改革后新专业四级英语写作开头技巧课件.ppt

1、20162016改革后新专业四级英语写作开改革后新专业四级英语写作开头技巧头技巧1内容摘要：内容摘要：写作新题型考的是summary+comment。这种题型看似新颖，其实更加简单,明显不同的是开头需要summarize。Comment部分不一定要写考生自己的观点，完全可以摘取阅读材料中现成的观点稍作展开。这样考生至少从头到尾不愁“无话可说”。2?“Read carefully the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.”?新样题中的“阅读材料”由原来的一段话变成了对某个issue的正反双方鲜明对立的几段文字，并且

2、题目明确要求考生先summarize briefly。?summary应该用原文四分之一的文字表达原文的主要观点。新专四的样题阅读材料原文一般 200词左右，这样概述以后大概保留 80字左右。对于一篇总共200字左右的考试作文，这样的开头会让整体结构不太匀称，因此也可以稍微再做压缩到 50-60。3In recent years,traditional printed newspaper has faced a serious challenge.The Christian Science Monitor became the first national newspaper to shut

3、down its print edition,and recently,the world famous magazine Newsweek announced that it would soon cease publishing on paper and shift to an online-only format.Will the printed newspaper one day be replaced by online newspaper?Some believe so while many still hold an optimistic view on the future o

4、f traditional newspaper.Read carefully the EXERCISE 14?Traditional characters,which date back to more than 2000years ago,have a more beautiful appearance and a more reasonable structure.Traditional characters make moresense convey traditional values and can thereforerepresenttraditional culture.For

5、two millennia,Chinese historical records and classic works were written in traditional characters.To beable to read them and inherit traditional culture,we need to bringtraditional characters back.?Politically,it is also necessary to restore traditionalChinese characters.Currently,traditional charac

6、ters are still in use in Hong Kong,Taiwan and many Chinesecommunities around the world.Restoring them cancontriYES5?In todays world efficiency matters most.Traditional characters,which usually have more strokes than simplified ones,are more difficult to learn.By contrast,simplified characters are mu

7、ch easier to learn and use.?Over the past 50 years,lots of classic texts have been turned into simplified character versions,which means simplified characters can also promote and preserve traditional culture.?Constant simplification has been a trend in the evolution of Chinese characters.From the o

8、racle bones script of 3000 years ago to traditional charNO6Marks will be awarded for content relevance,content sufficiency,organization and language quality.Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.7找出对立双方的主要论点感觉有难度，简单的办法是用句子代替词组（注意尽量不要照抄原文）；实在感觉个别观点有难度还可以忽略?When it com

9、es to simplified Chinese characters(或When it comes to whether we should revive traditional Chinese characters),people s views vary from one to another.Some claim that we should adopt the policy for aesthetical,cultural and political benefits.Others,however,contend that simplified versions are better

10、 choice because they are easier to learn,slimmer for better communication and also helpful to preserve traditional culture.From 8YESThe new media,such as the Internet and mobile phone applications,have exerted a great influence on people s life.Online newspaper is fast,instant,and convenient,while t

11、he printed newspaper often responds slowly to the latest news.People are now used to reading online newspaper on their smart phones,and no one has the patience of waiting for the printed newspaper.Online newspaper is also environment-friendly,which is in accord with the trend of saving energy in tod

12、ay s world.The printed newspaper consumes a large number of natural resources,and will,in the long term,be gradually replaced.The multiple services,such as posting comments and finding EXERCISE 29NOThere are still a large number of people in the world who have no access to the Internet.For these peo

13、ple,printed newspaper is an important way to know about the latest events at home and abroad.Although the printed newspaper cannot be as fast-responding as the online newspaper,it still can provide many in-depth reports and analytical articles for readers.Many column writers are invited to write spe

14、cial feature reports for the printed newspaper.Online newspaper,on the other hand,is only suitable for fast reading.Many readers prefer to read the printed newspaper for 10难以抗拒的网络报纸潮流难以抗拒的网络报纸潮流审题思路审题思路:本题讨论的是在网络媒体的冲击下，传统报纸是否会被网络报纸所取代。在具体行文方面，应首先根据材料简要概括正反两方的观点：正方认为网络报纸优势明显，反方则认为纸质报纸仍然有存在的理由。然后提出自己的

15、观点：纸质报纸最终会消失，并给出论据。最后总结全文，重申观点。11With the advent of information technology,the traditional media are pushed to the corner and are struggling to survive.Surprisingly,not all people are hailing the birth of online version news.Some people believe that traditional printed newspaper is irreplaceable sin

