高考英语作文图画型作文精讲课件.ppt
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1、图画作文图画作文图画图画+提纲作文的特点与要求提纲作文的特点与要求特点:l英文看图作文和中文看图作文的模式和思维体系不同。l图画选择都含有丰富的寓意。要求:l把握寓意、联系现实、深刻思考、丰富表达。攻克图画作文的关键攻克图画作文的关键-仔细分析、观察仔细分析、观察细节细节 1.观察图画的同时可以在草稿纸上作相应的笔记1)写出你认为图画中反映的是一个什么样的现象和问题;2)简单写下图画中的一些细节。迅速分析这些细节,标明哪些是重点、哪些是次重点、哪些无关紧要,在写作的时候便能够自如把握需要详细描述的信息。3)查漏补缺。攻克图画作文的关键攻克图画作文的关键-仔细分析、仔细分析、观察细节观察细节2.
2、草稿纸上列一个简单的提纲 (这里指的提纲不是考题中已经给出的提纲,而是根据考题的提纲写出自己的行文思路、大意和要点等。)lTips:实践证明列提纲是作文制胜的又一法宝。正式的写作步骤:正式的写作步骤:1)第一段主要是描述图画中的信息和表达的含义。不应发表太多议论不应发表太多议论2)第二段的全文的重点,一般都是要求具体分析图画的含义。3)第三段的要求一般视具体的试题而定,一般是给出自己的评论(有的要求考生提出自己的建议以及针对现象应该采取的措施)。Tips:第二段和第三段的开头最好写一个主题句,既可以防止离题,又符合英文写作的习惯。考研论说文框架结构:3段,10句,110120词第一段:引言/起
3、始/淘金段,图画描述,1-3句1.总体描述:人物/动物/事物动作环境 1句2.挖掘细节词、串连成句:12句3.文字说明/象征寓意:1句第二段:主体段,意义阐释,5句1.主题句:象征寓意,1句2.论证:3句1)因果论证2)举例论证 3)联系现实:图画作文创作原则(以小见大,把握象征寓意,个体想为群体,具体想为抽象)4)正反论证3.小结:概括论证,总结本段 1句 第三段:结论段,建议措施,1-2句1.结论句2.针对双方提建议3.包装结尾、展望未来lOnly in this way can we solve this problem.lIt is high time that we solved t
4、his problem.专题一专题一 第一段套话如何描述首段写法首段写法l其实,阅卷教师最重视的就是大作文第一段,也是最难写的段落,盲目套用模板、空发议论,容易导致低分。l阅卷教师最希望看到的写法是:首句总体描述图画,点出人物、动作和环境;次句挖掘细节词、串连成句,将图中细节一网打尽;末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。可以发表议论,最好不要太多。描述图画的常用词描述图画的常用词l有关图画的名词l描述图画的形容词l修饰动词的副词l“寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译?替换picture的词语 sketch:素描;速写;草图(rough quickly-made drawing,without many deta
5、ils 素描;速写;草图)drawing 指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。cartoon 指幽默或讽刺性漫画。(amusing drawing in a newspaper or magazine,esp one that comments satirically on current events(报刊上的)漫画;(尤指)时事讽刺画。)替换picture的词语 diagram 多指科技书籍或文献中具有概括解说作用的图表、图样或略图。(不能用于图画作文)picture 指广义的“图画”,现多用来指相片、图像。painting 指着色的画。picture that has been painted p
6、ortrait 指肖像,只用于指人。描述图画的形容词 thought-provoking发人深省的 enlightening 有启迪作用/使人感悟的 compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣 profound含义深刻=far-reaching implications instructive有益的(=informative)(搭配ADV:extremely,highly,most,particularly,very/quite)amusing 令人发笑的,ridiculous 荒谬可笑的 illuminating(particularly revealin
7、g or helpful)富有启发性的;很有助益的;impressive 印象深刻的,exaggerative 夸张的 telling 有效的,生动的,明显的修饰动词的副词:graphically/vividly生动地 symbolically象征性地 conspicuously/clearly/explicitly清晰地 subtly巧妙地,精细地寓意:句酷双语例句 Is the moral tagged to the story clear?加给故事的寓意明白吗?The implications of。are many.。寓意甚多。The moral of this story is ve
8、ry simple.这个故事的寓意是十分简单的。海词在线词典 寓意深刻 have a profound message/entertain a thought deeply遇到不会写的单词怎么办?2种方法:(1)上位概念 (2)同义替换遇到不会写的单词怎么办?(1)这人很变态:BT?Xbe different from normal people strange/odd/peculiar 遇到不会写的单词怎么办?(2)宫爆鸡丁 a chicken in the court X a dish which I ate in the canteen/on campus 四喜丸子 four happy
9、 meatballs X meatballs 遇到不会写的单词怎么办?(3)铁锹、锄头、稿:spade,hoe,pick the tools which are used to plant trees 拐杖:stick The tool which is used to help the disabled/handicap to stand/walk 残疾人:the disabled those who can not move/speak/think normally 遇到不会写的单词怎么办?(4)老百姓 old hundred sex X the general public ordina
10、ry people people from all walks of life遇到不会写的单词怎么办?(5)孝敬老人 respect the old take care of senior citizens care for/about 作文中常见的主体 年轻人:the young,a teen,teenagers and other youngsters,大学生:college and university students 老人:the old,senior citizens 老百姓:people from all walks of life,ordinary people,the gen
11、eral public写第一段套话的三种思路写第一段套话的三种思路l第一段的思路1:(适合基础弱的考生)全套 半套+描述1 半套+描述2全套l第一段的思路2:(适合基础好的考生)半套+描述1半套+描述2l第一段的思路3:(折衷)半套+描述1半套+描述2全套(全套:即全部套用现成的句子。)第一段的思路第一段的思路1:(适合基础弱的适合基础弱的考生)考生)全套 半套+描述1 半套+描述2全套 例:What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is!As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,描述1.
