高中英语短文改错课件.pptx

1、短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four

2、when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fac

3、t,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.短文改错解题步骤1.通读全文，掌握大意通读全文，掌握大意2.整句理解整句理解，上下上下兼顾兼顾3.复读复读全文全文，检查检查验证验证 I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was

4、 only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerf

5、ul.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.我几乎记不起我的奶奶了，她过去常常把我抱在她的膝盖上并唱着古老的歌谣，她去世的时候我才四岁。此刻，对我来说，奶奶仅仅是一个遥远的记忆，我很清楚地记得我的爷爷。他个子很高，有着宽阔的肩膀和随着年龄渐长由黑变灰的胡子。他有着低沉的嗓音，这让他在我们校长里脱颖而出，他强壮有力。事实上，他甚至还会把那些来

6、找我做功课或者玩耍的小伙伴吓跑。然而，他是我所认识的最温文尔雅的人。1.I hardly remember my grandmother.2.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.3.I was only four when she passes away.4.She is just a distant memory for me now.5.I remember my grandfather very much.6.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turn

7、ed from black toward gray over the years.7.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.8.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.9.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.I ha

8、rdly remember my grandmother.1.Hardly：几乎不，几乎没有（表否定，修饰名词时，名词前经常加有any，修饰动词时，动词前经常加有ever）Eg.There is hardly any tea left.It hardly ever snowed in Washington in the winter 用于can或could之后，主要动词前，强调做某事很难Eg.I could hardly believe it when I read the letter 刚刚，才Eg.We had hadly sat down to supper when the telep

9、hone rang.hardly 置于句首时要倒装，在hardly.when结构中，hardly置于句首时，倒装在主句Eg.Hardly have I heard from him recently.Hardly had I reached the bus stop when the bus started.1.I hardly remember my grandmother.（）2.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.3.I was only four when she passes away.4.She is jus

10、t a distant memory for me now.5.I remember my grandfather very much.6.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.7.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.8.In a fact,he even scared my cla

11、ssmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.9.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.hold1.注意区分used to do sth.be/get used to sth/doing sth和be used to do 这三个搭配的用法used to do sth.过去常常做某事be/get used to sth./doing st

12、h.习惯于某事/做某事be used to do sth.被用来做某事句型区分：I used to get up early.I am used to getting up early.I used to travel by air.I am used to traveling by air.The robot can be used to do some dangerous work.The knife is used to cut fruits.2.holdheldheld抱住，托住，拿着，抓住Eg.The girl held her fathers hand tightly.容纳，包含E

13、g.The plane holds about 300 passegers怀有，持有（信念，意见）Eg.He holds strange views on education.举行，召开Eg.Hold a meeting Hold on 等着，停住Eg.Hold on!This isnt the right road.3.Knee 膝盖bring sb.to their knees（尤指战争中）打败某人，使某人屈膝投降bring sth.to its knees 摧毁某物，使（组织等）瘫痪或崩溃1.I hardly remember my grandmother.（）2.She used to

14、 holding me on her knees and sing old songs.hold3.I was only four when she passes away.4.She is just a distant memory for me now.5.I remember my grandfather very much.6.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.7.He had a deep voice,which set himse

15、lf apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.8.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.9.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.I was only four when she passes away.passed1.Pass away 去世 终止，结束 Eg.All this troubl

16、e will pass away2.Pass the time=kill the time 消磨时间 Eg.We killed the time playing cards 1.I hardly remember my grandmother.（）2.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.hold 3.I was only four when she passes away.passed4.She is just a distant memory for me now.5.I remember my grandfather

17、 very much.6.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.7.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.8.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework

18、 with me.9.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.She is just a distant memory for me now.1.A distant memory 一个遥远的记忆Eg.The history was a distant memory for me.2.In memory of 作为对某人的纪念Eg.He founded the charity in memory of his late wife 1.I hardly remember my grandmother.（）2.She used to ho

