和高考真题学写作-叙事：难忘的经历 讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

1、和高考真题学写作-叙事：难忘的经历 讲义2022年高考英语真题（新高考一卷）的完形填空是一篇记事类的记叙文。回忆了两次难忘的宿营经历。阅读完全文后，可以看出作者的思路很有条理，时间、地点、人物、事件都交代的很明确。行文过程中，人物动作、心理、天气环境都有适度描写。语言简练，不拖沓。我们先一起看一下原文：My husband, our children and I have had wonderful camping experiences over the past ten years.Some of our memories are funny, especially from the ea

2、rly years when our children were little. Once, we camped along Chalk Creek. I was worried that our 15-month-old boy would fall into the creek (小溪). I tied a rope around his waist to keep him near to our spot. That lasted about ten minutes. He was uncomfortable, and his crying let the whole campgroun

3、d know it. So instead of tying him up, I just kept a close eye on him. It worked - he didnt end up in the creek. My three-year-old, however, did.Another time, we rented a boat in Vallecito Lake. The sky was clear when we head off, but storms move in fast in the mountains, and this one quickly interr

4、upted our peaceful morning trip. The wind picked up and thunder rolled. My husband stopped fishing to start the motor. Nothing. He tried again. No luck. We were stuck in the middle of the lake with a dead motor. As we all sat there helplessly, a fisherman pulled up, threw us a rope and towed (拖) us

5、back. We were safe.Now, every year when my husband pulls our camper out of the garage, we are filled with a sense of excitement, wondering what camping fun and adventure we will experience next.梳理一下文章的脉络：宿营经历1时间（when）once (when our children were little)地点（where）beside Chalk Creek人物（who)I, 15-month-o

6、ld boy, 3-year-old boy事件（what）溪边宿营，大儿子掉河里了事件发展（how）溪边宿营，担心小儿子掉小溪里，绳子绑腰，儿子哭闹，松绑后的小儿子没掉河里，大儿子反而掉河里了。原因（why)宿营经历2时间（when)another time (when our children were little)地点（where）in Vallecito Lake人物（who)I, husband, fisherman事件（what）租船游湖，被困获救事件发展（how）租船游湖，天气骤变，发动机无法启动，被困湖中，渔夫帮忙，全家获救。原因（why)主体段落（第二、三段）使用了如下的逻

7、辑关系助力情节发展：第二段（宿营经历1）时间关系：when, once, last因果关系：worried tied a rope, cry so .承接关系：and转折关系：instead of, however解释说明关系：破折号第三段（宿营经历2）时间关系：another time, when, as转折关系：but承接关系：and并列关系：and因果关系：with大家认真体会，多多诵读，以读促写。接着我们泛读一篇适合高中生的外刊文章，再趁热打铁练一篇小作文。【拓展阅读】外媒节选：DAWN相关主题：生活故事难易程度：易词数：800A Memorable DayI woke up exci

8、tedly. This day was special. It was my birthday and I was sure that I was going to receive a great deal of wishes and presents this year. I got off from my bed and rushed to my bathroom to get dressed in the best possible manner. I wore the beautiful dress that I had bought especially for this day.

9、I slipped on my twinkling jewelry, put on some light make-up, dressed my hair and went down for breakfast.Mom was in the kitchen. I flashed a bright smile at her, waiting for her to wish me and give me a hug. But my smile soon vanished as my mother started rolling with laughter. I was confused. I as

10、ked her what the matter was. Controlling her laughter, she managed to answer me, which sounded something like, “Why are you dressed up like that early in the morning? Are you alright?”I started wondering what was wrong with her, and my worries grew even more when she stopped laughing suddenly. With

11、a concerned face she came towards me. She tapped my cheek twice and asked, “Honey, are you sleepwalking?”I wanted to burst out in anger. I wanted to scream at her. I wanted to tell her that I was dressed up because it was my birthday! But then, something struck my mind. I said to myself, Is mom alri

12、ght? I had no idea what to say to her. I just told her that Ill be right back and then went up to my room.I changed into a casual dress and just when I was about to start crying with my head buried in the pillow, my mom came. She seemed more composed. She told me that she was sorry for her behavior

13、downstairs, she just couldnt control it. She gave me a hug and took me down for breakfast. I breathed a sigh of relief. I realized that nothing was wrong with her. She had only forgotten my birthday. I decided not to tell her myself.After a few moments, my brother and my father came for breakfast as

14、 well. I gave them both the same flashy smile, but was heartbroken instantly when none of them wished me. I thought that maybe they are planning a surprise birthday party for me, and that was the reason none of them wished me. I felt excited as I love surprise birthday parties.All day long, I stayed

15、 in my room so that my family could easily prepare for my party. I kept counting every passing second, impatiently. I logged on to the internet and didnt find a single birthday wish or card in the email. It excited me even more. I was imagining what presents I might get this year when my mom came to

16、 my room and said, “Why are you stuck in your room since morning? Im concerned! Are you upset or anything?”I smiled at her and told her that I was fine and I just wanted a little time to myself today. She smiled back and left.In the evening, my mother came to me and said that she was leaving for her

17、 friends house and if I wanted to come along as well. I knew she was trying to fool me and she only wanted me to get dressed for the party. I replied to her in affirmative and started dressing up. I held my breath when I was leaving my room, preparing myself for our house decorated with balloons and

18、 ribbons. I closed my eyes and stepped out of my room. Then I opened my eyes and.WHAT? The house is looking exactly like it has always been! No balloons? No ribbons? No friends? No party?I wondered what the surprise really was, because my mom did take me to her friends place. On our way to her house

19、, I kept wondering if we were going somewhere for my party, but we werent. On our way back, I thought maybe now I would find my friends at my place. But I was disappointed again! Sadly, I went back to my room. It was getting late and nobody had wished me. I was so heartbroken for everybody had forgo

20、tten my birthday.I was weeping when my mom came to my room. Seeing me crying, she got concerned and asked me what the matter was. I told her that I was upset because everybody had forgotten my birthday and now the day was almost over. My mother smiled as if she was controlling her laughter and told

21、me politely that it was 29th November and not 29th December, which is my actual date of birth!How my family kept making fun of me till my birthday actually came!【写作训练】假设你是李华，你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“人生中难忘的一次经历”为主题，写一篇短文。内容包括：1、经历过程；2 、个人感受。An Unforgettable Experience in My Life_【范文1】An Unforgettable Experien

22、ce in My LifeWith time going by, lots of good memories are no longer fresh. The experience as a volunteer in the Harbin Snow and Ice Festival, however, has been so vivid and unforgettable up to now.More than one year ago, I, together with 11 other students of our school, was honored to be chosen to

23、serve tourists from home and abroad at the opening ceremony of the festival. We tried our best to introduce snow culture to visitors, guide them to admire ice sculptures and answer their questions. So successful was the event that we volunteers got highly praised. It is the experience that makes me

24、aware of the importance of teamwork.What a memorable day it was! It will take root in my heart for sure.【范文2】An Unforgettable Experience in My LifeNever will I forget the splendid days when I escaped the stress of high school and went on a 3-day trip to Beijing with my best friends without parents o

25、r teachers.We acted clumsily at first since the instructions from the adults were all absent. Gradually we learned how to arrange for a satisfactory schedule, including tourist attractions, like the Great Wall as well as the Forbidden City. Another highlight was the most magnificent starry night. Freezing cold as the weather was, we trembled and stayed outside to witness the wonder of nature.What makes the first trip so special is that it shows my growth in independence and records the unique memories among life-long friends. I will surely bear the trip in heart forever.