短文改错练习课件.ppt

1、ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reservedITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错1.While traveled to Paris on a bus,I became very sick.A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly.He took me off the bu

2、s,found out where the doctors office,and took me to there himself.The next day,he came to visit me.I didnt speak French well,so I cant talk with him very much.However,even if we couldnt talk,but _we could communicate.I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness,and he communicated his concern

3、for my healthy.Through this experience I have learned that communication can take the place without much actual language at all.ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved 改错1 答案traveled改为travellingwell-dressing改为welldressedoffice后加was4.去掉to5.cant 改为couldnt

4、 6.去掉but 7.myself改为my 8.to改为for9.healthy改为health10.去掉theITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved2.The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life.In the net,we can learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as well.We ca

5、n also make phone calls,send messages by e-mails,go to net schools,and learn foreign languages by ourselves.Beside,we can enjoy music,watch sports matches,and play the chess or cards.The net even help us do shopping,make a chat with others and make friends with them.In a word,the Internet has made o

6、ur life more easier.ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错2答案1.a 改为an2.In-On3.home 前加at4.informations 改为information5.e-mails改为e-mail6.Beside改为besides7.去掉chess前的the8.help改为helps9.make a chat 改为have a chat10.more easier改为much easierITSM/ITILSino-i Te

7、chnology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错3.A few months after returning the US from Germany,I took part in a college course in French.Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany,I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language.At the fi

8、rst class,the teacher asks us to do a pronunciation exercise,in which he would say one word or two in French,and each student would do their best to copy.When he got to me,he kept having me to say more words,and I finally asked him why.I find it great funs.Its the first time Ive heard an American sp

9、eak French with a German accent.he explained it.ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错3答案1.returning 后加to2.have 改为had3.good改为well4.interested 改为interesting5.asks-asked6.one改为a7.their改为his8.去掉to9.funs改为fun10.去掉itITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyri

10、ght Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved4.I received your letter was dated April 16th the day before yesterday.All of our family greatly delighted to learn how you are getting along very well with your lessons.Time passes quickly.After dozens of days,youll finish the middle school.What plea

11、ses us most is that you do very good to make up your mind to enter for the college entrance examination this summer.What wonderful it is!Dad,as well as Mom and I,is with you.We wished you to make better use of your time.The full preparations you make,the surer of success youll certain be.ITSM/ITILSi

12、no-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错4答案 1.去掉was2.family 后加are3.how 改为that4.After改为In 5.去掉the6.good-well7.What改为How8.wished 改为wish9.full改为fuller10.certain改为certainlyITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved 短文改错5.

13、During the weekend I travelled by air the first time in my life.I generally travel by train and bus.It is both cheaper and safe.But this was a short journey.In the beginning I didnt feel very happily,but this feeling did not last longer.The journey was very exciting.I was soon high up in the sky amo

14、ng the cloud.The views of mountains,fields and rivers were interested.I enjoyed my short and comfortablly journey very much.This experience has shown that travelling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys.ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reser

15、ved短文改错5答案1.the 前加for2.and改为or3.safe改为safer4.happily改为happy5.longer改为long6.cloud改为clouds7.interested改为fortable9.in改为by10.make改为makingITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved 短文改错6.Dear Jim,Id like to tell you something more about our school sports meet.I

16、t was holding on Oct.6th,which was a fine day.There were over 1,000 student and teachers attend it.Wang Lin,a student from my class won the 100-meter race.He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record.The sports meet was really success.That was because we were all trying to do my

17、 best.Although I was not one of the winner,I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li PingITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错6答案1.去掉more2.holding改为held 3.students4.attend改为attending5.finish改为finished6.去掉in7

18、.really 后加a 8.my 改为our9.winner改为winners10.that改为whatITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved 短文改错7.A group of scientists were planning to go to countryside to do a scientific research in order to find out that whether the environment of the country had p

19、olluted.On arrival,they started to check the air and water.To our surprise,they found how terribly the situation was.They could see the serious pollution.Look into the cause,they persuade the government to pass the law to protect environment and kept the balance of nature.Now everything had changed.

