2020年江苏中考英语写作指导-话题5文明环保课件.ppt

1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵写作技巧写作技巧5巧用感叹句巧用感叹句分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近分析宿迁、盐城、淮安及江苏其他地市近6年中考真题的书面年中考真题的书面表达可知，与表达可知，与“文明环保文明环保”这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角这一话题相关的书面表达有以下命题角度：如何做文明的人，如度：如何做文明的人，如2017宿迁、宿迁、2016淮安；如何保护环境。淮安；如何保护环境。结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：目前的环境结合全国中考真题可知，此话题还有以下命题角度：目前的环境问题；保护环境的意义。问题；保护环境的意义。命题探索

2、教材链接(2017宿迁宿迁)“小手拉大手，小手拉大手，同做文明人。同做文明人。”自创建文明城市、自创建文明城市、文明乡村以来文明乡村以来，宿迁人民万众一心，众志成城，让人，宿迁人民万众一心，众志成城，让人 点赞的行点赞的行为随处可见。作为为随处可见。作为中学生，我们也作出了自己的努力中学生，我们也作出了自己的努力。请根据。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。审主题：创建文明城市所做的努力审主题：创建文明城市所做的努力审文体：说明文审文体：说明文审时态：现在完成时审时态：现在完成时典例剖析典例剖析审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好

3、句审要点：除以上审要点：除以上4点，根据省略号可知需要自点，根据省略号可知需要自由发挥至少由发挥至少2点内容。如：把垃圾扔进垃圾箱点内容。如：把垃圾扔进垃圾箱里、排队买票里、排队买票要点：要点：1.种植花草树木；种植花草树木；2.遵守交通规则；遵守交通规则；3.公共场合不大声喧哗；公共场合不大声喧哗；4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；座；(自主发挥，至少两点自主发挥，至少两点)。参考词汇：文明的参考词汇：文明的civilized遵守遵守obey注意事项：注意事项：1.词数词数90左右，左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名

4、、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Since creating the civilized city and countryside,all the people in Suqian have made joint efforts.Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students,_一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.Following the rules in public is necessary to everyone.Its necess

5、ary for everyone to follow the rules in public.2.We cant smoke in public.We are not allowed to smoke in public.3.Lets take action now and build a better society.In order to build a better society,lets take action now./Lets take action now so as to build a better society.如何做文明的人如何做文明的人角度角度1升格范例升格范例一阶

6、 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.Standing in line when waiting for the bus is necessary to us.(用用it作形式主语升格作形式主语升格)_ 2.We cant speak loudly in public.(用被动语态升格用被动语态升格)_3.You cant eat anything in the reading room and you should keep it clean.(用用in order to/so as to表示目的升格表示目的升格)_ _ Its necessary for us to stand in l

7、ine when waiting for the bus.People are not allowed to speak loudly in public.In order to keep the reading room clean,you cant eat anything in it./You cant eat anything in the reading room so as to keep it clean.句句 子子 升升 格格一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4.We should write to the government and ask them to close

8、 down the factories.Everyone should help to clean up the river.5.Remember to throw rubbish in the bins and keep public places clean and beautiful for everyone.如何保护环境如何保护环境角度角度2好句范例好句范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4.我们不应该随地吐痰或四处扔垃圾。我们不应该随地吐痰或四处扔垃圾。_5.每个人应该帮助减少噪音污染。每个人应该帮助减少噪音污染。_6.记得使用布袋而不是塑料袋。记得使用布袋而不是塑料袋。_W

9、e shouldnt spit or throw away rubbish everywhere.Everyone should help to reduce noise pollution.Remember to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags.句句 子子 仿仿 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6.All these small things can add up and become big things that can improve the environment.7.If everyone makes a contribut

10、ion to building a green city,the world will become a better place to live in.8.Protecting nature is very important.If everyone tries his best to protect the environment,the earth will become much more beautiful.环保的意义环保的意义角度角度3好句范例好句范例一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句7.我们小小的举动累加起来会起到很大的作用，这样我们的城市我们小小的举动累加起来会起到很大的

11、作用，这样我们的城市会更加干净和整洁。会更加干净和整洁。_8.如果每个人都为节约资源做贡献，我们的地球将会更加长久。如果每个人都为节约资源做贡献，我们的地球将会更加长久。_ _Our small actions can add up and make a big difference so that our city will be cleaner and tidier.If everyone makes a contribution to saving resources,our earth will last longer.句句 子子 仿仿 写写一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句9.

