凤凰国际英语托福综合写作problemsolution课件.pptx（纯ppt,可能不含音视频素材文件）

1、模板1：solution The reading passage mentions a couple of reasons as to _.The professor provides a couple of solutions for _.The first problem the reading mentions is that _.So the professor believes that _.also,_(提供更多细节或论据)Another problem leading to _ is that _.Therefore,the professor suggests that _.A

2、dditionally,_.(提供更多细节或论据)In conclusion,_.模板2：support The lecture apparently reinforces the points illustrated in the reading material.According to the professor,_.Meanwhile,the reading contends a similar stand that_.The first point the professor uses to enhance the reading is that_,which is just the

3、 same as the statement in the reading that_.Another evidence the speaker adopts to bolster the passage is_.Likewise,the reading states that_.In the conclusion,the point made in the lecture gives a boost to what is presented in the reading.As the professor claims,_which is in accordance with the read

4、ing material holds that_.Solution 1Education Reading Nowadays,many universities are raising their students tuition.In some cases,the raises are quite substantial.While many students are not pleased with these increase,there are some legitimate reasons for the hikes.First,universities are constantly

5、striving to upgrade their educational quality.Since fewer people are attending college these days,schools must fight for all the students they can get.One ideal way to attract students is to ensure that the school provides them with an outstanding education.Also,by increasing the schools academic ra

6、nk,the school will attract more students and better ones.Since it costs money to enhance the quality of education,the schools budget must increase.Therefore,tuition must also go up.Reading Second,many universities are finding themselves short of cash these days.This is particularly true of state uni

7、versities,which often depend upon the state for the majority of their budgets.Unfortunately,many states are cutting general funding to schools.Most particularly hard hit are the funds for the general management of the university.While not necessarily a glamorous job,it is crucial to the well-being o

8、f the school.Without sufficient general management funds,many schools would be facing serious problems,so they need to compensate for the lost funds in other ways.It is therefore obvious why schools are increasing tuition every year Words Tuition Tuition fee Legitimate Hike Strive to Budget Well-bei

9、ng Note for reading University tuition increases 1.Need to improve school to attract students Must provide quality education-costs more money Must increase schools academic rank-need higher budget 2.Are often short of cash State universities getting funding cut-must make up for lost cash General man

10、agement losing funds-schools facing serious problems Summary for reading Even though students at universities are not pleased about tuition increases,the schools have some good reasons for doing so.First,they have to improve themselves academically to attract more students,especially since fewer stu

11、dents are going to college nowadays.This requires money.So does raising the schools academic ranking,which will in turn attract better students to the school.Also,a lot of schools receive funding from various states.However,they are receiving less funding nowadays.Also,the general management departm

12、ents at these schools need enough money to run properly,or else the school will suffer.The schools therefore need to raise tuition to get more money.Lecture Im sure many of you just got your tuition bills,and I know that most of you werent pleased.Tuition went up by 5%this year for the fifth year in

13、 a row.Running a college is getting to be expensive,but there are a few ways to offset this without raising your fees.Everyone wants to improve our schools quality.But,you know,money isnt totally necessary to do this.For example,we should be looking at ourselves to improve our school.Take professors

14、,for example.We could augment the quality of our lectures as well as develop better curriculums.And you,the students,could perform better both at school and after graduation.That would help increase our schools ranking without us spending much money or raising tuition.Heres another idea,especially f

15、or engineering or science-heavy schools like ours.We should seek close ties with corporations.Why should we do this?Well,both of us will benefit.First,well get free state-of-the-art facilities,which both students and faculty will be able to use.And second,the corporation will get the inside track on

16、 recruiting our students to work for them once they graduate.And the corporations will know the students got an excellent education because they helped contribute to it.Its a win-win situation for both parties.Notes for lectureUniversities dont need money to raise quality 1.Other ways to improve sch

