人教新教材必修一Unit2Travelling-around-Reading-for-Writing公开课优质获奖课件.pptx

1、Reading for WritingUnit 2 Travelling AroundLead inHow to write to your friend an impressive travel plan?What kinds of aspects should be included?Paragraph 1:main purpose for the trip _Paragraph 2:other plans for the trip_ _ Read to discover details Read Richards email to his friend and the brochure

2、that he found silently and solve the task below.go to Xian to see the Terracotta Armygo to the Shaanxi History Museum,the Xian City Wall,and a few other famous sightsParagraph 3:transport_ _Paragraph 4:final thoughts _ Read to discover details Read Richards email to his friend and the brochure that

3、he found silently and solve the task below.take the train,leaven the day before the October holiday begins and arrive at 9:30 a.m.write again soon and send photos.Read to underline the words and phrases used to express emotion in the email.Then complete the sentences below.It is amazing sight.It is

4、_.I am amazed.Its almost unbelievable.I cant _.Its hard _.Its an _ story.amazingbelieve itto believeunbelievableWrite a travel planPretend you are Xiao Li and reply to Richards email.范文：Dear Richard，I am pretty thrilled to have received your letter,knowing that you are touring Xian,which is an amazi

5、ng choice.Im writing to you about my travelling plan for the coming vacation.I,together with my parents intend to go to Shandong Province because I there are lots of striking scenic spots to explore there.If we go,we will have an active holiday climbing Mount Tai.Besides,we can explore famous lakes

6、and springs in Jinan.Moreover,we can also visit Qufu,where Confucius was buried.I think we will enjoy our stay there.we plan to travel 5 days and 4 nights.It costs only 1300 yuan per person.It sounds great,doesnt it?Looking forward to your coming and receiving your pictures.Love,Xiao Li 旅游计划是一种常见的应用

7、文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型，因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。常规的旅游计划需要明确以下几个方面的问题:写法指导Travel planWhen will you leave for？Where is your destination?How will you get there?What will you do there?How long will you there?Is there a clear purpose for the trip?为了提升旅行计划的层级，还需注意以下几个方面的问题:1.每段是否有明确清晰的主题;2.用一般现在时代替一般将

8、来时:3.用更高级的形容词词汇。例如:表达“好”时，不要总用“nice”,我们还可以用“smart,clean,excellent,exciting,beautiful,wonderful,clever,famous,grand”等表达更具有指向性的同汇:4.用更高级的动词词汇。比如:我们可以用“seem stand,lie,get,stay,remain,look,sound,become,keep,grow“等代替“be”;5.所有“专有名词”要大写:6.文章最后要有适当的总结性语言。常用短语place of interest名胜古迹tourist attractions旅游景点histo

9、ric sites 历史遗迹must-see attractions必看景点go on a holiday/take a vacation去度假check in登记人住check out结账退房学常用短语enjoy the scenery of nature欣赏自然美景go sightseeing观光feel like doing sth.想要做某事be prepared to do sth,准备做某事mean/intend/plan to do sth.打算/计划做某事decide/be determined to do sth.决定做某事look forward to doing sth,

10、盼望做某事long/hope/wish/want to do sth,渴望/希望/想做某事wish sb.a pleasant journey祝某人旅途愉快学常用句式When we are tired from work,why not stop and go out to enjoy当我们因工作而感到疲惫时，为什么不走出As far as Im concerned,the trip is very meaningful.据我所知，该旅行十分有意义。On the one hand,we can.On the other hand,it will help us 一方面，我们可以另一方面，它可以

11、帮助我们The place where well.is我们地方超巩 固 提巩 固 提升升假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想在暑假到中国旅游，请你为他做一个旅行计划,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。Dear Mike,Im delighted to receive your letter,asking for help to travel inLooking forward to your coming!Yours,Li Hua 【参考范文参考范文】Dear Mike,Im delight

12、ed to receive your letter,asking for help to travel in Beijing.In my opinion,the Great Wall is the first choice for you,which is one of the Seven Wonders of the World.If you come to Beijing without climbing the Great Wall,its just like going to Paris without visiting the Eiffel Tower.Besides this,yo

13、ud better enjoy Chinese opera and Chinese folk music,which will surely help you understand Chinese culture more deeply.These activities take about two days.If you need more help,I can show you around other places of interest.Looking forward to your coming!Yours,Li Hua【参考范文参考范文】【名师点评】本文格式准确、要点齐全、结构完整

14、、层次清晰。尤其是关联词语的运用恰到好处，使整个语篇结构紧凑。叙述具体、语言得当，逻辑通顺，具有很强的感染力。高级词汇 delighted choice enjoy surely deeply.精 彩 短 语和关联词Im delighted In my opinion the first choice for youBesides this help you understand Chinese culture more deeply show you around other places of interest looking forward to增分句型Im delighted to receive your letter,asking for help to travel in Beijing.In my opinion,the Great Wall is the first choice for you,which is one of the Seven Wonders of the World.【词句品鉴】Thank you!