12、我们相信我们尽力做得越多，我们的校园就会更美。我们相信我们尽力做得越多，我们的校园就会更美。_ _We believe that the more we try our best to do,the more beautiful our campus will be.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段As a teenager,we should behave well.Firstly,_(做法做法1).Secondly,_(做法做法2).Thirdly,_(做法做法3).Last but not least,its necessary

13、 for us to put the rubbish in the rubbish bins and dont draw on the walls no matter where we are.treat others politely/.语语 段段 练练 习习 1如何做文明的人如何做文明的人 obey the public rules/keep quiet in public in order not to influence others/.say thanks to others when they give you help/say sorry to someone when you

14、excuse him/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句The environment problems _(现状现状).There is _(具体表现具体表现).It is said that _(观点观点).So we should do something to protect the environment.are very serious these days/are so serious that we have to take measures/.语语 段段 练练 习习 2环境问题、环保措施及意义环境问题、环保措施及意义a lot of pollution/air pol

15、lution/noise pollution/white pollution/.the pollution has caused many other problems/has been a very big problem/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句First of all,I think we should _(做法做法1).Whats more,wed better _ _(做法做法2).Last but not least,we can turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room/use

16、both sides of paper/.turn off the taps when we dont use water/plant more trees/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 _(做法做法3)as well as _(做法做法4)Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we _(意义意义).Then our world will _(影响影响).So lets take action together.advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of d

17、riving/go to school by bike/.use reusable bags when shopping/pick up the rubbish/.make a difference/make a contribution to protecting the environment/.be more beautiful/cleaner/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章Since creating the civilized city and countryside,all the people in Suqian have made joint effor

18、ts.Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students,we have also made some contributions to the civilized Suqian.For example,to protect our environment,we plant flowers and trees.Also,for our own and others safety,we obey the traffic rules and never run red lights.In addition,we no long

19、er talk or 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句laugh loudly in public.Whats more,when on a bus,we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides,we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin,never littering anywhere.Furthermore,we are accustomed to queuing up for a ticket or something else.A

20、ll in all,we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Suqian more civilized.(2019无锡改编无锡改编)假设你叫李文，在今年暑期，你将代表你校赴假设你叫李文，在今年暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加瑞士参加“模拟联合国模拟联合国”会议并作发言，此次会议主题是会议并作发言，此次会议主题是A Greener World。请根据下面的内容要点，写一篇英文发言稿。请根据下面的内容要点，写一篇英文发言稿。要点：要点：1.介绍自己；介绍自己；2.中国政府已经采取很多措施保护环境，如关闭引发污染的工厂，使

21、中国政府已经采取很多措施保护环境，如关闭引发污染的工厂，使用新能源；用新能源；3.自己也做些事情保护地球，如离开房间时会关掉灯自己也做些事情保护地球，如离开房间时会关掉灯(自主发挥，自主发挥，至少一点至少一点)；4.呼吁人们呼吁人们(自主发挥，至少一点自主发挥，至少一点)。写作练兵写作练兵注意事项：注意事项：1.词数词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。写作练兵写作练兵Good morning,everyone!_写作练兵写作练兵 My name is Li Wen.I a

22、m 15 years old and study in Wuxi Sunshine Middle School.As we all know,the Earth is in trouble!How should we protect the Earth?Chinese government has taken many measures to protect our Earth.For example,lots of factories that cause pollution are shut down.And we also have used the sun,wind and water

23、 as new energy sources._写作练兵写作练兵I also do something to protect our Earth.When I leave the room,Ill turn off the lights.Ill also turn off the tap when I brush my teeth.And I always take a cloth bag when going shopping.To make the Earth greener,lets make some changes in our daily life!巧用感叹句巧用感叹句可将说话者说

24、话时惊讶、喜悦、气愤等思想巧用感叹句可将说话者说话时惊讶、喜悦、气愤等思想感情表达地更加强烈。感情表达地更加强烈。巧用感叹句1.由由what引导：引导：(1)She is an outgoing girl.What an outgoing girl she is!(2)The music is beautiful.What beautiful music it is!句式连接范例句式连接范例 巧用感叹句2.由由how引导：引导：(1)We were very excited.How excited we were!(2)Miss Yang is a nice teacher.How nice

25、a teacher Miss Yang is!巧用感叹句1.The children are playing happily over there.(用感叹句用感叹句)_2.These flowers are beautiful.(用感叹句用感叹句)_ 3.The workers are working hard.(用感叹句用感叹句)_ 4.Its fine today.(用感叹句用感叹句)_ How happily the children are playing over there！What beautiful flowers these are！How hard the workers

26、 are working！What fine weather it is today！小试牛刀小试牛刀 巧用感叹句5.The story is interesting.(用感叹句用感叹句)_6.You are a brave boy.(用感叹句用感叹句)_ 7.It will be fun when we all go on holiday together.(用感叹句用感叹句)_ 8.It is a pity that you cant come with us!(用感叹句用感叹句)_ What an interesting story it is！/How interesting the story is！What a brave boy you are！How fun it will be when we all go on holiday together！What a pity(it is)that you cant come with us!