小学英语作文课件.ppt（纯ppt,可能不含音视频素材文件）

1、整理ppt看图作文看图作文整理ppt整理pptSample 1 根据下根据下列图画中列图画中 Tom Tom 骑自骑自行车的经行车的经历，用英历，用英语写一篇语写一篇故事。故事。短文要写短文要写得连贯、得连贯、完整。完整。整理ppt1.Go over the requirement 1.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:A story（a traffic accident)past tenseTom,he 整理ppt Tom/ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/the other day/one d

2、ay2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)整理ppt2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)整理ppt A car/run fast to/run into him Tom/fall off his bike Suddenly 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)整理ppt2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)整理ppt The driver

3、/frightened/run away 2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)整理ppt2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)整理ppt A woman/remember the number of the car The police The driver/catch2.Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)整理pptKey wordsKey wordssentencessentencesride a b

4、ike/run fast toWhen Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.hit him/fall off his bikeThe car hit him.And he fell off his bike.be frightened /run awayThe driver was so frightened that he ran away.see the accident/remember the number/call the police /be caught A woman saw the accident an

5、d remembered the number of the car.She called the police.The driver was caught.整理ppt3.Writing a passage Passage 1 Tom was riding along the street.A car ran fast to him.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver was frightened.He ran away.A woman saw the accident.She remembered the number of

6、 the car.She called the policeman.The driver was caught.整理pptpassage 2 The other day,Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as

7、fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.整理pptPassage 3 The other day,T

8、om was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him.He turned left quickly but it was too late.The car hit him and he fell off his bike.The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could.He was soon out of sight,leaving Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately

9、,a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car.She called the policeman and told him what had happened.Finally,the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.整理pptUsing connectives并列并列 转折转折 3.因果因果 4.其他其他and,bothand but,however,though,while so,therefore,because when,suddenly

10、,immediately,as soon as,unfortunately,sothat,finally,as a result,What was worse整理pptSummary:How to write a picture story?Go over the requirement（person,tense,style）Go over the pictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Write a passage（using connectives and adding details and specific information.)整理ppt 点题

11、（时间、地点、点题（时间、地点、人物、事件人物、事件）事件的起因事件的起因 事件的发展事件的发展/过程过程 事件的结果事件的结果 扣题扣题 整理ppt 中中 考考 作作 文文 的的 评评 分分 标标 准准四档文：四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地 表达思想。可得表达思想。可得0-2分分三档文：三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分分

12、二档文：二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。误；字数符合要求。可得可得6-8分分一档文：一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得可得9-10分分整理ppt假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月月3日日(星期五星期五)的一段亲的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。字左右的日记。homework整理ppt