七年级英语下册写作教程课件：Unit-12-My-busy-weekend.ppt（纯ppt,不包含音视频素材）

1、写作话题：写作话题：Weekend activities (周末活动周末活动)1.掌握以时间为主线的记叙文的写作方法。2.学习读写结合型作文的写作策略。3.学会和他人分享自己的经历，向他人表 达自己的感受。Pre-writing Writing guidelines(写作方法指导写作方法指导)1.1.记叙文的写作线索记叙文的写作线索一般叙述的线索可分为以下几种：一般叙述的线索可分为以下几种：以时间为线索，按时间的顺序来展开。以时间为线索，按时间的顺序来展开。以地点为线索，以地点的转移为顺序来以地点为线索，以地点的转移为顺序来展开。展开。以事件发展的过程为线索，或以人物出以事件发展的过程为线索，

2、或以人物出现的先后次序来展开。现的先后次序来展开。以事物的象征意义为线索来展开。以事物的象征意义为线索来展开。以人物的思想行为及认知的过程为线索以人物的思想行为及认知的过程为线索来展开。来展开。Pre-writing Writing guidelines(写作方法指导写作方法指导)2.2.记叙文的叙事方法：记叙文的叙事方法：顺叙、倒叙和插叙顺叙、倒叙和插叙Pre-writing Writing guidelines(写作方法指导写作方法指导)3.3.记叙文的写作基本过程：记叙文的写作基本过程：确定写作中心。确定写作中心。搜集拓展材料。搜集拓展材料。列出写作提纲。列出写作提纲。拓展成篇。拓展成篇

3、。4.读写结合相结合类型的写作读写结合相结合类型的写作读写相结合类型的写作，读是为了写服务的，阅读的读写相结合类型的写作，读是为了写服务的，阅读的篇章与写作的任务通常有许多的相关性。因此，要学篇章与写作的任务通常有许多的相关性。因此，要学会从以下的途径分析：会从以下的途径分析：（3）分析文本的语言特征，思考有哪些语言可以灵活）分析文本的语言特征，思考有哪些语言可以灵活迁移至自己的写作中，包括适切的词块、漂亮的句式等。迁移至自己的写作中，包括适切的词块、漂亮的句式等。（1）首先要分析阅读的主题。首先要分析阅读的主题。（2）分析文章的篇章结构，包括整篇文章的中心句分析文章的篇章结构，包括整篇文章的

4、中心句/段段、支撑句、支撑句/段，总结句段，总结句/段，同时明晰作者使用的写作方法段，同时明晰作者使用的写作方法。1 1Unit topic languages（单元话题语言）（单元话题语言）以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本话题写作相关以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本话题写作相关的词块、句子。的词块、句子。Language box（语言工具箱）（语言工具箱）名词名词/动名词词块动名词词块:living habits,Saturday morning,Saturday afternoon,Saturday night,Sunday morning,Sunday afternoon,Sunda

5、y night,the next morning(1)Chunks（词块）（词块）(1)Chunks（词块）（词块）动词词块：动词词块：go to the cinema,go boating,go camping,go to the beach,stay up late,fly a kite,take a long bus ride,put up our tent,keep sb.warm,tell each other stories介词词块：介词词块：at the Natural History Museum,on the first night,under the moon,in ord

6、er to(1)Chunks（词块）（词块）Quiz:Read aloud the chunks above and try to match the meaning by numbering.名词名词/动名词词块动名词词块:（）周六上午（）周日晚上（）第二天早上（）周日上午（）周六晚上（）周日下午（）周六下午（）生活习惯动词词块：动词词块：（）熬夜）熬夜（）放风筝）放风筝（）乘了很长时间的公交车）乘了很长时间的公交车（）搭我们的帐篷）搭我们的帐篷（）去野营）去野营（）取暖）取暖（）去沙滩）去沙滩（）去划船）去划船（）去看电影）去看电影（）在自然历史博物馆）在自然历史博物馆介词词块：介词词块：

