英语写作技巧传授课件演示.ppt

1、高分作文标志高分作文标志l1 1：是否：是否长短句交叉长短句交叉；l2 2：是否会使用：是否会使用插入语插入语；l3 3：用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使：用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词闪光词；l4 4：关键词是否换用，：关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词切勿老用重复词；l5 5：句型句型使用是否使用是否准确准确、地道。、地道。写好一篇作文的注意事项写好一篇作文的注意事项l1.适当用被动替换主动，适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的这样能更客观的反映事实反映事实,句子开头不要总是用句子开头不要总是用we/I。eg:It is,therefore

2、,high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.写好一篇作文的注意事项写好一篇作文的注意事项l2.善于使用插入语善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however/t

3、herefore/for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。eg：Other individuals,however,take the attitude that 写好一篇作文的注意事项写好一篇作文的注意事项l3.一定要学会换词，具体的替换太宽泛的。一定要学会换词，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carry out,sharpen

4、 ones competitive edge替换enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)Computer and IBy Simmyl I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present,which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i

5、 had expected,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless,feeling that the whole world belonged to me.替换very替换exciting 替换sb.be interested in sth.替换search 替换a lot of 范文lThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advanceme

6、nt of science and technology,computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them,in large measure!用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；替换more and more popular 替换with 替换development 替换enter into 替换now 替换sb.be i

7、nterested in sth.替换more and more people经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的 范文lFor a start,we can,freely,search desired information at any moment.Little by little,our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally,we can get huge recreations online by chatting,playing games,or del

8、ivering email.To begin with 插入语 被动替换 In addition/Besides 替换 send 范文lThere is no denying that,however,computers can function in the disservice of human beings,in a way,especially the growing violence,porn pictures,which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.替换 do harm to 网民，精彩用词 范文lAs a classic p

9、roverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives,despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should,therefore,take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.替换 Every coin has two sides 强调 替换 important/good 等 替换 a part of 替换 bad替换 e

10、ffects/influences 插入语替换 aspect 30个最经典的替换词 l1.individuals,folks替换(people,persons)l2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good 30个最经典的替换词l3:dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换 eg.An army of college

11、 students indulge themselves in playing games,enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation,as a result,they find their academic records are less impressive.30个最经典的替换词l4.(an army of,an ocean of,a sea of,a multitude of,a host of,many,if not

12、 most)替换many.注：用many,if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg.Many individuals,if not most,harbor the idea that.同理 用most,if not all,替换most.30个最经典的替换词l5:a slice of,quiet a few,several替换some l6:harbor the idea that,take the attitude that,hold the view that,it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledge

13、d that替换think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)30个最经典的替换词l7:affair,business,matter 替换thing l8:shared 代 common l9:reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits)l10:for my part,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 30个最经典的替换词l11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用in

14、creasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.30个最经典的替换词l12:little if anything,或little or nothing替换hardlyl13:beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,l14:shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customerl15:exceedingly,extremely,intensely 替换very 30个最经典的替换词l1

15、6.hardly necessary,hardly inevitable.替换 unnecessary,avoidable l17.sth appeals to sb,sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in/sb.be interested in l18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.l19.facet,sphere代aspect30个最经典的替换词l20.be indicative of,be suggestive of,be fearful

16、 of代 indicate,suggest,fearl21.give rise to,lead to,result in,trigger 替换cause.l22.There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sthl23.desire 替换want.30个最经典的替换词l24.pour attention into 替换pay attention tol25.bear in mind that 替换rememberl26.enjoy,possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)l27.interaction替换comm

17、unication 30个最经典的替换词l28.frown on sth替换 be against,disagree with sthl29.to name only a few,as an example替换 for example,for instance l30.next to/virtually impossible,替换nearly/almost impossible 一二三原则l1）first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：俗）l2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：俗）l3）the first,the second

