2023届高考英语一轮复习 读后续写讲解和句型练习.docx

1、题目：读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两端，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chipice cream. It was almost time to leave. He jumped into the car with hisparentsand headed off to the Olympic-sizedpoolfor the big swim meet.When hisracecame up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift. Mike clim

2、bed out the pool, smiling. He had justwonfirst place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.Congratulations, son, his father said. His mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.A week later, it was time for another swim meet. Like before, Mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream f

3、lavor. Mike remembered that the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. Maybe hed win again.Hes takenfirst placeagain in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. As it turned out, Mike decided to have some mint chocolate chip Ice cream before every one of the nex

4、t few swim meets. He began to think of it as hislucky charm. After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam, Mike was feeling unbeatable. And he wouldnt admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmers build.It didnt take long after that f

5、or Mike to start coming in second place-and then third-and then last place in his races. The lucky mint chocolate chip ice cream had lost itsmagic.On the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at the table with him. “Mike, we all love ice cream, but its nothealthyfor your body to eat so much

6、 of it. Maybe its time to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.Mike unwillingly agreed. He went to the swim meet, and didntperformwell. His father offered to go running with him a few days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles. The extra weight soo

7、n disappeared, and Mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.Itwasthelastmeetoftheseason,andMikewasntsurewhattoexpect. Hefelthealthy again, buthedidnt knowifhestillhadanyspeedinthepool.注意:1.所续写短文的字数应为150左右；2.至少使用五个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1 :A

8、shedroveintothewater,hekickedhislegsandstretchedhisarmsasfarashecould.Paragraph2 :Hisjawdroppedasherealizedhehadbeatenhisownbesttime,andeveryoneelsetoo. 如何快速写：第一步：Analyze the story：5Rs1. Read for characters:Mike, his parents, Ice cream, teammates2. Read for conflict / problems：Ice cream and Mikes pe

9、rformance: Whether is it a Lucky charm3. Read for plot:4. Read for emotional changes:When his race came up, Mike wasconfidentMike wasfeeling pretty good.After several months of placing in the top positions of every race he swam, Mike wasfeeling unbeatable.Mikeunwillinglyagreed.5. Read for themeWhat

10、contributes to Mikes success in swimming?第二步：四句步定框架：写读后续写不同于写其它作文，有可能需要先倒着写的Step 1:先把最后一句写好，即：主题句Mike realized that ones lucky charm was nothing but his diligence.Step 2:再把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句：He dashed to the finish line.Step 3:紧接着每段的提示语句写角色的情感：As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched

11、 his arms as far as he could.It struck endless energy and motivation into his body.Mikes jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone elses too.The flowers in his heart were already in bloom.接下来就是把每段的中间补充完整，记住三大原则：1.ActionResponse原则：角色A的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其它角色的一系列反应的。每段对话1-2句，

12、不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种response。2.ConflictSolution原则：一般而言第二段会有问题的solution，但本文和高考的读后续写文章出题不一样，因为solution在所给文章中就已经有了。同时思考：能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段铺垫。3.NegativePositive原则：写作中一定要体现情感的变化，无论前面是这样的变化，最终都是积极的。最终：As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far a

13、s he could.1. It struck endless energy and motivation into his body.（心情）2.“This is where I belong. I canwintherace,” thought he, his teeth clenched and his eyes fixed on the finish line forward.（内心独白）3.Suddenly, two figureswhizzedpast, which startled him.（心情变化）4. Fearing to fall behind, he felt his

14、heart pounded frantically and his mind went blank.（解释心情变化和问题）5. Just then, he thought of his sweat and his fathers encouraging smile.（问题的解决方法）6. Gradually, his worry gave way to his confidence and the last 5 minutes saw him dash to the finish line, followed by the end of the race.（衔接句）Mikes jaw drop

15、ped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone elses too.7. The flowers in his heart were already in bloom.（心情变化）8. However, he knew he deserved the honor of championship.（拓展）9.His parentscame up and gave him a high five, grinning from ear to ear.（次要角色的回应）10. “Hey, why not try your

16、 favorite ice cream and celebrate!” said his father, patting his on the shoulder.（对话1）11. “Thanks, Dad, but I have given up theice cream. Its not such alucky charmat all.” His eyes shone with wisdom.（对话2）12. It was that day that Mike realized that ones lucky charm was nothing but his diligence.（照应开头