20、Birds are singing while tree and grass are waving ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错7答案1.countryside前加the2.去掉that3.had改为was4.our改为their5.terribly改为terrible6.Look改为looking7.persuade改为persuaded8.Environment 前加our9.had-has10.tree改为treesITSM/ITILSi

21、no-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错8.One day,I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings.I went to answer it immediately.She was my close friend,Lisa.When we were talking on a phone,the fire alarm sounded.I ran back to the kitchen.The room full of

22、smoke and the beef was badly burnt.I quickly turned off the gas,opening all the windows,and then went out of the house.In my surprise,two fire engines was outside my house.I was rather worried.I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke ITSM/ITILSino-i Techn

23、ology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错8答案1.as改为when2.rings改为range3.She改为It4.a 改为the5.room 后加was6.opening改为opened8.In 改为To8.was-were9.去掉about10.which改为thatITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错9.I went to see the film

24、after supper.On my way to the cinema,I met an English woman,she lost her way.I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel.While go there,I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few yearsand she she had told me something about her country.Although I missed

25、the film,but I still felt very happy,for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practised my spoken English.If I had not worked hard on English,I would not have been able to help him.ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错9答案1.the改为a2.she-who3

26、.see前加to4.go改为going5.去掉been6.去掉had7.去掉but8.去掉had9.on改为at10.him改为herITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错10.（共9处错误）I live in a small town in the south.This is typical Chinese town.There are not only two main streets which across in the middle of th

27、e town.Around the town stand a high wall,which was built long ago,and it is still possibly to walk along it.No motorcars allowed in the business streets,which makes shopping very easier and safer.On warm days some small restaurants put table and chairs outside the houses to let people to take a rest

28、 and have some tea or ice-cream.There are no tall buildings but some beautiful parks.ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错10答案1.is后加a2.去掉not3.across改为cross4.stand改为stands5.possibly改为possible6.allowed前加are7.very改为much8.table改为tables9.去掉to ITSM/ITIL

29、Sino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错11.I have a good friend whos name is Liu Mei.She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class.Although she is clever,but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about.One eveni

30、ng she told me that something happened when her parents was out.She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning.She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbours house.She called 119 immediate.Ten minutes later,the firemen came

31、and put out fire.Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错11答案1.whos 改为whose2.student-students3.去掉but4.on改为in5.parents后加were6.homeworks改为homework7.stopped后加to8.find改为found9.immediate改为immediately10.fire前加th

32、eITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved 短文改错12.Ive been to China for two years.My friends in England sometimes write to me,ask me how long Ill stay here,and when Im thinking returning home.The answer of their questions is simple:I do not know when I wi

33、ll return back home.At the moment,I have no reason to return back England.I like living in China;I enjoy meeting Chinese people and travel around the country.My work is very interested,and there have so many things that I dont know about China,that I hope to discover in the future.ITSM/ITILSino-i Te

34、chnology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错12答案1.to改为in2.ask改为asking3.thinking后加of4.of 改为to5.back 去掉6.back后加to7.travel改为travelling8.interested改为interesting9.have改为are10.that改为whichITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错1

35、3.Dear Bob,Hello.I learn about you from my English teacher,Miss Wang.Id like to your pen friend,and get toknow more about your country.First,let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua.I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China.I went to Hongqi Middle School.We study quite a f

36、ew subject,such as math,Chinese,English and physics.I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time,but now I am interesting in football.Do you play any ball games?What your favouritesport?I look forward to hear from you soon.Yours,Li HuaITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limi

37、ted All rights reserved短文改错13.答案1.learn改为learned2.to后加be或become3.去掉more4.where改为which5.wentgo 6.subject改为subjects7.use改为used8.interesting改为interested9.hat后加is10.hear改为hearingITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reservedDear Ralph,短文改错14.（9处错误）Im a senior stud

38、ent.Im getting well with a boy in my class.But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year.He is shy boy,so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling.He wrote back.In his letter he said,We are students.Our task is study hard.Let us to wait and see whether we have any chance after gr

39、aduation.“So after graduation I telephoned to him,asking him about going out.But he said he didnt want to.He just wanted to sleep and watched TV.What do you think I should do?Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?ITSM/ITILSino-i Technology Ltd.Copyright Sino-i Technology Limited All rights reserved短文改错14.答案1.getting 后加on或along2.fallen改为been3.shy前加a4.feeling改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数5.study前加to或study改为studying6.去掉to7.去掉to8.watched改为watch9.and改为or