读后续写讲解（ppt课件）-2022新人教版（2019）《高中英语》选择性必修第一册.pptx

1、A Run to RememberThirteen can be a challenging ageNot only did I have to adapt to my changing bodyI also had to deal with my parents bitter divorce，a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburbWhen we movedmy beloved companion，a small brown pony（小马）,had to be soldFeeli

2、ng helpless and aloneI couldnt eat or sleep，and I cried all of the timeI missed my familymy home and my ponyFinally,my father，realizing how much I missed my pony，purchased an old red horse for me at a local market.My horse,Cowboy，was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the worldHe was pigeon-toed a

3、nd knock-kneedBut I didnt care about his faultsI loved him beyond all reasonsI joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboys looksI never let on how I felt，but deep down inside，my heart was breakingThe other members rode beautiful registered horses When Cowboy and I en

4、tered the events where the horse is judged on appearance，we were quickly out of the gameI finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed-speed eventsI chose barrel racing（绕桶赛），an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels

5、 in the fastest timeOne girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race eventsShe always won the blue ribbonsNeedless to say，she didnt feel threatened when I competed against her at the next showShe didnt need toI came in next to lastThe bitter memory of Beckys smirks（得意的笑）made me determined to

6、beat herFor the whole next month，I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena（运动场地）.We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy homeOn the way home I would be so tired；those five miles seemed twice as longAll of our hard work didnt make me feel confident b

7、y the time the show cameI sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels，finishing the course with case Para1:My turn finally came.Para2:No cheers filled the air when I finished my show 文本解析：本文主要讲述了作者13岁就承受着家庭的变故，搬离家乡来到拥堵陌生的城镇，失去了宠物小马驹的陪伴

8、很孤独。后来其貌不扬的Cowboy参加赛马比赛，成了黑马。作者通过这次比赛领悟到：只要自己足够努力，就可以主宰自己的命运。续写第一段的首句：My turn finally came.根据所给文章第7段The bitter memory of Beckys smirks made me determined to beat herFor the whole next month，I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arenaWe practiced for hours in the hot sun and the

9、n I would walk Cowboy homeOn the way home I would be so tired；those five miles seemed twice as long可以看出为了这次胜算不大的比赛，我和Cowboy勤学苦练。所以后面不难推测应该写比赛过程。读后续写遵循曲折性原则（凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏或矛盾冲突，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。但情节设计不能过于复杂或离奇。）所以本段可以写在赛场上面对劲敌，人和马的努力，克服困难。续写第二段的首句：No cheers filled the air when I finished my show（人们看到结

10、果后都沉默了。）由所给文章第六段“One girl named Becky rode.a big brown horse in the race events.She always won the blue ribbons.可见，Becky是众望所归。而且，Cowboy其貌不扬(My horse,Cowboy，was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the world)，众人都不看好它。人们为什么会沉默呢？根据读后续写的正能量原则，那么本段后面可以接着写Cowboy变成了黑马大大出乎观众们的意料，此时的观众们有何反应?而此时的我领悟到了什么呢？（通过努

11、力可以成为自己命运的主人）My turn finally came.As I urged Cowboy forward,he stumbled,and almost fell,much to the delight of the other riders(令其他骑手高兴的是).I jammed my hat down on my head,stroked（抚摸）Cowboys big red neck and entered the arena.At the signal,we dashed toward（朝.冲去）the first barrel，quickly whipped（鞭打）aro

12、und it and with perfect precision rounded the second and thundered on to the third.We tore around（到处乱窜）the final curve（弯道）and shot for（向.冲去）the finish line.No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.The end of our run was met with surprised silence.With the sound of my heart pounding in my ears,I heard the announcer（播音员）call our time.Cowboy and I had beaten Becky and her proud fancy horse!I gained much more than a blue ribbon that day.At thirteen,I realized that Id always come out a winner if I wanted something badly enough to work for it.I can be the master of my own destiny.