17、的主旨句）读后续写练习：动物描写1.Thebear_them(对低声吼叫),_(小心翼翼地靠近).2.The bear_and_(露出巨大的牙齿吼叫着).3.The bear was pacing back and forth,_(嗅)the ground.4. Their howls and cries_(空中飘荡着嚎叫声).5. The bear rose up and_me(对吼叫),_(露出巨大的牙齿).6.At anymoment(随时)the monster would_and_(会一跃而起将我撕成碎片).7.It looked around, and_(突然停下).8. It s

18、tood there,_ (准备攻击).9. The enormousgrizzlybear(灰熊)_(生气地嚎叫) and_were_(张开它滴着口水的嘴).10.Thepolar bearlet out one last roar and then_ (跑了).11. Thedog_ and_ (跳起来，兴奋地摇着尾巴).12. The dog suddenly started_ (疯狂地对我们汪汪叫).13. The dog_roaring barks(发出一连串咆哮的吠声).14. The dog was_,_ and _ (撕咬着，咆哮着，摇晃着尾巴).15. The dog_(蜷缩

19、在他身边).16.The dog licked his hands (舔了舔他的手)and_ (用它的头推他的腿). Then the dog sat down and looked up into his eyes, barking_(好像告诉他救援马上就到). He_(弯腰)and_(拍了拍它的头).17.But before he could grab the dog, it_ (发出猛烈的叫声)and rammed(撞)its body against him,_ (几乎要撞倒他).18. A mothercrocodilewas carrying their babies_(在它张开

20、的大嘴里).19.The dog sat patiently_(它的舌头从嘴里伸出来). He_(抱住)his dog,_(把脸埋在它的毛皮上).20. Thewild boar(野猪)_(发出哼声) as it stared at him with beady(圆溜溜的) black eyes. Suddenly the monster_(猛冲), its sharp tusks (獠牙)aimed right for his stomach.【参考答案】1.Thebearsnarled atthem(对低声吼叫),inching closer(小心翼翼地靠近).2.The bearbare

21、d its enormous teethandgrowled(露出巨大的牙齿吼叫着).3.The bear was pacing back and forth,sniffing(嗅)the ground.4. Their howls and criesfilled the air(空中飘荡着嚎叫声).5. The bear rose up androared atme(对吼叫),baring its enormous teeth(露出巨大的牙齿).6.At anymoment(随时)the monster wouldleap upandtear/rip me to pieces(会一跃而起将我

22、撕成碎片).7.It looked around, andstopped short(突然停下).8. It stood there,ready to attack(准备攻击).9. The enormousgrizzlybear(灰熊)roared with rage(生气地嚎叫) andits dripping jawswereopen wide(张开它滴着口水的嘴).10.Thepolarbearlet out one last roar and thenscampered off(跑了).11. Thedogleaptandwagged its tail in excitement(跳

23、起来，兴奋地摇着尾巴).12. The dog suddenly startedbarking at us like crazy(疯狂地对我们汪汪叫).13. The doglet out a stringofroaring barks(发出一连串咆哮的吠声)14. The dog wasbiting,growlingand waggingits tail (撕咬着，咆哮着，摇晃着尾巴).15. The dogcurled upnext to him (蜷缩在他身边).16.The dog licked his hands (舔了舔他的手)andpushed its head against

24、his leg(用它的头推他的腿). Then the dog sat down and looked up into his eyes, barkingas if telling him help was on the way(好像告诉他救援马上就到). Hebent down(弯腰)andpattedit on the head(拍了拍它的头).17.But before he could grab the dog, itlet out a ferocious bark(发出猛烈的叫声)and rammed(撞)its body against him,almost knocking hi

25、m down(几乎要撞倒他).18. A mothercrocodilewas carrying their babiesin its wide-open jaws(在它张开的大嘴里).19.The dog sat patientlywithits tongue hanging out of its mouth(它的舌头从嘴里伸出来). Hethrew/wrapped his arms around(抱住)his dog,burying his face in his fur(把脸埋在它的毛皮上).20. Thewildboar(野猪)grunted and snorted(发出哼声) as it stared at him with beady(圆溜溜的) black eyes. Suddenly the monstercharged(猛冲), its sharp tusks (獠牙)aimed right for his stomach.13