十一届全国英语优质课Thank-you-notes-post-writing-modification课件.ppt

1、Thank-You NotesPost-Writing ModificationMr.Yang won the first placeWhat shouldMr.Yang say to the peoplewho helped him?PreparationNOPreparationOlympic WinnersPreparationthe story of the winnersPreparationJenny the Olympic winnerPreparation Dear Mom,When I was four,I started to learn skating.At first,

2、it was difficult.I fell down again and again.Sometimes I wanted to give up.But you cheered me up and taught me,“Falling only makes us stronger.”Your words were good for me.Finally,I became the winner.With your love,I could be successful.Yours,JennyJennys thank-you notePreparation When I was four,I s

3、tarted to learn skating.At first,it was difficult.I fell down again and again.Sometimes I wanted to give up.But you cheered me up and taught me,“Falling only makes us stronger.”Your words were good for me.Finally,I became the winner.With your love,I could be successful.Pay attention to the content.c

4、ontent(内容)Dear Mom,Yours,JennyPreparation When I was four,I started to learn skating.At first,it was difficult.I fell down again and again.Sometimes I wanted to give up.But you cheered me up and taught me,“Falling only makes us stronger.”Your words were good for me.Finally,I became the winner.With y

5、our love,I could be successful.Thanksgiving Day is coming soon.Thank you.Thanks again.I love you.I wish you all the best.I want to tell the world Im so happy now.Better the layoutConstructionBody:StoryBeginning:ThanksEnding:Thanks&WishesConstructionBetter the layout.More logical!Easier to understand

6、.Make feelings stronger Construction Thanksgiving Day is coming soon.Thank you so much.When I was four,I started to learn skating.At first,it was quite difficult.I fell down again and again.Sometimes I even wanted to give up.But you cheered me up and taught me,“Falling only makes us stronger.”Your w

7、ords were like the brightest stars in the dark sky.Finally,I became the winner.Without your love,I could not be successful.Thanks again.I love you.I wish you all the best.Find out the differences Thanksgiving Day is coming soon.Thank you.When I was four,I started to learn skating.At first,it was dif

8、ficult.I fell down again and again.Sometimes I wanted to give up.But you cheered me up and taught me,“Falling only makes us stronger.”Your words were good for me.Finally,I became the winner.With your love,I could be successful.Thanks again.I love you.I wish you all the best.Passage 1Underlinediffere

9、nt sentencesin 1 minute.Passage 2ConstructionWhich has stronger feelings?Thank you.Thank you so much.It was difficult.It was quite difficult.Passage 1Passage 1Passage 2Passage 2Sometimes I wantedto give up.Sometimes I even wanted to give up.Your words were good for me.Your words were like the bright

10、est stars in the dark sky.With your love,I could be successful.Without your love,I couldnt be successful.Construction 1.Discuss what makes the feeling stronger?2.Replace(替换)the underlined words.Group WorkGroup WorkConstructionWhat makes the feeling stronger?Thank you.Thank you so much.+adv.PKConstru

11、ctionIt was difficult.It was quite difficult.What makes the feeling stronger?PK+adv.ConstructionSometimes I wantedto give up.Sometimes I even wanted to give up.What makes the feeling stronger?PK+adv.ConstructionYour words were good for me.Your words were like the brightest stars in the dark sky.Simi

12、le(比喻)What makes the feeling stronger?PKConstructionWith your love,I could be successful.Without your love,I couldnt be successful.Doublenegative(双重否定)What makes the feeling stronger?PKConstructionEverything is possible.Nothing is impossible.Doublenegative(双重否定)PKConstructionSummaryHow to make feeli

13、ngs stronger?l adverb(加副词)l simile(用比喻)l double negative(用双重否定)l Construction1.Write a beginning and an ending.2.Modify the note to make feelings stronger.simileadverbdoublenegativeDear English teacher,_ In Grade Seven,my English was bad.I was afraid to speak English and got bad grades.I was upset.Y

14、ou told me,“Be brave and active in class.”But it was difficult for me to do that.And you said,“Everybody can learn English well with hard work.Just smile to difficulties!”Your love was great.Then,I spent much time on English study.At last,I improved._ Yours,LeeProduction1.Share your ideas.2.Choose t

15、he best to show.simileadverbdouble negativeDear English teacher,_ In Grade Seven,my English was bad.I was afraid to speak English and got bad grades.I was upset.You told me,“Be brave and active in class.”But it was difficult for me to do that.And you said,“Everybody can learn English well with hard

16、work.Just smile to difficulties!”Your love was great.Then,I spent much time on English study.At last,I improved._ Yours,LeeProductionShow TimeBe brave!ProductionWho else do youwant to thank?ProductionProductionProductionHomework1.1.Think about more ways to Think about more ways to beautify the language.beautify the language.2.2.Write a thank-you note Write a thank-you note to anyone to anyone youd like to thank youd like to thank.Production