12、What impresses me most is that(=The most striking feature of the drawing is that)描述2(图画重点信息).Simple as the image is,the implications mirrored are apparently(conspicuously)far-reaching.第一段的思路第一段的思路2:(适合基础好的适合基础好的考生)考生)半套+描述1半套+描述2例:The cartoon subtly(巧妙地)and symbolically(象征性地)depicts a thought-provok
13、ing scenario(场景)in which 描 述 1.Further examination(查阅)reveals that 描 述 2./However,a quick glance at _ reveals ironically that 描 述 2.e.g.第一段的思路第一段的思路3:(折衷):(折衷)l半套+描述1半套+描述2全套例:As is vividly depicted in the picture,描述 1.The most striking feature is 描述 2(图画重点信息).There is no doubt that its symbolic mea
14、ning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.可供参考的替换句型可供参考的替换句型 全套:全套:lWhat a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is!lWhoever in front of this image(=Those who catch sight of this picture)will be much/highly/greatly amused/interested/shocked.lHow interesting and enlightening it is
15、!lIt is so funny that whoever in front of it cannot help laughing.可供参考的替换句型:半套+描述1lAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,描述1.lWhat is conspicuously/clearly illustrated/presented/portrayed/described in the drawing above is that(描述图画).lThe cartoon depicts a vivid scene in which=Where+(描写图画的一句话)l
16、The satirical(讽刺性的)sketch graphically(生动的)portrays/depicts a scene in which+句子(一般用于总写)lIt is graphically/symbolically/explicitly/vividly illustrated/demonstrated in the _图_that+同上l例:可供参考的替换句型可供参考的替换句型:半套半套+描描述述2lWhat impresses me most is that(=The most striking feature of the drawing is that)描述2(图画重
17、点信息).lThe most striking(引人注目的)feature(特点)of the drawing is(the fact)that _.lWhat makes the drawing striking/intriguing/compelling is the fact that _.可供参考的替换句型可供参考的替换句型:全套全套lOdd and funny(自己根据情况任意替换形容词)as it seems/appears to be/looks,such/these happenings(事件)/practices/phenomena/stories/cases/events
18、are so pervasive/widespread that we cant afford to ignore/disregard/overlook/pay no attention to them.lOdd and funny(自己根据情况任意替换形容词)as the above image looks/seems to be,the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially.可供参考的替换句型可供参考的替换句型:全套全套lUncomplicated as the pictu
19、re is,the symbolic meaning(implied meaning)(寓意)is as deep as ocean(profound).lGiven its profound social implication,the thought-provoking phenomenon is well worth our endeavor to explore.有鉴于它深刻的社会寓意,该引人深思现象非常值得我们努力去探究。可供参考的替换句型可供参考的替换句型:全套全套lThere is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly(巧妙的)con
20、veyed should be given deep consideration.(应关注图画所表达的寓意)lSimple as the image seems to be,the intended/implied meaning goes far deeper.(尽管图画很简单,但其寓意却是非常深奥的)lUndoubtedly/Unquestionably/Indisputably/Incontrovertibly,_.there is no doubt that-的同义替换的同义替换lundoubtedlyunquestionably incontrovertiblyindisputabl
21、ydoubtlesslylbeyond any doubtlbeyond questionlwithout doubt范文范文1:1998年真题年真题 1.Write out the message conveyed by the cartoon.2.Give your comments.范文范文1:1998年真题年真题lThe cartoon presents a hen singing proudly about her promise of producing good-quality eggs.However,a quick glance at her words reveals ir
22、onically that the so-called“promise”round eggs composed of the three necessary parts of shell,white and yolkis,as a matter of fact,what a hen is supposed to produce.l见思路见思路2 另见替换句另见替换句范文范文2:悄悄话:悄悄话范文范文2:悄悄话:悄悄话lAs is illustrated in the picture,a couple sleeps on the same bed but they seem to be rath
23、er isolated from each other.Their oral communication has been replaced by online chatting.This picture reveals the in-depth problem of modern peoples alienation from each other,even among family members.范文范文3:锻炼身体:锻炼身体范文范文3:锻炼身体:锻炼身体l The picture depicts a man who is happily singing and walking home
24、 with his cute dog.He is coming back from work carrying his briefcase,and he must have stopped by the market on his way,buying vegetables and fish.As is suggested by the picture,he is exercising by waving the briefcase and basket together.范文范文4:贪吃:贪吃范文范文4:贪吃:贪吃l这幅图刻画了一个看起来很胖、很富有也很贪吃的男人。他正在毫不知足地吞吃着一桌
25、的美食,而我们惊奇地发现服务员正在上更多的菜。但是,我们不禁担心他的胃是否能够一下子承担如此多的负担。l正如标题所提示的那样,贪吃对于人们的健康只会产生负面效应。范文范文4:贪吃:贪吃 The cartoon features a man who looks fat,wealthy and greedy for food.He is insatiably(贪得无厌贪得无厌)devouring a table of delicious food,while we are surprised to find that the waiter is serving him with even more
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