17、oolProfessors-lecture better and develop better curriculums Students-increase performance in and out of class 2.Ties with corporations Schools get free facilities-useful to students and faculty Companies can recruit new employees from school body Summary for lecture It actually is possible for unive

18、rsities to increase the quality of education that they offer without having to raise students tuition.First,both the faculty and students can improve themselves.The faculty can teach and prepare for classes better,and the students can improve their performance as well.These actions should increase t

19、he schools academic ranking without a need for a tuition hike.Also,schools should strike agreements with corporation.The corporations can provide the schools with excellent free facilities.The schools in turn will produce well-educated students that the companies will then be able to recruit much mo

20、re easily.This will also help schools avoid raising the cost of tuition.Planning Structure:点对点结构点对点结构Introduction Body 1Body 2Conclusion(optional)Introduction The lecturer states that schools do not have to raise tuition to improve the quality of education they provide for their students.He then giv

21、es a couple of explanations as to how they can do this.Body 1 First,responding to the claim that schools need money to improve their academic ranking,the lecturer claims that the professors can do a better job of teaching and preparing for class.He also mentions that the students can affect the scho

22、ols academic rating in a positive manner.They can study harder and get better job.With a better academic rating,the school will then be able to attract better students without having to raise tuition at all.Body 2 Also,since schools are seeing their budgets cut by the state,the professor urges close

23、r ties to businesses.He claims the businesses can supply free facilities for the students to use.These facilities will also offset budget losses to the universitys general management funds.The companies will also benefit by getting to hire competent workers when the students graduate.If a school fol

24、lows the professors suggestion,he believes it will not have to increase its tuition.2Business In recent years,companies have begun noticing that a large percentage of their employees are not waiting until their sixties to retire.Instead,they are opting for early retirement and are leaving the workfo

25、rce while they are still in their fifties.After conducting several studies,companies have recognized a couple of reasons for this sudden spate of early retirement by their employees.To begin with,many employees who are in their fifties have been working for the same employer and doing the same jobs

26、for many years or even decades.What happens is that they simply become burned out from doing the same tasks over the over again.Furthermore,they discover that their daily routines are no longer challenging but have instead become incredibly boring for them.Second of all,many older people compare the

27、mselves with their companys younger employees.When this comparison happens,the results are typically not favorable.Older employees are simply unable to maintain the same pace as younger ones;therefore,the older individuals see themselves accomplishing less work than their young colleagues.In additio

28、n,older workers begin to feel as if they are a burden on the company and are not contributing as much as they could.This self-accusing feeling then encourages them to depart their company and take early retirement.Words Opt for spate Burn out Daily routineDepart Self-accusing Notes for reading Early

29、 retirement of employees in their fifties 1.Have worked for the same company for many years Become burned out from doing their jobs Discover their daily routines are boring 2.Compare themselves with younger employees Accomplish less work than younger ones Feel like they are burdens on their companie

30、s Summary for reading Companies have long wondered why many of their workers began retiring in their fifties as opposed to their sixties,and now they have a couple of reasons as to why.First,many elderly employees become bored after doing the same jobs day after day for very long periods of time.The

31、y simply quit because they cannot handle the boredom of their work.Second,elderly workers recognize that they are being outworked by younger employees,which causes their opinions of their value to the company to decline.Realizing they are not as productive as they could be and that they are weighing

32、 down their employers with their presence,they simply quit their jobs.Lecture Now,Id like to continue talking about how society underutilizes its elderly population.As people live longer and longer,it seems like such a waste for people in their fifties simply to retire and do nothing but play golf o

33、r go fishing.So let me give you a couple of suggestions.Of course,many elderly people dont want full-time jobs.However,a large number would be willing to work part-time.This way of working would accomplish a couple of things.First,they wouldnt have to come in every day.This would keep the elderly fr