18、,the third,the last（不推荐，原因：俗）l4）in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）l5）to begin with,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）一二三原则l6）to start with,next,in addition,finally（强烈推荐）l7）first and foremost,besides,last but not least（强烈推荐）l8）most important of all,moreover,finally

19、l9）on the one hand,on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）l10）for one thing,for another thing（适用于两点的情况）开头段常用核心句型 lThe arguer may be right about,but he seems to neglect to mention the fact that lContrary to generally accepted views,I argue that lIt is true that,but this is not to say that lThe main/obvious probl

20、em with this argument is that it is blind to the basic fact that lIt would be natural/reasonable to think that,but it would be absurd to claim that 开头段常用核心句型lThere is absolutely no reason for us to believe that lAt first thought,it may seem an attractive idea,but on second thought,we find thatlThe p

21、roblem/fact is that lAs far as I am concerned,I believe that lThose who object toargue thatBut people who favor,on the other hand,argue that 中间段的常用核心句型 lThe change inmainly results from lThe increase inis due to the fact that lMany people would claim that lOne of the reasons given for is that lThere

22、 are a variety of reasons for this dramatic growth in First Second Finally lWhy are(is/do/did)?For one thing For another 中间段的常用核心句型lHistory is filled with the examples of lAs is shown in the table released by the government,it can be learned that lThere is(no)good evidence to lWe must admit the unde

23、niable fact thatlNo one can deny the fact that lExperience(Evidence)suggests that lThe same is true of 结尾段的常用核心句型 lIt is high time that we placed great emphasis on the improvement of lIt is high time that we put an end to the unhealthy situation(tendency/phenomenon)of lThere is no easy solution to t

24、he problem of,but might be useful.lUnless there is a common realization of,it is very likely that lIt is essential that effective measures should be taken to prevent the situation.结尾段的常用核心句型lIt is suggested that great efforts should be made to control the growth of lIt is hoped that great efforts sh

25、ould be focused on finding(developing/improving)lAnyway,more publicity should be given to the potential effects of lTo control the tendency is not an easy job,and it involves a different state of attitude towards lTo put all into a nutshell,Il1.人的活动是有意识的。这决定了人类活动的预期性、目的性。l2.人类社会是有组织的。这种组织性决定了人类活动的秩序

26、性、规则性，导致人类活动的领导与被领导、权威与服从关系的确立。l3.人类社会是不断发展的。从这三方面来说，人类社会从其诞生开始，就有了领导活动。l4.是若干领导者按照一定的原则、制度科学地排列组合起来的，彼此间相互作用、相互影响的具有高度组织性和能动性的有机整体。这一集体，由其中的最高层的领导者负责和统领，次级领导者充当集体成l5.第一种方法是不提及纠纷的具体内容，晓以大义。这种调解法就是告诉纠纷的一方或双方，个人的事再大也是小事.l6.在语言的发展过程中，逐渐形成了约定俗成的语法规则，并随着社会的发展而进行必要的更新；其中，尤以某些词语在词性、词义和用法的变化，新词汇的不断涌现最为显著。l7.磁砖是一种陶瓷，但许多人并不知道，陶是陶而瓷是瓷，陶瓷是对它们的合称，实际上指的是两回事。l 8.在历史上，陶器比瓷器的出现要早得多，比如我国彩陶时期，距今约有七千年左右，而到了商代才有原始青瓷，可以说瓷器是在陶器的基础上发展起来的。l 9.在空调空调压缩机的电动机绝缘击穿、匝间短路或绕组烧毁以后，由于电动机烧毁后产生大量酸性氧化物而使制冷系统受到污染。l10.因此，除了要更换压缩机、毛细管与干燥过滤器之外，还要对整个制冷系统进行彻底的清洗。轻度污染时制冷系统内冷冻油没有完全污染，从压缩机的工艺管放出制冷剂和冷冻油时，油的颜色是透明的。若用石蕊试纸试验，油呈淡黄色。