16、ce a large number of people still have no access to the Internet.However,others believe that the demise of printed version is at hand.Being faster and more convenient,cell phones and personal computers have led us to a paper-free lifestyle.The Irresistible Trend of Online Newspaper12As far as I am c

17、oncerned,it is irresistible that the printed newspaper will demise while the online newspaper will prosper.As the modern life picks up speed,news is reported at every turn(到处).News is no longer new when printed on paper.While the printing process of traditional newspaper takes hours,and its distribu

18、tion may take even longer time,the electronic transmission of news on the Internet may only take a couple of seconds,even including videos and audios.Besides,young people,the largest number of consumers,prefer to read news via cell phone or laptop.By these devices,users can share 13In conclusion,I f

19、irmly hold the idea that the online newspaper will dominate the market in the future and the printed newspaper will be displayed in the museum representing a period of history.14Read carefully the following excerpt on term-time holiday arguments in the UK,and then write your response in NO LESS THAN

20、 200 words,in which you should:?Summarize the main message of the excerpt and then?comment on whether parents should take children out of school for holiday during tem time in order to save money.You should support yourself with information from the excerpt.Marks will be awarded for content relevanc

21、e,content EXERCISE 315Term time holidays will be BannedParents are to be banned by Michael Gove,the Education Secretary,from taking their children out of school to save money on holidays.He is to abolish the right of head teachers to“authorise absence”from the classroom,which has been used to let fa

22、milies take term-time breaks,and will warn them they face fines for their children not being at school.“Any time out of school has the potential to damage a childs education,”a senior source at the Department 16“This is part of the governments wider commitment to bring down truancy levels in our sch

23、ools.There will also be stricter penalties for parents and schools.”The tough measures on truancy are part of a wider attempt by Mr.Gove to make education more academically rigorous and to tackle a culture in the educational establishment which he believes has accepted“excuses for failure.”Russell H

24、obby,the general secretary of the National Association of Head Teachers,said the measure would discourage parents from trying to put pressure on heads to sanction term time holidays.“The high cost of 17Which Is More Important,Education or a Cheaper Holiday?sample 1New research has shown that almost

25、four out of ten parents in the UK have taken their children out of school to go on holidays.Cost is the main reason given by parents for sacrificing their childrens education.Parents are to be banned,however,by UKs Education Authority,from taking their children out of school for holiday duringterm t

26、ime.18To begin with,taking tough measures on this kind of truancy is conducive to the normal teaching process,one of the key elements to guarantee kid s academic performance.As we know,currently,teachers have the discretion to approve a certain time of absence from school for each child,which is sup

27、posed to be for illness and is not supposed to be granted for holidays.By definitely abolishing the right of head teachers to“authorize absence”from the classroom,those teachers can rarely be pestered by parents who want to take children to go on a holiday just to save money,which severely disrupts

28、teaching process.What s more,without strict penalties imposed on the parents who lead to their 19Accordingly,the growing trend of term-time holidays should be banned with no delay.In this way,teachers can impart knowledge without disturbance and parents will be deterred from saving money at the expe

29、nse of sacrificing their kids education.20Sample 2When it comes to whether parents should take their children to spend holidays during term-time,views on the issue vary from person to person.Parents claim that by doing so,they can save a lot of money born of busy school holidays.Educational official

30、s strongly oppose this tendency on the ground that it encourages truancy,which in turn damages a child s education.From my perspective,the merits of banning term-time 21Should local authorities stagger school holidays to enablefamilies with children to take advantage of travel bargains?Or is it wron

31、g for parents to jeopardize their childrenseducation for the sake of a cheaper holiday?As far as I amconcerned,education is more important.Firstly,childrenseducation must come first.A cheap holiday during the schoolseason shouldnt be the reason to take a child out of school.Some parents are not will

32、ing to sacrifice or schedule theirlives in terms of their childrens needs.This kind of attitudewill influence their children deeply.Its no wonder so manykids are not interested in school and dont take their studyseriously.Secondly,school isnt day care center.Its aneducational institution that needs

33、every student to follow itsrules.Taking a child on holiday when school is in session willdisturb the order of the school.Besides,it is disruptive for the22All in all,taking children out of school for a cheaper holiday is irresponsible behavior.Those parents would risk being fined financially and morally.Its not only kids that need to grow upa lot of parents need to as well.23