19、lding me on her knees and sing old songs.hold3.I was only four when she passes away.passed4.She is just a distant memory for me now.（）5.I remember my grandfather very much.6.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.7.He had a deep voice,which set

20、himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.8.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.9.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.I remember my grandfather very much.well1.考查副词：此处需要修饰的是前面的动词remember，所以要用副词we

21、ll1.I hardly remember my grandmother.（）2.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.hold3.I was only four when she passes away.passed4.She is just a distant memory for me now.（）5.I remember my grandfather very much.well6.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black

22、toward gray over the years.7.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.8.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.9.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.He was tall,with b

23、road shoulder and a beard that turned shoulders from black toward gray over the years.into/to1.Shoulder 考查名词的单复数，shoulder意思是肩膀，一般作复数形式承担，担负Eg.To shoulder the responsibility for sth.2.考查介词，此处用to与前面的from构成短语“from.to.”意为“从.到.”turn from.to/into为固定用法，意为从变为.1.I hardly remember my grandmother.（）2.She used

24、to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.hold3.I was only four when she passes away.passed4.She is just a distant memory for me now.（）5.I remember my grandfather very much.well6.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned shouldersfrom black toward gray over the years.to/into 7.He h

25、ad a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.8.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.9.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from ot

26、hers in him our small town,he was strong and powerful.and1.考查人称代词，这句话为非限制性定语从句，主语是which指代a deep voice,谓语动词为set，宾语可直接用名词的宾格，并且voice不予set构成人称上的反身关系，不能用反身代词himself。或者固定搭配：set sb.apart from.使某人脱颖而出Eg.His accent sets him apart.2.考查并列连词1.I hardly remember my grandmother.（）2.She used to holding me on her k

27、nees and sing old songs.hold3.I was only four when she passes away.passed4.She is just a distant memory for me now.（）5.I remember my grandfather very much.well6.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned shouldersfrom black toward gray over the years.to/into 7.He had a deep voice,which

28、set himself apart from others in himour small town,he was strong and powerful.and 8.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.9.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over

29、to play or do homework with me.1.考查固定搭配，in fact为“事实上，实际上”2.考查从属连词，during为“在.期间”，when为“在时候”3.Sacare sb.away 把吓跑Eg.They managed to scared the bears away.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.考查副词，never“从不”，ever“曾经，在任何时候”I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her holdkn

30、ees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is passedjust a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from well shouldersblack toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set to/intohimself apart

31、 from others in our small town,he was strong and andpowerful.In a fact he even scared my classmates away during they whencame over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known.ever近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计 设题方式设题方式试卷试卷多一词多一词()缺一词缺一词()错一词错一词(_)2009年浙江卷年浙江卷118

32、2009年辽宁卷年辽宁卷2172009年宁年宁海海卷卷1182008年宁年宁海海卷卷1182007年宁年宁海海卷卷118一、多词总 结 1、时间状语前是否多了介词。2、形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。3、固定搭配中是否多了词。4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。Look at these sentences and correct the Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.mistakes in them with the righ

33、t signs.1、We are going to have a meeting on next week.2、He is more taller than me.3、He is fond of like English.4、The boss made workers to work 10 hours a day.5、He married with a beautiful girl.二、缺词 1.名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。2.不及物动词是否缺介词。3.不定式是否漏了to.4.被动语态是否缺少了助动词be.5.习惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。Look at these sentences

34、and correct the Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.mistakes in them with the right signs.1.I met student yesterday.2.He is looking a missing book.3.He wants have a rest.4.He praised by the teacher several times5.Im looking forward your letter.三、错词 1.介词是否误用。2.动词的时态、语态是否误用。3.非谓语动词是否误用。4.主谓是否一致。5.判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。6.从句中关联词是否误用。7.代词是否误用。8.连词是否误用。短文改错口诀：动词形(动词的时态和语态错误)，名词数(名词单、复数形式的用法错误);注意形和副;非谓动词细辨别;习惯用法要记住(多词、少词和搭配错误);句子成分多分析;逻辑错误须关注。