7、（）第一天晚上）第一天晚上（）在月光下）在月光下（）在自然历史博物馆）在自然历史博物馆（）为了）为了（2）Patterns（句型）（句型）On Saturday morning,I;I visited;How+形容词形容词/副词副词!Im kind of.;I stayed up late to.(动词不定式表示目的）动词不定式表示目的）;Thats why its important to;I was so that.;I had a busy/happy/interesting/boring weekend;What a busy/happy/interesting/boring week

8、end I had!Could you tell me anything about?2.Extensive languages（拓展性语言）（拓展性语言）Famous saying，proverbs,aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、谚语、警句与经典（名言、谚语、警句与经典例句）例句）Never put off until tomorrow what you can do today!今日事今日毕。(2)Every day is a new beginning.每一天都是新的开始。(3)One days plan stars with t

9、he morning.一日之计在于晨。(4)Actions speak louder than words.行动胜于言辞。(5)Better late than never.迟做总比不做好。(6)The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.(Franklin Roosevelt,American president)实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。(美国总统 罗斯福.F.)(7)Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass

10、.（J.Ruskin）生活而无目标，犹如航海之无指南针。(鲁斯金)(8)Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow.(Emerson,American thinker)进步是今天的活动、明天的保证。(美国思想家爱默生)(9)Do one thing at a time,and do well.一次只做一件事，做到最好！(10)The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。What activity can you see?playplayeded badminton badm

11、intonwentwent boating boatingWhat activity can you see?went went to the cinemato the cinemawent went to the beachto the beachdid did my homeworkmy homeworkwent went fishingfishingGroup-work:故事接龙故事接龙（每个组员轮流说一个句子，注意开头、结（每个组员轮流说一个句子，注意开头、结尾、内容的完整、相关时间副词及连接词的尾、内容的完整、相关时间副词及连接词的运用，使内容更完整、语言更流畅优美。）运用，使内容更

12、完整、语言更流畅优美。）S1:I had a busy weekend.S2:In the morning,I got up at 6:30.S3:After that,I brushed my teeth.S4:Then,.S5:.S6:.Guided reading(导读导读):ReadingAnna is a middle school student.Something happened to her yesterday.Lets find out what the fact was.Yesterday Anna got up at half past six.She was in a

13、 hurry to take a shower and have breakfast.She hurried to school by bus.To her surprise,when she got to school,she didnt see any of her classmates.What was going on?She thought for a moment and then she realized it was Sunday and no one needed to go to school.ReadingAnna didnt want to go back home s

14、oon.So she called her friends out to have fun in the park nearby.They had a picnic since some of her friends took some food and drinks with them.They also flew a kite and told stories under the tree.After that,Annas best friend Jenny gave her a ride home.When it came to nine oclock,Anna was too tire

15、d to stay awake.So she went to bed early.She felt tired but happy.Task1 按照事情发展的过程用数字标上序号。按照事情发展的过程用数字标上序号。（）Anna went back home.（）Anna had fun with her friends.（）Anna got up early.（）Anna got to school by bus.（）Anna went to bed.42315Task2 信息归纳：请阅读下面有关幸福的文章，信息归纳：请阅读下面有关幸福的文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。根据所提供的信息，完

16、成下面表格。Information CardWhen did Anna get up in the morning?1.What day was it yesterday?2.Where did Anna play with her friends?3.What did Anna do with her friends?4.How did Anna feel?5.At half past six.Sunday.In the park nearby.Had a picnic,flew a kite and told stories.Tired but happy.Good words and p

17、hrases from the passage _Task3 好词好句好词好句Good sentences from the passage _Task4 Talk about your last weekend with your partner.假如你是Anna的好朋友Jenny,你度过了一个忙碌而有趣的周末。请以“My Busy Weekend”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，向大家介绍一下你上周末的活动，可适当发挥。内容包括：1.周六，你到了奶奶家探访；2.周日，你和Anna到了公园玩耍；3.你对上个周末的感受如何。Step1 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）（想一想，

18、填一填）审题审题体裁：体裁：_人称：人称：_时态：时态：_第一人称第一人称 一般过去时一般过去时记叙文记叙文以以“My Busy Weekend”为题为题1.总起概括总起概括2.周六活动周六活动3.周日活动周日活动4.个人的感受个人的感受EndingStep2 Structurize（列一列（列一列）BodybeginningStep3 Write（写一写）（写一写）用词方面用词方面:代词主格代词主格,宾格；宾格；名词单复数；名词单复数；动词搭配；副词位置动词搭配；副词位置 句子方面句子方面:篇章方面篇章方面:细节方面细节方面:句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；连词使

