人教版九年级英语中考作文讲解课件.pptx

1、大家好大家好（三）评分档次 1.第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。2.第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达。3.第三档（7-9分）能传递部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。4.第四档（4-6分）只能传递少量信息，表达不通顺，只有少量句子可读。5.第五档（1-3分）只能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。五、书面表达（15分）阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。某英文报为了了解中学生课外阅读情况，向广大中学生做调查，请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。提示：1.短文应包括

2、图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。评分意见：（一）总体原则 考查学生综合运用语言的能力，注重语言表达的意义和流畅性。（二）内容要点 1.benefit 2.what What kind of books do you like reading?Why?3.habit Do you read e-books?Why or why not?When do you usually read?How long do you read a day or a week?4.planReading Outside Class

3、As we all know,Reading has a lot of benefit._ ,reading has benefit.It can open up our eyes because books knowledge,and it makes us wiser and richer in life.I like reading newspapers and magazines,from which I get lots of fun and learn about I also read story books and novels in my spare time which m

4、ake me relaxed and happy.I read e-books because they eyes.On weekends,I usually a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.Summer vacation is coming.I plan to.I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my la

5、nguage skills.reading can make a fifference to my life.Reading Outside Class2016 英文有句谚语“East,wast,homes best.”某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。评分意见：（一）总体原则 考查学生综合运用语言的能力，注重语言表达的

6、意义和流畅性。（二）内容要点 1.居室 2.居住环境 3.家庭成员 4.家庭成员之间的关系 5.如何让你的家更美好 “East,west,hones best.”I “East,west,hones best.”I live in a house in the countryside.Theres a big living live in a house in the countryside.Theres a big living room,three bedrooms,a kitchen and a washroom in room,three bedrooms,a kitchen and

7、a washroom in it.Therere some trees and flowers around my house.The it.Therere some trees and flowers around my house.The air is really clean.And I often hear birds singing.air is really clean.And I often hear birds singing.Therere four people in my family.Theyre my Therere four people in my family.

8、Theyre my parents,my sister and I.Were helpful and friendly.And parents,my sister and I.Were helpful and friendly.And we always get on well with each other.we always get on well with each other.Im happy I have a good family.I will do what I can Im happy I have a good family.I will do what I can to h

9、elp do more housework and farm work.Ill study to help do more housework and farm work.Ill study harder so that I can make more money in the future.With harder so that I can make more money in the future.With our effort,Im sure my home will be better and better.our effort,Im sure my home will be bett

10、er and better.East,wast,homes best ,“East,west,homes best.”I live,“East,west,homes best.”I live in an apartment.There is a sitting room,a dining room,two in an apartment.There is a sitting room,a dining room,two bedrooms,a washroom,a kitchen and a study in it.Thanks to my bedrooms,a washroom,a kitch

11、en and a study in it.Thanks to my mother,my home is always clean and tidy.The flowers in the mother,my home is always clean and tidy.The flowers in the sitting room look lovely.My apartment is not big,because there sitting room look lovely.My apartment is not big,because there are only three people

12、in my family,my father,my mother and are only three people in my family,my father,my mother and I.Sometimes my parents argue,but usually they I.Sometimes my parents argue,but usually they.They love me and I love them,too.They love me and I love them,too.Everyone needs a good home.Ill do my best to m

13、ake my Everyone needs a good home.Ill do my best to make my home better.Ill study harder to make my parents happier and home better.Ill study harder to make my parents happier and Ill do what I can to improve our living environment.Ill do what I can to improve our living environment.East,west,hones

14、best六、书面表达（15分）书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报以“My Schoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下列图表信息，写一篇短文。内容包括：书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课余你期望做的事情。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。My Schoolbag My Schoolbag I have a schoolbag.It I have a schoolbag.It carrying the school carrying the school th

15、ings,such as books,pens and so on.It looks like a things,such as books,pens and so on.It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.My schoolbag is always knowledge.My schoolbag is always However,it However,it also b

16、rings us many problems.We have to do so much also brings us many problems.We have to do so much homework that we cannot get enough sleep.homework that we cannot get enough sleep.enjoying the wonderful weekends,we areenjoying the wonderful weekends,we arehave have extra classes with it.If we have mor

17、e spare time,we can extra classes with it.If we have more spare time,we can t t and actives.and actives.,we can develop,we can develop hobbies and interest as well.As a middle school hobbies and interest as well.As a middle school student,I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness student,I

18、hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.rather than become a burden.Example：Shopping on the Internet 网购利弊随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如*网，京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢?请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。提示词汇：网上购物shopping on the Internet(online

19、 shopping)，京东商城Recently Recently，we talk about advantages and disadvantages of shopping on the Internet.The shops on Internet,for example , are open for almost 24 hours a day,so we can buy something we want at any time if we like.we neednt to wait for a long time.However,we can only see the pictures

20、 on the Internet and can not touch or see them,We will have more problems when the things are not good.it is not a good news for some girls because they enjoy going shopping in the market with their friends.How to live a low-carbon life(如何低碳生活)假定你是李华，最近你们班就假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国

21、朋友你的美国朋友 Jack Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：1.1.节水节电节水节电;2.2.垃圾分类垃圾分类;3.3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕少用纸巾，重拾手帕;4.4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。参考词汇：低碳参考词汇：低碳low carbon low carbon，纸巾纸巾tissue tissue，垃圾分类，垃圾分类sort out rubbishes sort out rubbishes，手帕，手帕 handkerchief han

22、dkerchief，电电electricityelectricityDear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it.Everyone knows that we can do a lot of things in order to live a low-carbon life.Firstly,we should save water and electricity.Secondly,we had better so

23、rt out rubbishes,which include recyclable and non-recyclable rubbishes.Thirdly,we could re-pick up our handkerchiefs,and use tissues as little as possible so we can stop more tress from cutting down.Last but not least,please try to walk if you have more free time,and ride bikes or take buses as ofte

24、n as possible.Best wishes,Li Bing2017年中考英语作文万能句子谚语Every coin has two sides.Every coin has two sides.每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两面性。面性。The winter is coming and the spring is not far.The winter is coming and the spring is not far.冬冬天已经临近了，春天还会远吗？天已经临近了，春天还会远吗？Failure is the mother of success.Failure

25、 is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。Practice makes perfect.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟能生巧。Actions speak louder than words.Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。事实胜于雄辩。A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit.A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。吃一堑，长一智。A good beginning is half done.A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。良好的开端是成功的一半。Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today.Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。今日事，今日毕。Time and tide wait for no man.Time and tide wait for no man.时不我待。时不我待。