34、om getting too worn out to do their jobs.Remember that the elderly have less energy.Also,letting them work part-time would keep their minds fresh,which means that they wouldnt become bored with their work.Heres another idea.I know all of you young people think that you know everything,but your exper

35、ience are nothing compared to those of a fifty or sixty years person.Companies need to do their best to utilize the skills that their older employees have.For example,they could give them a wider range of duties instead of making them repeat the same tasks over and over.And the companies could consu

36、lt with their elderly employees more often.This effort would not only make them feel wanted but draw upon their many years of experience working at the company.Outline for lectureWays to insure elderly employees usefulness 1.Give them part-time jobs Would not have to come in every day-wont get worn

37、out Will have fresh minds-wont become bored 2.Utilize their experience Provide them with a wider range of duties Consult them more often-make them feel wanted and can draw upon their experience Summary for lecture The professor believe that it is pointless for people in their fifties to retire and n

38、ot work anymore,so she provides some suggestions to get people to stop retiring so early.She thinks that instead of working full-time,elderly people should be allowed to work part-time.This measure would keep the employee fresh and eager to do their jobs.Also,companies should try to involve their el

39、derly employees in more activities and ask them for their opinions on various things.This effort would give elderly workers the confidence they require and,at the same time,also help their companies by having them rely upon people with many years of experience.Summary Writing:Outline for reference I

40、ntroduction 1.The reading passage mentions a couple of reasons as to _2.The professor provides a couple of solutions for _Body 1 3.The first problem the reading mentions is that _.4.So the professor believes _.5.Also,working part-time will keep the elderly from _.Body 26.Another problem leading to e

41、arly retirement is that _.7.Therefore,the professor suggests that _.8.Additionally,companies could consult elderly employees _.9.By doing so,companies could make their older employees feel as though _.Conclusion 10.In conclusion _Summary The reading passage mentions a couple of reasons as to why eld

42、erly employees are retiring in their fifties before they are required to do so.The professor provides a couple of solutions for the problems that were mentioned in the reading passage.The first problem the reading mentions is that employees often retire after getting burned out and bored from repeat

43、edly doing the same work.So the professor believes companies should allow elderly employees to work part-time,which will preserve their interest in their jobs.Also,working part-time will keep the elderly from being bored at work and will keep their minds fresh.Another problem leading to early retire

44、ment is that elderly employees compare themselves with younger employees and notice that the do les work and are burdening their companies.Therefore,the professor suggests that companies could give their elderly employees many different tasks to do.Additionally,companies could consult elderly employ

45、ees on a more regular basis and draw upon their many years of experience.By doing so,companies could make their older employees feel as though they are contributing more.In conclusion,while the reading passage mentions a couple of important problems,the professor provides two methods that should eff

46、ectively neutralize these problems and enable the elderly to contribute to their employees while not obligating them to take early retirement.3Environment Reading Invasive species cause most of the worst problems in local ecosystems.The presence of a new species,particularly one at the top of the fo

47、od chain,can destroy an ecosystem and cause numerous species to become extinct.One species that is causing numerous problems in Americas waterways is the aquatic zebra mussel.Native to Russia,the zebra mussel has recently invaded the Great Lakes and many other American lakes and rivers.The mussels a

48、ttach themselves to the bottoms of boats,a convenient method that lets them travel easily.They also often attach themselves to water pipes.This action results in clogged pipes.Some of which are used to bring drinking water to cities.The blocked pipes cost the cities huge amounts of money to unblock.

49、Also,zebra mussels reproduce so rapidly that they often smother the spawning grounds of various fish and other mussels,thereby prohibiting their growth.Additionally,zebra mussels in North America have very few natural enemies,meaning that it is difficult to eliminate them once they are established i

50、n a river or lake.Likewise,scientists have yet to discover an environmentally-safe way to kill the zebra mussels.These two facts help contribute to the extremely rapid expansion of the zebra mussels.Should this expansion not be stopped,zebra mussels will soon be causing problems in virtually all of