doing is better than saying.1.说到不如做到。2.如果我照着计划做，来年我定会取得更大的进步。If I take actions as my plans,I am sure to make greater progres

14、s next year.Study HarderStudy HarderHello,everyone!Its my great honor to give an introduction about my New Years resolution.I will study harder next year.The reasons why Im going to study harder include three aspects.The first one is that if I acquire enough knowledge,I will be a man of great abilit

15、y.Making my parents happy and reducing their workload of taking care of me are also vital.And most importantly,I desire to make great contributions to our society when I grow up.It is rather important for us to develop a good study habit.I should listen to my teachers more carefully and review my le

16、ssons as often as possibly after class.Whats more,I promise to do my homework in time next year.If I meet some difficulties when I am learning,I will ask my tearchers or classmates for help.The more questions I ask,the more new knowledge I can harvest.Last but not least,I need to strengthen my body by doing exercise,too.Doing is better than saying.If I take actions as my plans,I am sure to make greater progress next year.2022Thanks for listening