北师大版高中英语必修1《Writing Help》[王云霞]（市一等奖）优质课.ppt

1、Writing,Letter Writing,A personal letter OR a business letter?,A personal letter,formal,informal,A personal letter,informal,假如你是王莹，你现在在大学读医科。你和芳兰是小学同学。你们已经十年没见面了。最近你从陈晓峰处获知芳兰的地址，请根据以下提示写信和她联系。 1. 询问她现在的情况； 2. 介绍你现在的情况； 3. 希望常联系。 注意： 1、词数不少于50； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。,Dear Fang Lan, This

2、is Wang Ying. Remember me? We were friends in primary school. We havent seen each other for about 10 yearsright? Anyway, how are you? I got your address from Chen Xiaohong. What are you doing now? Are you working? I remember you always wanted to be a police officer! At the moment Im studying medicin

3、e at a university. Do you remember Xie Jun? Hes on the same course as me! I think Ive changed a lot over the years. I dont like pop music any moreI prefer classical music now. Well, I must finish here because Ive got an exam tomorrow. Write back soon and tell me all your news. All the best Wang Ying

4、,Remember me?,right?,Anyway,Well,北师大版 模块1 Unit 1 Communication Workshop,读一读，评一评,你的英国朋友Chris打算在学校成立一个中国功夫（kung fu）俱乐部，来信向你咨询如何进行宣传。请根据以下提示回信。 1、在校园张贴海报； 2、在网络上发布信息； 3、组织功夫表演活动。 注意： 1、词数不少于50； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。,Dear Chris, 1. Put up a poster in school. 2. Introduce the club over the

5、Internet. 3. Put on a Chinese kung fu show. Yours, Joe,23,Dear Chris, Im glad that youre planning to set up a Chinese Kung fu club. As for how to make it known, I think you may put up a poster in school. You may also introduce the club over the Internet. Besides, you could put on a Chinese kung fu s

6、how. They will surely attract a lot of students. I hope it will be helpful. If you need more information, just let me know. Yours, Joe,( 72),Dear Chris, Im delightful to receive your letter. We havent seen each other for a long time, which made me miss you so much that I always you always show up in

7、 my dream. Im glad that youre planning to set up a Chinese kung fu club. Its my responsibility and obligation to give you some suggestions. First, I think you should put up a poster in school to attract a large quantities of students, which may make you kung fu club known. If the student know it, a

8、large number of students may have tendency to join it. Second you are supposed to introduce the club over the Internet. With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, the Internet has become a indispensable part in our life, making people be addicted to it. Last but not least, youd better t

9、o put on a Chinese kung fu show. Its universally acknowledged that China is an ancient and splendid country with a long history, so many people whether young or old like kung fu. I am sure people will support you and join your kung fu show. I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be of significanc

10、e and help. If you need more information, dont hesitate to let me know. I cant wait to see your success. Yours, Joe,学生评分结果,评分标准,北京考试院 2014-1-9 会议精神,作文1-应用文 学生要有文体意识。 应用文最重要的是交际的得体性。 私人书信，简单句，接近口语体。 长难句，复杂句交际不得体。 私人书信，更偏向于小词，大词交际不得体。 单句。7-8词一句。偏口语的书面体。,Dear Chris, Its delightful to receive your lette

11、r. We havent seen each other for a long time, which made me miss you so much that Iyou always show up in my dream. Im glad that youre planning to set up a Chinese kung fu club. Its my responsibility and obligation to give you some suggestions. First, I think you should put up a poster in school to a

12、ttract a large quantities of students, which may make you kung fu club known. If the student know it, a large number of students may have tendency to join it. Second you are supposed to introduce the club over the Internet. With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, the Internet has bec

13、ome a indispensable part in our life, making people be addicted to it. Last but not least, youd better to put on a Chinese kung fu show. Its universally acknowledged that China is an ancient and splendid country with a long history, so many people whether young or old like kung fu. I am sure people