19、用连词使用内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理 单词拼写；标点符号；大小写单词拼写；标点符号；大小写 Step 4-Check（查一查）（查一查）Appreciating&Evaluating 欣赏与评价欣赏与评价请交换习作互相欣赏，用请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔红笔划出对方划出对方的亮点的亮点,并对并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。不足的地方进行适当修改。你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？更好呢？根据根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。的习作打分。请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，请和同伴

20、交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。作打分。S Step5tep5 同伴互赏同伴互赏我欣赏，我快乐！我欣赏，我快乐！修改习作时可使用这些符号：修改习作时可使用这些符号：优美句子；优美句子；漏词漏词；错处：；错处：；删除；删除；语法错误语法错误 G；人称错误人称错误 P；时态错误时态错误 T；拼写错误拼写错误Sp 项目项目标准标准自我评价自我评价 同伴评价同伴评价 教师评价教师评价结构结构（3分）分）段落合理段落合理（2 分）分）衔接自然衔接自然 (1分分)内容内容（8分）分）要 点要 点全面全面周六活动（周六活动（2分

21、）分）周日活动（周日活动（2分）分）感受（感受（2分）分）拓展合理拓展合理 (2分分)语言语言（3分）分）词汇丰富词汇丰富 (1分分)句法正确句法正确，语言优美，语言优美(2分分)卷面卷面（1分）分）书写工整（书写工整（1分）分）评分表评分表I had a busy weekend last week.On Saturday,I visited my grandma who lives in a small town far from my home.She cooked quite a lot of delicious food for me.I helped my grandma feed

22、 chickens,water the flowers.My grandma has a cute dog called Lucky.I walked him around the town.And then I went back home at night.The next day was Sunday.I got up early to do my homework.The early bird catches the worm.As soon as I finished my homework,I got a call from my best friend Anna.She aske

23、d me to play in the park nearby.I took the food made by my grandma there.And we really had a good time.We had a picnic,flew a kite and told stories to each other.She told me something interesting that made me laugh.In the afternoon,I took her back to her home on my bike.How busy but happy I was!结尾句用

24、感叹结尾句用感叹句，不落俗套。句，不落俗套。“as soon as”引导的引导的状语从句状语从句文中分别用文中分别用“who”、“that”引导了两个不引导了两个不同的定语从句。同的定语从句。后置定语结构：后置定语结构：a cute dog called Lucky“The early bird catches the worm”谚语的运用，体现做功课谚语的运用，体现做功课的好处。的好处。My Busy Weekend Did you have a busy weekend like me last week?I had a busy weekend.Let me tell you somet

25、hing about it.I have a grandma and I miss her for a long time.So last Saturday I decided to visit her.She was happy and I cleaned her house and cooked dinner with her.To thank me,she took me out for a movie.When we went out of the cinema,it was dark and I had to take a taxi to go back home.On Sunday

26、 morning,I went shopping with my mom.My best friend Anna gave me a call nearly at noon.So I took some food and drink to the park.We had a picnic.We also flew a kite.Finally,we were tired,we sat under the tree to tell stories.We really enjoyed ourselves.My last weekend was quite busy,wasnt it?用时间状语从句

27、用时间状语从句“when we went out of”描述了回描述了回家的过程。家的过程。用一般疑问句用一般疑问句“Did you have a busy weekend like me last week?”开头，用反义疑问句开头，用反义疑问句“My last weekend was quite busy,wasnt it?”作为结尾，作为结尾，带有强烈的感情色彩带有强烈的感情色彩作者的自我感作者的自我感受受利用动词不定式来表利用动词不定式来表目的目的“to thank me,she took me利用利用“and，so,also,finally”等来等来衔接句子，不显得衔接句子，不显得突兀。突兀。Summary How to write an article about the weekend.2.Learn some of the writing skills.写写 查查想想 列列评评The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。Rewrite your article.