14、will support you and join your kung fu show. I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be of significance and help. If you need more information, dont hesitate to let me know. I cant wait to see your success. Yours, Joe,(214 ),问题1？,大词,解决？,1、小词- 常用词 2、保证小词 无拼写错误,Dear Chris, Im delightful to receive y

15、our letter. We havent seen each other for a long time, which made me miss you so much that I always you always show up in my dream. Im glad that youre planning to set up a Chinese kung fu club. Its my responsibility and obligation to give you some suggestions. First, I think you should put up a post

16、er in school to attract a large quantities of students, which may make you kung fu club known. If the student know it, a large number of students may have tendency to join it. Second you are supposed to introduce the club over the Internet. With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, the

17、 Internet has become a indispensable part in our life, making people be addicted to it. Last but not least, youd better to put on a Chinese kung fu show. Its universally acknowledged that China is an ancient and splendid country with a long history, so many people whether young or old like kung fu.

18、I am sure people will support you and join your kung fu show. I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be of significance and help. If you need more information, dont hesitate to let me know. I cant wait to see your success. Yours, Joe,(214 ),问题2？,长难句,解决？,口语化，交际话的句子，以单句和并列句为主,Dear Chris, Im delight

19、ful to receive your letter. We havent seen each other for a long time, which made me miss you so much that I always you always show up in my dream. Im glad that youre planning to set up a Chinese kung fu club. Its my responsibility and obligation to give you some suggestions. First, I think you shou

20、ld put up a poster in school to attract a large quantities of students, which may make you kung fu club known. If the student know it, a large number of students may have tendency to join it. Second you are supposed to introduce the club over the Internet. With the rapid development of agriculture a

21、nd industry, the Internet has become a indispensable part in our life, making people be addicted to it. Last but not least, youd better to put on a Chinese kung fu show. Its universally acknowledged that China is an ancient and splendid country with a long history, so many people whether young or ol

22、d like kung fu. I am sure people will support you and join your kung fu show. I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be of significance and help. If you need more information, dont hesitate to let me know. I cant wait to see your success. Yours, Joe,(214 ),问题3？,增加不必要的信息,解决？,适当增加细节 目的：使行文连贯,Dear C

23、hris, Im glad that youre planning to set up a Chinese Kung fu club. As for how to make it known, I think you may put up a poster in school. You may also introduce the club over the Internet. Besides, you could put on a Chinese kung fu show. They will surely attract a lot of students. I hope it will

24、be helpful. If you need more information, just let me know. Yours, Joe,( 72),Best one!,内容完整,内容完整,内容完整,交际得体,适当添加，条理清楚,语言运用能力强,私人书信- 一档文（13-15）,完全达到了预期的写作目的 ！,Practice makes perfect !,假定你的名字叫李童，上个月学校派你去美国。在美国期间，你住在Jane家里。她带你参观和浏览了许多地方。Jane的妈妈为你做了许多可口的饭菜，这一切使你在美国度过了十分美好的日子。写一封感谢款待的信，表示对Jane及其家人的感谢。希望今后

25、有机会在中国以同样的方式招待她。 注意： 1、词数不少于50； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。,假定你的名字叫李童，上个月学校派你去美国。在美国期间，你住在Jane家里。她带你参观和浏览了许多地方。Jane的妈妈为你做了许多可口的饭菜，这一切使你在美国度过了十分美好的日子。写一封感谢款待的信，表示对Jane及其家人的感谢。希望今后有机会在中国以同样的方式招待她。,1审文体：,私人信件感谢信,2审细节：,审题,Presentation,Dear Jane, Thank you very much for your kindness last month.

26、It was very nice of you to put me up at your home while I was in America. I really grateful that you took me around and your mother cooked delicious food for me. Surely I had a wonderful time in America. I hope I can repay you in the same way in China some time in the future.,68,Sum up,Style,Practical,All,Clear,Logical,文体,交际性，实用性,内容完整,简明清晰（小词，短句，工整，无错）,清楚合理,SPACL,应用文写作技巧,Homework,Please polish your letters！,